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Reviews for What A Captain Really Wants

By : naruto1010
  • From SunkistGumdrop on May 19, 2011
    8D Me likes this story!
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  • From Rockyshores on October 03, 2008
    I was just looking through old Bleach fics, I couldn't believe I hadn't read this before! Excellent job capturing their personalities, very sexy.
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  • From Afrieal on January 31, 2008
    Interesting story *smile* and even more interesting myspace page... please keep writing in the bleach genre if you can

    afrieal
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  • From blackfeenix on September 20, 2007
    nice fic. very hot. I love the odd pairing of Ichigo/Kenpachi. Some of the sentences were too long. Maybe try to seperate them out a bit? And I felt the climax was kind of abrupt...as climaxes go -laughs- But all around I thought it was awesome!
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  • From leanne on September 05, 2007
    I think you really should do another chapter or a sequel. The last part was to funny with Ichigo screaming at his classmate to shut up. Most of the story was interesting but could use some filling out, but other than that it was really quite fun to read.
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  • From happygirl24 on June 02, 2007
    wow that was funny poor Ichigo his little bum is hurting hahaha you should make chappie no.2 jut a thought
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  • From kokuchoukayou on May 30, 2007
    This is a great pairing, but we found it to be a little dry, and it lacked character development and expression. I like the idea behind it, and I think with a bit of development, it could be very good. The formatting has a bit to be desired, and you can fix that by hiring yourself a BETA reader.

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