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Reviews for Kiss and Control

By : orionshadow
  • From 9592 on February 19, 2021

    hjk


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  • From Jana80 on January 11, 2019

    I love byakuya/rangiku pairings because they are soo different.  Please continue...seems like you are just getting warmed up!


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  • From Silent Pluto on October 27, 2018

    niiiiice!!!!


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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2018

    Hey can  I be in this story


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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2018

    Hey can  I be in this story


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  • From ANON - Luna on April 20, 2014
    this is so interesting i adore the story line so far this is my first time reading a RanXBak fanfiction and you have made me fall in love with this pairing so thanks for that i really hope you update soon because this story is fantastic
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  • From Raymy on March 26, 2013
    I have enjoyed all your Bleach stories and it is always worth the wait to read the next chapter. I didn't review this one last time I read it and decided I had to start from the beginning this time to get it wholly back into my mind. I read all the way through, without stopping, and found it easy to do so. You have a gift in expressing the subtleties of the characters. I mean: the phrasing and word choices. Also, the intricacies of their minds. Your method of weaving a believable and engaging story by taking care with every step and reinforcing important details makes reading it more than a pleasurable experience. I find myself pausing to reflect and converse with myself, only to resume quickly, as I'm eager to delve into your imagination.

    Byakuya is so focused on control that he isolates himself, putting up barriers to understanding other people. He seems quite clueless as to how to interpret others emotions and doesn't want to even try. Rukia, Renji, and now Rangiku are all treated as planets in his orbit and he has no ability to enter their sphere from a non-judgemental or selfless position. However, he shows signs of being capable of altruism, but he must overcome his belief that control, duty and obligation should take priority in his life. Rangiku, on the other hand, seems to over interpret other's actions or emotions. She's highly sensitive and attempts to hide from intimate interactions that might cause her pain. She is not as successful as Byakuya at putting up a wall and has more daily struggle to maintain her facade. It is an interesting pairing and I'm intrigued to see how you move them toward each other, while maintaining their inner issues.
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  • From ANON - TheReader on December 07, 2012
    This is such a wonderful and original concept, I hope you continue it soon
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  • From ANON - TheReader on December 07, 2012
    This is such a lovely piece, I like the setting and the whole pairing. There's also subtle humor which is quite amusing.
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  • From ANON - Tete on May 24, 2012
    I have to say this is the first great story of these two characters that i have seen. you really captured them and even the support characters. this is awesome
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  • From ANON - makochan9 on April 22, 2012
    Very interesting story, while I love Different Circumstances, this could prove to be just as entertaining.
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  • From ANON - cinnamongrrl on April 12, 2012
    Enjoying this story, hope to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - Kyradda on March 27, 2011
    Poor matsamoto! I think the poor dear is going to go grey with stress!! Great story like all your work is.
    Can't wait for more,
    your fan Kyradda.
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  • From Anithene on March 26, 2011
    I'm so glad to see you updated! I've enjoyed every chapter so far. You really have a grasp on the characters. I'm also relieved to finally see some Byakuya het. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks!
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  • From Erosu787 on September 22, 2010
    Honestly you have to update this fantastic story, I am dying to know what is next, your one of my favorite authors, you make crack pairings realistic enough so that they can be cannon. I strive to write like you, your prose is an inspiration. Please don't let this fic go.
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