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Reviews for The Heart in My Hand

By : chayron
  • From Snowway32 on August 21, 2013
    Wow, great as always! I loved your little funny bits...it was cute. And Ulquiorra shared his food, hehe. That was nice, I liked this chapter very much. Thanks so much for posting and I enjoyed the bit about Ulquiorra's past and Ichigo's reaction were just perfect! Great job...there should always be something that an author can take pride in, so use your poetic licence as much as you want. It has not failed you yet. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Athrun434 on August 13, 2013
    brilliant chapter loved every bit of it cant wait for more
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  • From Snowway32 on August 12, 2013
    Yay! Another chapter, I'm so happy and it was good too. Hehe, thanks for posting! I can sympathize with getting characters to stay in character. Strange, I find Ichigo really easy to write...you just have to watch out for his stubborn streak. But Ulquiorra now there's a difficult one to write but I will praise you on conveying him so well, especially when his character wasn't explored in the Manga so deeply. I shall bow to you for doing such a great job and look forward to reading more.
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  • From Fortuna-Angeli on July 29, 2013
    Love your Story I think it awesome, and the fact that you try to put the character in personality, instead of making them OOC its amazing, and Ichigo is awesome, Urahara is funny but with that mysterious way of his, so I think it is awesome. ~Angeli
    Yeah, you keep the character as they should be, with the most way of their own thinking instead of dragging them and making them love sick fools, little submissives as though they were dogs to be tamed and you show Ichigo´s rather disturbing ability to make friends in the mot extrange ways possible... ~Fortuna
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  • From Snowway32 on July 28, 2013
    Thanks for updating! I was eagerly awaiting this and you didn't disappoint, I just love how you write these two and even Urahara he's a difficult one to write at best but I think you did it very well. Love you way you are including the new chapters into this as well, very well done. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Athrun434 on July 28, 2013
    that was very interesting. well done on the characters personalities. cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From Snowway32 on June 16, 2013
    Seriously, this is so my favourite fic right now! It's been ages since I've found something this good and this is my absolute favourite pairing especially the way you are writing it. Makes me want to write for this pairing too and I haven't written for Bleach in a long time. Thanks so much for sharing this, I really, really cannot wait to read more and find my own inspiration.
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  • From ANON - Athrun434 on May 23, 2013
    this is the first ichigoXUquorria pairing story that I've read and I can say I'm enjoying it. the character personalities are well written. cant wait to see what happens between them
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  • From ANON - Rawthorne on May 22, 2013
    So far, an excellent story beginning. I don't see much need for a beta, if you don't have one, as things are well written and have proper grammar. However if you still need one I would be willing provided you plan to keep writing on this at a decent pace. I clicked onto it because Ulquiorra is one of my top three favorites in bleach, and not many people are willing to take his personality on as a challenge.

    Btw, I think your doing marvelously on that. The second half of chapter two where he behaved more like himself was very well done. I merely hope you explain the zanpakto and wardrobe change a little in the future chapters.

    All considered, the chapters are slightly short for what most consider good length, but that is the only complaint I could find anywhere. Love it and hope to see more up soon!

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