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Reviews for Twin Blossoms

By : NovaAlexandria
  • From MindlessMina on June 14, 2015
    Oh my!!! I absolutely LOVED those!!! Good God I am dying for a continuation of the first one and more from the second!!!! That is surely one different pairing but it was freaking amazing!!! I soooo wish that you can continue them someday!!
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  • From ANON - RukiaTheCat on December 05, 2012
    Not to offend your friend Lazes, but I prefer your story, Nova. You made me fall in love with Byahime with your last tale. Write more about them, please!
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  • From ANON - Aviary on April 10, 2012
    I loved your one shots you two! I would love to see Soi-fon and someone I think she would be interesting paired with someone. Maybe even an arrancar. Perhaps she would grow out of her infactuation with Yourichi or used to someone else to feel more strongly for them then Yourichi. I don't know who she would paired with though. It's be interesting to see Gin with someone and Isane as well.
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  • From ANON - nypsy on August 28, 2011
    this was one of the most smoldering lime scenes i've ever read--it was really really sexy! i adore byahime pairing despite how little fanfic there is for it. realize this is from a long time ago, but if you still write on this site, it would be great to continue this into a more complete fic (or just a complete lemon scene w/suggestion of a future relationship). i'll admit is skipped most of the beginning given the reference to ichiruki, which i hate. just jumped till i could see it was just ori & bya, so can't comment on early content, but i could believe their attraction to each other & belief that it was something never to be. hope to read more byahime from you in future.
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  • From Bleachwhore on December 14, 2010
    Thats so sad! Poor Hime, going years and years without her sexy husband touching her. Imagine waiting that long before giving your beautiful wife her first kiss! i liked the first story much better, very sweet, and also steamy
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on August 28, 2010
    wow! that was the steamiest depiction of foreplay/oral I've ever read, and thank you for not being vulgar. That was HOT and had emotion and was beautifully written. Too bad it stops where it does, but then, maybe we readers might explode if we got to read of the full encounter. Especially liked how bya regarded this as the beginning of something more, as opposed to a booty call... thx.
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  • From ANON - mel on May 22, 2010
    Really good stories. Two different takes were very intriguing.
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  • From ANON - Hesunohana on May 05, 2010
    I prefer the first OS. Orihime is less herself in the second.
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  • From ANON - plumbum on January 19, 2010
    I throughly enjoyed both pieces, as they were written beautifully. I imagine writing this pairing was extremely hard, so kudos. :)
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  • From Poetlover on January 19, 2010
    That was amazing! I loved both of them. I liked the pairing, and can understand why it would be difficult to write, but you both did a wonderful job of it. I would love to read more of this pairing and even other pairings as well. Great job!!
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  • From ANON - lola.g99 on January 19, 2010
    The only critique I would give would be that there are some spelling errors. Thy should be thigh and you use threw when you should use through, they sound the same but have different meanings. Example: he ran his fingers through her hair versus he threw the ball. Other than those very minor complaints your story is one of my favorite Byakuya stories I've read. He shows so little of what is going on in his head in the anime and manga I imagine that he might be a difficult character to write, but I think you did a good job of keeping him and the other characters believable.
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  • From JOler on January 18, 2010
    Actually I love how you both handled the pairing. Hmmm ... another pairing? Mel and Ichigo? or maybe Grimjow and Yorouichi (and not just because of some catnip)? maybe Uryu and Rengeku? would really like to see Toshiro be stationed in the real world on a somewhat permanent status and have several girls fauning over him ... hmmm ... wonder what grade he'd be assigned to since he really doesn't look old enough for high school (lol - bet he'd still go for Karin)? If you really want a challenge you might consider this though it would probably be better for a slightly longer fic ... or maybe in an AU after the winter war and most of the Espada are captured alive .. wonder if Rengeku would treat them as her own private harem ... as part of the deal to keep them alive ... just to keep her from distracting all the other eligible males in the Soul Society ...

    Ok ... well ... you are probably treading water by now ... wondering if the flood of laughter at the suggestions will ever subside.

    Great oneshots,
    mofaf1
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  • From ANON - NightQueen on January 18, 2010
    WOW!! I know this pairing might be hard to write but I really love them! I think you both did and amazing job and I can't wait to read the full length fic! Fabulous work!
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