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Reviews for Do Words Make a Bit of Difference?

By : Yatzuaka
  • From ANON - Bill on December 21, 2009
    Yes, I was also worried that it was the last chapter. Please please keep continuing! I look forward to your updates every week. It's good to see Renji moving up the ladder lol
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  • From on December 17, 2009
    OHH GOODNESS I CAN BREATHE! I loved chapter 13 but the more I read it the more it felt like it could possibly be THE FINAL CHAPTER, so I quite literally held my breath and was relieved to see your note at the end, good god, gotta catch my breath here.. you almost killed me! very interesting to pull it all ahead and to the current(?), and as always, poor Renji! I feel so bad for him here. Always waiting for more! /highfive.
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  • From ANON - Bill on December 16, 2009
    You always leave me shouting "NOOOOO" everytime Renji says goodbye rukia!!! I'm such an avid RenRuki fan! I love how you've managed to narrate through Renji's point of view during this part of the series. Very creative!

    About Zaraki and Orihime, eeeh, it feels kind of weird. I don't remember many instances in the plot where they were in contact enough to really start a relationship - much less get married :x lol. But hey, you're an awesome writer so you could probably make anything work. Good job, I support you!
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  • From on December 12, 2009
    Wow! every time you come out with a new chapter you make me have a new favorite chapter LOL, 12 was excellent! I really appreciate you taking the time to go through the general Bleach story but from Renji's point of view, it's just fantastic. I'm glad we're review buddies, your reviews make my day too :D

    Oh and I must note how glad I am for this fic because it is MALE/FEMALE! get kind of tired refreshing the main page to see it flooded with the [Yaoi] tag, lol. Not that I dislike Yaoi, I love men so I suppose the more the merrier but being a girl myself, it's more enjoyable to read the male/female stories, ha.

    And I love Zaraki a ton too, OH THAT'S RIGHT, your wedding idea.. gosh.. hmm.. Zaraki and Inoue is a bit of an odd paring but I have ran that scenario though my head as well, other odd parings or ideas.. let's see.. Retsu Unohana and Mayuri Kurotsuchi? OH MAN that's a big fat LOL cause have you seen how much they've been bickering in the manga/filler anime lately? it's hilarious. How about.. Isane Kotetsu and.. uh, Shuhei..? no, maybe.. TETSUZAEMON! hahaha.. I'm sorry I don't have any better ideas, trying to help but I feel I'm not that smart/creative, can't wait to see what you come up with though.
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  • From Areitus on December 06, 2009
    This is an awesome fic. I really like how you portray Renji. He's in character, but you make it so much more in depth. You can really understand the turmoil he's going through, just pining for her affection and the hopelessness he feels. I am a huge Renji/Rukia fan and it's so hard to find good fics these days it seems, but you have definitely made it into my top faves list with this one. Keep it up! I'll just keep coming back for more!
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  • From ANON - Bill on December 06, 2009
    Awesome work! I've been checking back periodically just to see if you've updated. Your portrayal of Renji and Rukia's relationship is spot on! Your writing makes me really pity Renji :( Poor guy.
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  • From on December 05, 2009
    Wow chapter 11 was sweet and sexy at the same time, I really like Rukia, she and Renji just seem made for each other. Very glad you got your internet back, I know how much it sucks to lose it.
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  • From on December 01, 2009
    I really liked chapter 10! this fic is such a treat, I'd been busy for awhile (pardon my absence) then I remembered "Omg there's that awesome Renji/Rukia fic!" so really your writing is a huge treat. I feel like I've hit a block with my own writing though, I don't know where to go! which is why I haven't been able to update yet, darn it =(
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  • From MissAsuka on November 29, 2009
    I can't wait for your next installment!
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  • From MissAsuka on November 29, 2009
    I like what you did with the classes and such! It fits perfectly with what you're doing. This is so wonderful so far. One can't help but feel the hurt Renji is feeling by being torn from Rukia. So very well done!!
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  • From ANON - Emcielle on November 19, 2009
    I really love your take on Renji and Rukia's back history so far and am looking forward to more chapters soon! I am also so pleased to finally be able to find a RenRuki fic that is so well written as well as being decently long! (I sometimes feel like multi-chaptered epic fics are becoming a dying breed.) You convey Renji's emotions so beautifully well that it's really easy to empathize with him. During his separation from Rukia, I could also feel the yearning to see her again and when a scene came that she would make a reappearance in, I could feel the same elation Renji must have had as well. I hope that more of Rukia's true feelings start to surface in the future, as her constantly seeking Renji out just to dash off again after giving him some kind of hope is making me so frustrated! However, "The course of true love never did run smooth."

    Will you be adding in any more of the other Bleach cast? I kinda would like to see Renji be able to discuss his predicament with Kira, Ikkaku, and/or Shuuhei. (Bromance camaraderie makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!) Will Renji address Rukia's tie with Ichigo at all either? On a side note, I loved seeing the almost "human" side of Byakuya as he gave his condolences to Renji for being spurned by Rukia. It was very cute, or as cute as uptight, prissy, overly-formal Byakuya can be!

    Please keep updating more chapters to this story! I'll be looking forward to them!
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  • From on November 15, 2009
    Chapter 8, another wonderful chapter. Absolutely love the fight-to-fuck thing here, it was so fitting, so perfect. Goodness, I'll join you in a cigarette after reading this too. Woo~!
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  • From Polymer on November 12, 2009
    I really admire the way you use words to paint a picture. You really give us amazing insight into what makes Renji and Rukia who they are in a believable way.

    I think my favorite part was how Renji held off taking her virginity in chapter six. It showed a huge amount of self restraint. As well as a huge amount of respect for her and her way of life as it is now as a noble. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From on November 12, 2009
    Really I'm still the only one to review this masterpiece? it's so well written! it's a complete and total delight to read, you really write Renji and Rukia so well.

    [ “I’ll always be your friend.” The words tasted like ashes in my mouth, but I somehow managed to say them without vomiting or bursting into tears like a sissy. ]

    That line right there made me cry and laugh at the same time, but goodness keep up the marvelous work.
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  • From on November 08, 2009
    Wonderful wonderful wonderful! so wonderful it brought tears to my eyes! it's so well written! I love it and would fully approve of more chapters! can't wait to see what comes next.
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