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Reviews for Caught in the Act

By : Carola
  • From gypsygrrl420 on August 01, 2009
    That was so...yum! If you're worried that you find writing this normal, does that mean I should be worried that I find being turned on by this normal? Lol.
    Ooh--Shuuhei and Ulquiorra? Ulquoirra should be seme, if only cause he's got that remote, emotionless thing going on that I think would translate very well to him being the dominant party, and the thought of Shuuhei as uke is hot. Then again, Shuu could probably turn Ulqui into a moaning, panting, whimpering uke quite easily...lol.
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  • From Vamprina on December 18, 2007
    Lol! Some people might say yes, but I like your kind of normal. ^_~ It was totally an awesome fic! I love it! I kinda felt a tiny bit sorry for Ichigo, though. Throughout the whole thing, due to something that was said early in the fic, Ichigo seemed to be more into Shiro than Shiro was into him. And it seemed more like they were just fucking around with Ichigo because it was something new and exciting and felt good. More like using him. Especially since Shiro hadn't had sex with Ichigo for a year or so. Which may or may not be what they were doing, but it kinda made me feel sorry for Ichigo. And while they did work to make Ichigo feel just as good, they were more interested in how good they themselves felt. At least it seemed like it. :p

    But, I still liked it, because it was hot. It was also the second double penetration fanfic I've read in Bleach or anywhere, and the only yaoi double penetration fic I've read. I'm very happy it was a GrimHichiIchi fic. :p Grimmjow is hawt. :p

    I really liked the fic! It was awesome and hot! I think that my earlier disappointment that Renji was not the lover (and that he was with Byakuya ;_; ) is no longer there. :p I think it wouldn't have worked quite as well without Grimmjow there. :)

    Lovely fic! *_*

    Ah, and you can ignore my bit at the top about feeling sorry for Ichi. I do, but it's just me wanting to rp and having nobody to rp ANYthing with at this particular moment in time and I like to make Ichigo emo about shit. :p I try not to do it too much, but he does get into the emo a bit when I play him. ^^;;;

    Awesome fic! ^__________________________________________________^
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  • From ANON - Hazy on November 10, 2007
    Awesome i dont want more i need more!!!!!!!! Please!!!
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  • From ANON - Anan on July 21, 2007
    oh...my...gawed...
    YESYESYESYESYEEEEEEEEESSSSSSS!!! *squeels with delight*
    Damnit Carola, your fanfics are SO FUCKIN HAWT! *passes out from blood-loss* *A*
    KEEP IT UP!!

    ~Anan
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  • From ANON - mo on July 16, 2007
    this should be in the threesome category.
    byakuya or zaraki
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  • From ANON - Mimi on July 05, 2007
    I love it Carola-chan! Any chance you can make another chapter to it?
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on July 02, 2007
    O_O Oh wow that was really really hot. What else can I say I loved it. How about more :D
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  • From gogochan on June 29, 2007
    My oh my! That was some serious sex! You should post this on LJ. Hot hot hot smex. Shuu x Ulqui? Can't wait to read that on. I'd say Shuu would be seme, but that's just my opinion. xoxo- gogochan
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  • From ANON - Yaoi is in the air on June 27, 2007
    If you find that simple to write, then you're my masterrrrrr~! x3 It was absolutely, oh godd, too hot! *faints*

    Ulquoirra and Shuuhei hmmm... that's a difficult one.. just make Ulquoirra seme, little guys can be very dominant! xD
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  • From Pho on June 26, 2007
    Hey, that was hot. Hollow Ichigo, Ichigo, AND Grimmjow. Amazing! I've wanted to try that pairing too, but I couldn't figure out how to make it work. Your AU was a great idea. Twins...haha. And your writing was sexy! I hope to see more from you.
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  • From happygirl24 on June 26, 2007
    HOTNESS PURE FUCKING HOTNESS please make a part 2 to this
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  • From HellsingFreak on June 26, 2007
    OH... MY... GOD... I... LOVE... YOU... FOR... THIS... *drowns in a puddle of blood, drool and brain on the keybord and floor* I AM NOT ABLE TO SAY ANYTHING MORE. YOU ARE THE BEST.
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