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Reviews for Bye Bye, Byakuya

By : Brightside
  • From candiedinago on February 11, 2009
    I do love dark fiction. I kind of wish he didn't have to die in the end though.
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  • From ANON - Jenova on March 14, 2008
    This was...interesting. A little cruel, but interesting. I wanted to know, if ever, will "fire and ice" be continued on another site and why it was discontinued. My friend and I were really enjoying it. :(
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  • From ANON - Panko on April 30, 2007

    OMG!!! How fantastic! *nosebleed* I love Byakuya being tortured! Muahaha!
    He's such a masochistic uke! I love him bottom. Torture him more!!
    I really like this pairing.... so damn violent
    Are you going to write more for this story!?? I hope you are!

    rape him more!
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  • From ANON - anonymous on March 31, 2007
    ok. I have NO idea how your mind works. This is one of the cruelest fics I have ever read. Umm... well done? or... rather... think happy thoughts. :)
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  • From ANON - Pervert on February 25, 2007
    Wow O . O Byakuya is WAY too pretty to be seme :3 so I totally loved this, plus I LOVE ukes in pain *nosebleed* you should definitely write more ^_^ THANK YOU! Thats was great, good writer too
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  • From barara on February 01, 2007
    the rewrite makes more sense! ur a sadist when ur angry XD
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  • From Tennak on January 23, 2007
    Like the new version a little better. Mostly because of the ending, where you let Ichigo back in control so we know that he will do anything to save his lover, and because of the lighter tone (I know this sounds wrong!)of the Hollow finishing himself of inside Ichigo. This is not a story I would like to read often, but nicely done! Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - delonariel on November 05, 2006
    lol. I usually hate byakuya submissive, but somehow it's ok with ichigo, and you wrote it really well.

    and remember that parents are often the worst judges when it comes to their kids.
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  • From ANON - Nina nalman on October 20, 2006
    well done!
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  • From ANON - mon zero on October 14, 2006
    Aww, another Hollow!Ichigo x Byaku-chan!XD So cruel but it's well written ^_^ Breathtaking, I can say ^o^ Good job! *LOVE*
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  • From ANON - Hellagoddess on October 12, 2006
    Oh sh*t. Well done piece of fiction, wonderful descriptions. poor byakuya...but i guess that's what you've got to deal with when you've got a hollow and lover in one.

    And up against his wifes shrine too. nice touch.
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  • From ANON - Setsuna on October 11, 2006
    Kowai...
    Demo, suit my liking for uke bya... ^^
    Very twisted eh ^^
    Thanks,
    Setsuna
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  • From ANON - Setsuna on October 11, 2006
    Kowai...
    Demo, suit my liking for uke bya... ^^
    Very twisted eh ^^
    Thanks,
    Setsuna
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  • From ANON - snowgarden on October 11, 2006
    I admit that I rather enjoy well written Non-Con stories. I also enjoy your other fic, Fire and Ice. The appearance of "Hichigo" in Fire and Ice surprised me, but it turned out to be enjoyable nonetheless.

    This fic though didn't manage to captivate my attention. I assume that it was written out of annoyance caused by a personal problem between you and your mom, am I correct? I read the story, but I just couldn't... feel it. The rape scene was not what I had expected. Personally I think that it would be much more devastating, calculating and brutal, should Ichigo's Hollow ever get his hands on Byakuya's sweet, royal behind. Maybe he would even take his sweet time to break the Kuchiki heir thoroughly, both mentally and physically, and it doesn't even have to look THAT ugly on the outside. Think of all the possibilities. Mmm.

    Considering what I have read from you this far, I'd say that you have certain talents when it comes to writing. I also empathize with those to whom writing serves as some sort of relief. So as a personal advise, don't let your emotions cloud your mind this badly. :) You can always work more efficiently with a clear mind and your eyes wide open.

    I hope I haven't offended you in any way by this feedback, as no affront was intended.

    Have a nice day, Li
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  • From ANON - akume on October 11, 2006
    That was harsh and yet I couldn't stop myself from reading it. Anyway, thanks for the lemon. Ja.
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