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Reviews for Afterparty

By : Darkprism
  • From koorineko on February 26, 2014
    "'Mmhm.' Kisuke's hands stroked apart the silk shirt, running along skin as smooth as the fabric that covered hard pecs. Circling sure palms over dark nipples, Kisuke watched Byakuya's face. 'I've seen you watching me, strung up and undone, and I have enjoyed wondering what you were like under those perfect suits and alabaster masks.'"

    This has to be my favorite line in a story ever and I am so curious as to what happened during that particular Scene. Hell, I am itcing to write it now, but I am afraid to butcher it. Is it wrong of me to read fictions instead of doing actual work, while being at work?
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  • From wolfkin59 on April 03, 2012
    I love this.
    The intricacy of the relationships, the shared history, the emotions...it all makes the whole story blend wonderfully.
    Very well done. :)
    If you want to talk with me more, PM me on the AFFnet forum and I'll give you my email address. I don't tend to do LJ or much of anything else, sorry. Mostly I email, text, or PM.
    May the words just flow,
    Cuzosu
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  • From ShinaRyun on March 26, 2012
    I've read all of your Bleach-based work, and I must say, i'm quite impressed. Your talent for mixing extraordinarily heated sexual moments with biting humor is striking and leaves me, at least, hungry for each new sentence. The AU you've created here, in Closet Games and in Getaway makes for an intriguing backdrop for each character's personality and individual flavor, well-fleshed even with so few characters taking significant roles within it and a handful of other characters mentioned. The sex can be slightly confusing to read through, but I believe that's more my inability to visualize four such sexy men as these naked and entangled without sprouting a blooming nosebleed than any lapse in writing talent on your part.
    The characters you have recreated through your fics are stellar and quite becoming; it sent a thrill through me to see that you had added a story incorporating the romantic interests of both Getaway and Closet Games in one...and tickled me to no end, imagining Renji's expression when he finally got to hear Kisuke's unconventional sex-talk.
    Please, keep up the excellent writing; this is one fan who will always come back for more.
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  • From YoukaiLady on March 23, 2012
    Just amazing =)
    I never thought of Shuu and Kisuke as of a couple, but I love the way you write them. Also I´m really happy you hid a little ShuuRen in there, I have a weak spot for them
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  • From YoukaiLady on March 22, 2012
    That was friggin awesome! Really, I guess I had never ever read something so HOT!
    I can´t wait for more!!
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