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Reviews for Bitter Sweet

By : Tiptipnaway
  • From ANON - Lanen on November 11, 2009
    Ah....GinxMomo.

    You know, I wrote this whole paragraph trying to describe what I thought of GinxMomo only to look up at the title and go....uh, well I be damned....bitter sweet. Yeah for the delete key lol.

    Anyways, the style of your story is pretty rough, but in my opinion, it takes guts to write this pairing. I say that because its not easy to put them together. There's not too many ways to write this pair without it being way out in left field. Simply put, there's no way these too would be a "normal pair." Also, writing about post-war, and one that failed, is pretty bold in itself. So, keep pushing on and developing this story. I'm patiently waiting for the next chapter.

    And I agree that another Hinamori chapter of "Aizen is God" would be too much. I would have probably added in a bit more abject or emotionless horror from her in the scene when Gin leads her to Aizen to complain. You know, the kind where you see the car coming, but you stare at it as it comes to you? You did some of it, but you could have done more if you wanted for a possible smoother transition. Personal taste there. Btw, I loved the bathroom scene between the two.

    An interesting thought popped into my head after reading chapt. 4, if you wanted Hinamori to have a more active roll in trying to be used by Aizen, she would be prefect for looking after and well....brainwashing Yachiru for Aizen. I tend to believe that once you are enlightened about something done to you, you tend to be able to do it to others and sometimes even better. Now this isn't really about your story, but I have wondered about the effects on Hinamori after realizing Aizen's betrayal. When you've been mind-fucked that bad, you don't come out without any scars. To realize that your whole career as a shinigami was done for you and a lie, I'd have some severe trust and self-worth issues. Even if I was well trained in the 5th division smile as I like to say. Now back to the story, her hugging Gin isn't so hard to imagine. When your world crashes, you take almost any hand that's in front of you.

    Anyways, I've rambled on too much. I'm looking forward to you continuing the story!
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  • From severuslover on October 25, 2009
    I like how you continue to flesh out Gin's character! As to Hinamori, I'm one for a slow progress so IMHO, I think a smidgen more denial on her part would have been better suited since she's so caught up, but this doesn't feel rushed so cudos! Awaiting Update!

    Kay~
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  • From NovaAlexandria on October 21, 2009
    I thought that it was a rather strong chapter and portrayed them all well. To me it moved more or less at a good pace and I really enjoyed the scene at the end.
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  • From severuslover on October 08, 2009
    I really enjoyed the fleshing out of Gins character! cant wait to see the Hinamori/Gin side of things. that'll definitely be interesting. I also like the Kira/Gin possibilities since I'm not into het so much but its nice to see Gin as someone other than a heartless bastard. More pwease!

    Kay~
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  • From NovaAlexandria on October 07, 2009
    Another good chapter for the masses. Can't wait to see where it is going to go next.
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  • From severuslover on August 15, 2009
    Keep going! I like your description of Hinamori. I dont think she'd crazy XD I just think she happened to fall madly in love with he wrong man.
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