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Reviews for Freedom Lost With Our Innocence

By : orionshadow
  • From orionshadow on January 01, 2010
    I accidentally deleted this review so I am now replacing it.
    Body of review from Yatzuaka follows:

    Just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this- wasn't really expecting to given that Kiyone is my least favorite character (tied with the dreaded Momo) in your series. You didn't really change my opinion of her, but you still managed to write a compelling look at how her and Byakuya ended up having that one night together. It fits well with the rest of the story, but stands alone as a excellent piece of work, as well.

    Thanks for sharing~
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  • From ANON - Kashima on December 19, 2009
    Its interesting this is a couple that i in no way approve of but i found myself very drawn and pleased with the story. Byakuya kuchiki is easily one of my favorite characters in all of bleach due to his complex nature and i have to say you captured his inner struggles and turmoils with this situation very well which is something every other author i have ever read has failed to do. I find it interesting that you chose kiyone out of all possible females but it makes sense as it would have to be someone that was slightly obsessed because it was obvious that she was the one who pursued the one night stand. The story is bittersweet because both parties got less than what they wanted and more than they wanted to walk away with. I greatly applaud you for this story and i think out of all of your one shots this is easily my favorite. As always keep up the good work.
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