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Reviews for Altering Intentions

By : zhanghii
  • From MarCapuNava on October 23, 2012
    I so luved ur story! Wishing you will update soon! so well writen!
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  • From AmandaBMor on January 13, 2011
    I felt the tension and I just felt everything as the words flowed like honey. It is suspenseful in that you make them vulnerable whilst still being who they are. Bravo! Very well done.
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  • From mhmartini on April 18, 2010
    I like it. You have a descriptive way of writing, and you describe very well some things commonly seen in the anime (Grimmjow's shoulders moving when he walks, for example). You make these things, exaggerated as they are in the television show, seem natural in the flow of the story, and that makes it very easy for your reader to picture what is happening. I also really like how you are exploring the feelings Grimmjow is experiencing. Your style makes it easy to believe and flows well. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
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