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  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2015
    I am very interested in seeing where this will go!!!! Please finish it up! This was very entertaining!!
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  • From Tazzy on September 26, 2009
    *&cackles* Go Morrigan!!!! Give her ideas!

    *snerks* And yeah, Nyx, you should tie him up, pour something delicious on him and lick him clean. Several times. Just to make sure.

    *claps* lovely! When do we get the next chapter?
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  • From BishiMistress on September 24, 2009
    I call sloppy seconds on both AND dibs on the leftover honey, if any remains. Ahh.... I LIKE her ideas. And I SECOND them.
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  • From Tazzy on August 17, 2009
    *snickers* Getting Interesting? That's one way of putting it.

    *grins* and thank you for the update!
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  • From gypsygrrl420 on July 26, 2009
    *sighs happily* Aww, poor Renji--he's a bit thick, isn't he? And I was trying to picture him as Consort to the Empress-To-Be of the Amazon and just about died in a fit of giggles, though on thinking it through more carefully I could totally see that working. (And even though I must admit I'm mad about slahy-goodness, your writing certainly makes reading het worthwhile again *grins*) It would be nice if Renji was appreciated for himself instead of feeling (or being made to feel) like a dog, though he's male and we all know how the AMazons feel about men other than as sperm donors. Oh, and having Ukitake stick around is beautiful too, since I simply adore him (and I'm sure even if Byukuya wasn't going to let Renji stick around Ukitake would do some pretty smooth convincing). I can't wait to read the rest of this, and will patiently await an update.
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  • From gypsygrrl420 on July 26, 2009
    I know it's unspeakably rude, but I was trying to hold off reviewing until I reached the current chapter (that would be 14). Otherwise I'd be gushing up a storm and though I'm sure you wouldn't really mind that, I'm enjoying this story faaaaarrrr too much to stop and comment after every heady chapter (though I promise I'll go back and do so later, probably tomorrow). Anyhow, I couldn't hold back...
    I was loving the whole Amazon slant you were going on, but then you added the Sidhe and I have to say that I bow down to your greatness. Keeping to one mythos (while simultaneously keeping the Bleach characters IC as much as possible) is difficult; throwing in another mythos on top of that--and doing so in a very natural manner at that--is genius.
    In particular I was bouncing up and down in my chair and squealing with delight at the very end of this chapter; Ukitake and Morrighan? My word, I love you to death for that! lol. Okay, must go read more now.
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  • From katami on January 23, 2009
    The kids are going to get read the riot act! So cute! Cyan is just darling! And Uryuu is going to make such a good daddy someday.
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  • From BishiMistress on January 22, 2009
    Hmm... Uryuu and Nyx? Maybe I haven't been paying attn, but I didn't see that one coming. Fits though, seeing as he looks like he could be Cyan's father. Funny... lotta guys popping up that look like children that supposedly aren't theirs.... It's an epidemic. I can't wait to see what the war goddess is going to do, but that's only because I'm not the one about to be horribly embarassed. More, please.
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  • From Tazzy on January 20, 2009
    *snickers* Trust a child to point things out to the adults.

    And Morrigan's a bit pissed isn't she?
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  • From Tazzy on December 22, 2008
    *cackles* Oh, I bet they've.... met.... before. In the bedroom, in the field, behind a tree....

    More please?
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  • From BishiMistress on December 21, 2008
    Damnit! >.< I'd like to MEET Jyuushiro too! And Damn it Ichigo, pick your damn jaw up before it falls the fuck off! See, if I walked around like that, men would be vomitting. I wonder if Ama will listen to Morrigan's advice or if she'll just barrel along as she has so far. And if she backs off with Renji pursue cause boys are stupid and they only come sniffin around when you've moved on or will it be because Morrigan said something and he'll be curious?! dum dum dummmmmmm... Next week on The Pact!
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  • From katami on December 20, 2008
    Nyx and Jyuushiro are cute together. And are you sure Amaterasu can't keep Renji? A couple of centuries of pampering would good for him. Lovely as always, dearest.
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  • From missbri88 on December 15, 2008
    I just wanted to throw in a sidenote of Happy birthday. ^^
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  • From Watcher on December 01, 2008
    I've actually been reading this story for a while now. I very much like it, though the Renji/Rukia shipper in me keeps wanting to punch Amaterasu in the face.

    Seeing Ryuken trying to stoically deal with hordes of sexually repressed warrior women always drives me into gales of laughter, especially given the general fangirl opinion of him I've gleaned.

    Criticism time: Sometimes, awkward sentence structure obscures the point you're trying to make. Sometimes, simpler can be better.

    Almost everyone is in character, but I'm fairly certain Jushiro never had an unkind thought about anyone in his entire life. I may be a bit biased here, but hey, I love that guy. Also, I doubt that the *lieutenant* who has inspired an entire *division* in the Execution Arc is *totally* devoid of respect from other Soul Reapers.

    Which brings me to another point. I understand a Renji/Amaterasu pairing is coming. I have accepted it without condoning it. I am ready for the swing of the executioner's axe. All hands have braced for impact. Thise hath note offendede thee kinge. However, while I am very biased, I think it could be set up better. It shouldn't necessitate character changes, though I acknowledge that Renji's is completely intact.

    The plot kind of jumps around lately. One minute, palace intrigue, the next, strange goddesses dancing in the forest. It's enjoyable, but oddly jolting. Since we're reading it chapter by chapter in serial format, the full impact is lessened, but when read wholesale...

    Now, I'm not trying to pick a fight. This is a *review* after all. I like your work so far, and I await seeing how it turns out.

    Mythology. Well, the Morrigan were a triune of crazy Celtic war goddesses, so... Hmm...

    Anyway, nice, atypical Bleach adventure story, and I wish you excellent luck in your coming project.
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  • From BishiMistress on December 01, 2008
    Sweeeeet. Mommy's an amazon and granny's a mythical figure. fucking lucky pedigreeeeeee. I'm jealous. Hell child? I remember being called that a few times back in the day.... lovely chapter! I want to hear the mythology lesson!
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