Reviews for Sakura Petals and FairiesBy : Zarakiswolf |
For the most part, I have enjoyed the read thus far. That being said I do feel like Nanami's character development was very rushed in chapter 13. She has been slow to grow throughout the story (not surprisingly so given her traumas), that it almost felt like I was reading a whole new character with her flip into being able to speak up to Byakuya. Maybe the addition of some inner struggle during their exchange or open vulnerability to Kenny afterwords to communicate that although she is growing, it is hard.The overall confidence that she displayed throughout this chapter as I said just felt very sudden.
This is absolutely fantastic! The character development, plot, and writing style are amazing. Your stories are some of my favorite fan fiction. Thank you so much for this amazing addition to a great world 😁
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