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Reviews for Lazy Bastard

By : Raceysama
  • From lara5170 on July 18, 2011
    This was really good, oddly sudden & left me dying to read more,to see what,if anything more,was going to happen with them.
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  • From MishiLoki on April 09, 2011
    Haha! He slept at the end. How funny. MEANS ICHIGO SEX WAS BORING! But it wasnt. :troolfayceinsertedhere:
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  • From ANON - Althydia on April 07, 2011
    Car sex sounds quite uncomfortable... but that was hot. Stark is one sexy - if lazy - man. Would he have ever made a move if Ichigo hadn't? His laziness could become a problem if they decide to try for a relationship. And Ichigo was quite lucky his crazy dad didn't decide to come out and see who was in the car stationed in front of their house. I don't know how he would have reacted...
    Nice story!
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  • From ANON - Mii-chan on April 07, 2011
    wow, i love it. kinda quirky kinda sweet and veeerrryyy hot lol. ano my only critic would be the amount of italic, probably its just me being bias, but i think it may be more effective to use italic to only emphasise a few key sentences or words that are miles from each other, it may add more drama/depth?.....maybe thats just my personal preference and i'm no writer so i can't really judge >.< keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Stacy on March 30, 2011
    I love stark!! I hope you write more yummy stories!
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