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Reviews for A Shadow of What Was

By : katami
  • From ANON - VanityLeague on May 02, 2011
    So - I just wanted to say that I love this story and it's awesome to see you posting again. I've been meaning to do some bleach fanart inspired by some of your writing, and I'll let you know once I get around to it. You know, with links and things. I'm on Y!gallery under the name "VanityLeague" by the way.

    Anyway. Yeah. Love your work. Thanks for sharing. :)
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on April 28, 2011
    I can honestly say that this is the only piece of fanfiction that I can read and don't feel disgust for Gin. And you're doing it while keeping his outward personality the same! Chpater 93 is a perfect example of that. He knows that he did wrong and there isn't a damn thing that he can do to stop it.

    Lovely work. Thanks for writing for us!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on April 27, 2011
    Great chapter. Gin is tugging at my heart, so many conflicting emotions. Bu that's a good thing since it means you've written him really well! ^^ Really enjoying this story!
    Keep going!!
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on March 26, 2011
    :looks frantically for the Next Button:

    Where the hell is the next button? arghhhhh

    Um... I've really been enjoying this, so I'd really love to read more chapters. really. I mean, I have this whole mental image of Shirosaki being actually mated to Benihime (which is how she was able to stay with Ichigo), Isshin insisting on a family dinner and inviting both Ryuu and Uryuu along with their prospective mates, Jyuu and Shun taking Grimm-kitty on an outing to Kira and Hisagi's place to help show how pain and pleasure can acually exist in the same relationship, and of course Aizen showing back up. Definitely Aizen showing back up so Byakuya, Jyuu, and Shun can show him just how they feel about how their mates were treated in the past.

    Thanks so much for writing for us. While I didn't read this in one fell swoop, I have spent a lot of time reading and relishing it.
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  • From ANON - Kitty Lover on March 26, 2011
    Kira!!!! Squeeee! You completely nailed him. Completely.
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  • From ANON - caitriona on March 26, 2011
    Chapter 89 made me seriously want to do a happy dance. My favorite kitty and his two new pets....Kisuke showing just how much of a sneaky badass he can be.... loves it!
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on March 26, 2011
    I almost missed a day at work reading this...

    That being said, I wanted to complement you on how you are dealing with the Shun/Juu/Grimm threesome. I just read chapter 71 with it's 'gentling' of Grimm and how the two captains are having to deal with Grimm's past even though they dont really 100% know about it. It's wonderful.

    I'm enjoying the pairings, the angst, the love and the emotion that you're writing for us. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on March 22, 2011
    I actually cried at the end of Chapter 25. Cried! I can't imagine not letting him go at this point.

    Nicely done. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Saki-chan on March 20, 2011
    I love this story, I just sat down and read and read and read...I really hope to see you continuing to update because the character interactions are a pleasure to read ^_^
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  • From animaeprincess on March 12, 2011
    I wanted to take a moment to let you know how much I have been enjoying this story.

    I find the idea original and exciting. Kisuke, that little devil!

    I'm finding that your pairings are working so naturally. BxU, other that the obvious differences, they would make a perfect match. I love the idea of JxSxG, especially since we are seeing this protective side of Grim-Chan.

    While I saw the foreshadowing for RxR, I guess I may have been hoping for a little Isshin x Ryuuken action or perhaps Ishhin/Ryuuken/Yourichi?? What? It could happen. But, I do understand his love for Misaka (being married for more years than I care to admit myself).

    Interesting take on Gin. I love how he hit the button for Tatski and how he, not Tousen, "killed" the girl - obviously so he would not mortally wound her. When he [Gin]opened the gate and was on the swing reflecting back it only makes the reader like him more. Learning of the no le reasons that he followed Aizen (to protect Rangiko and Kira) as opposed to betrayal as everyone thought only engenders that much more sympathy.

    I do have to apologize - I'm actually on chapter 53, but then it dawned on me that I wasn't rating the chapters, so I'm going back to do so. Up to - well - whatever chapter this is posting with. I hate when you rate and it brings you all the way back to chapter 1 - hmpf!

    Thank you so much for sharing this story. I can't wait to read more of you work.

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  • From ANON - Chaoskiller on March 01, 2011
    Good author person you listened to me. Now don't let yourself get so behind again I mean seriously two chapters in a little over a year? I don't care what's going on in your life that's an absolutly abysmal update rate. Now please tell me that the next chapter has the dinner and sex scene for Ichi and urahara. Because I will be slightly miffed if it isn't. And btw the whole betting pool thing? Absolute genius.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 27, 2011
    Aww! It's been so long since you've updated that I forgot what was happening. So I re-read the whole thing >< So good! Can't wait for the next chapter. I feel like Ichigo and Urahara are so close to getting back together!!
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  • From kisskisskill on February 23, 2011
    jkasdghjahg
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  • From ANON - silverblaise on February 22, 2011
    *Long loud squeal* I almost thought I was seeing things when I found this had been updated! :-D Real life can be a bitch I know, am just happy to see a new chapter of this and to hear that it won't be abandoned completely. Hope things are going well for you and we can see another update (or story, or anything really cause I love how you write these characters) again soon! ^__^
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  • From ANON - lamb0luv3r on February 17, 2011
    Omg come on first you Pull a six month dissapearance. NOw youre getting to eight months this time around. Either tell us what the hold up is or break our hearts and tell us youve dropped the story. Seriously man this is pissing me off.
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