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Reviews for Somewhat Pretty

By : Hellagoddess
  • From SesshomaruFreak on May 12, 2019

    Nicely done! That scene totally revved up my inner fujoshi, when they cut away and come back to Shuuhei just collapsed and Yumi's all sparkly. Smh it DOES scream 'edited sex-scene'

    I love how you *ahem* filled in the gaps ;)


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  • From ANON - Krystal on February 22, 2012
    I love shuhei yumichika fix but hardly anyone writes them so thank you so much i loooooove this fic very hawt;) can you please write more shuhei yumichika fix that would be yaoi~fuckingtastic
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  • From ANON - Marcy on November 29, 2008
    Loved it! :D That must have been what happened :D
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  • From ANON - Jamie on November 13, 2008
    Oh my god...
    I was laughing my ass off the entire time!!
    Ahhhh so funny...and..arousing?!?
    What's wrong with me... >.
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  • From Chiyo on April 10, 2008
    I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought of this when we saw that scene. The fact that the episode I watched subbed Shuhei muttering afterwards "that was dirty, you bastard" only served to fuel my simply beautiful mental images. You wrote this beautifully. Very, very sexy, and I hope I get to read more of your work in the future.
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  • From Boomanda on April 05, 2008
    Holy God! That was awsome! That scene screamed sex scene at me too! I was tempted to write one but I never got around to it. Nice fanfic, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on March 24, 2008
    lol You're right! That whole set-up did scream "edited sex-scene". X3

    Loved it! =D
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  • From maderine on February 17, 2008
    Yeah, well all had that thought, I bet. ^_^
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  • From Afrieal on November 16, 2007
    Oh goddess that was just as good as Woolfwood's New Profession and just as hot maybe hot enough to burn out the flu bug we both got *sigh* this will teach us to go thru profiles to look for work more often

    Affie and Rysh
    who are happy to see more of your work
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  • From ANON - Ranna on September 13, 2007
    I know what you mean. I am firmly convinced that there is major impropriety going on behind the scenes in Bleach. My version of the Bleach plot:

    Byakuya Kuchiki is sleeping with Renji Abarai.

    Gin Ichimaru knows that they are sleeping together(and has evidence), and tells Byakuya so.

    And of course, Byakuya Kuchiki would never want his reputation soiled by the fact that he is having shameful liaisons with his male assistant captain.

    So, when Renji gets seriously injured, Byakuya puts him in prison.

    Gin then makes sure Renji doesn't die.

    And he blackmails Byakuya into killing Aizen.

    Meanwhile, Gin has been having sex with Hitsugaya. (That pedophile.)

    Who tells Momo.

    Who tells Izuru.(Who doesn't believe her. Go figure.)

    Byakuya overhears them talking.

    And gets evidence that proves that Gin is being a pedophile. (Though exposing this would prob'ly get Hitsugaya in trouble too.)

    Gin agrees to exchange evidence if Byakuya sleeps with him.

    And Renji gets way jealous.

    It would just make my day if I was right.
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  • From Yumichika on August 26, 2007
    Oh God!!
    I love it!! *-*

    I thought the same about this situation! This scene in the Anime screamed for this Fic! XD
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  • From ANON - Enya on March 18, 2007
    Hey, so nice! I just adore Shuuhei... ^^

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  • From ANON - Muffers on February 28, 2007
    Ha, this was brilliant. Definitely what should have happened. I give you two thumbs up for awesome writing style and an equally awesome piece. Well done.
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  • From Ales on February 13, 2007
    Such a dangerous Yumichika... ; ) An he is totally in character, great! I think that's a promising start for this couple, ne? ; )

    Thank you for this fic! : )
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  • From ANON - Tennak on December 17, 2006
    I have just read and throughly enjoyed your version of the peacock vs 69! I felt is was a surprise pairing but loved it. I assume that Hisagi was completely hooked after this kind of treatment. LOL! Your smex was delicious and I thought that particular the peacock was soo much like T. Kube's version that it was spot on! A very satisfying read! A full round of applause for you. I will look into your other stories! Thanks!
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