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Reviews for The Bully

By : debee10
  • From AidaLily on January 03, 2011
    Well I re-read the first story and read the other two.

    1. The Bully - I read this one a while ago, I believe and I liked the other ending better. This ending wasn't bad at all, I just preferred that one. I am not a huge fan of the GrimmIchi pairing (or IchiGrimm in this case), however the story enjoyable to read.

    2. The Chase- Oh dear lord...Renji should speak french and screw Hisagi all the time. (I'm not even a big fan of that pairing lol) I must say at the beginning/middle of it, Shuuhei had nerves of steel because if I was him, I wouldn't have needed to be tied up with Renji talking like that. (I also for some reason imagined Renji with Gambit's (X-men) voice. *shrugs*)

    3. The Woman Scorned - You know I would have killed them too...for not letting me join or watch. Anyway, I love Ukitake and you killed him. Still, its almost like I feel bad for Retsu. Falling in love only to be betrayed. If he had told her before I wouldn't feel bad for her, but he kept it a secret. Even though you made the killing scene actually really really sad, I believe I was the most sad at the end when she gave Byakuya the look that said killing her husband and his lover was worth it.

    If you are still looking for pairings, try Muramasa/Ulquiorra (cant help it I love them and no it isn't a cross over), Byakuya/Ishida or Renji...Ukitake/Byakuya works nicely too, Ikkaku or Kenpachi and Yumichika...also a fun one to do is Gin/Toshiro. Well I look forward to more great job!
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  • From FlyinGShadoW1314 on December 24, 2010
    Hee, that was good. :D I like the idea of Renji speakin' French~But why did ya change the ending to 'The Bully'? I liked the other ending. It was cuute. D:
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  • From misswarchan on December 11, 2010
    ...I'm kinda confused...rape solves all? Rather odd, backwards thinking that is. Though I liked the idea of angry-in the closet!Ichigo/uke!Grimmjow...the ending seemed like a drop off to me, like there should have been more to this story then a 'wham-bam-thank you-sam.'

    I'm not saying/typing this to be negative or anything, I think you have a good potential plot in this honestly.
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  • From gypsygrrl420 on December 11, 2010
    Huh. That's a first...Ichigo being the bully. Not bad at all, and I look forward to reading more of your work. Are you gonna continue the Bullying theme with your one-shots? Cause if so? Renji bullying Shuuhei? (Hi--I'm such a Shuuhei fan, and making him hurt is what I love best). Anyhow, good job!
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