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Reviews for Naughty Grimmy

By : Vampircia
  • From FicticiousDelicious on January 02, 2013
    This remains one of my favourite Grimmy torture fics. I feel like a jerk for giggling at this story but how Grimmjow has to beg to make them stop (and how they don't stop) is just so delicious. x3 I can't remember the first time I read this but since then I've reread it at least ten times. I felt like I should leave a review after so long. (The first time I read your fic was at a point when I didn't have an account on AFF so I had no clue how to write a review.)

    Luring Grimmjow into the situation with 'a cup of tea' really made me giggle. It's like he's the mouse that knows better but he's just testing to see if the mouse trap actually works. It seems this manner of torture to someone like Grimmjow, someone with a lot of pride, is highly effective. Grimmy seems to come across as strait (sexually) in my mind when I read this. I'd assume a strait man would be exceptionally repulsed at the idea of another man inflicting sexual torture upon him, hence why Grimmjow was so mad. If isn't strait I'll assume it's his shear despising nature toward Aizen and Nnoitora that makes the torture so wonderfully effective. Either way, this whole fiasco was definitely effective in making Grimmy regret whatever he did. (I am curious as to what would warrant such a severe penalty...maybe Grimmjow put a tack on Aizen's throne...)
    Aizen seems sadistic enough to carry through with torturing an Espada to get them to obey him, and Nnoitora seems like the type to take advantage of being allowed to help (opportunist!). He's never appeared to like Grimmjow very much. So they're both very believable characters for the roles you've assigned them. Grimmjow seems a bit off from his usual self, begging doesn't seem like him but it's an interesting development. The development from rude and defiant into embarrassed and pleading suits the story, and the fact that he continues to struggle helps keep Grimmy in [believable] character.

    "He got a lesson he would always remember." PPPFFFTT! says I. Slap to the wrist is step one. Spankings are step two...and screw the rest of the steps because they wouldn't work on a hardhead like Grimmjow anyway!

    Anyway! There's the review. I thoroughly enjoy this story. It's very interesting and entertaining. :3 You have a delicious imagination!
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  • From on February 13, 2007
    O.o
    Naughty Grimmy? Rather naughty Aizen and Noitra. But damn! That was some good torture-session!
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