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Reviews for Prize of Victory 2

By : NovaAlexandria

From bre42 on February 18, 2013
I agree with you. Hinamori needs to die and not be brought back. I mean why does she keep coming back. I really don't like her.
I love this chapter and poor Gin. I wish he didn't suffer so bad but that's just the way it is. I wonder what she gave up to help Gin.
Keep'em coming
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From ANON - bright on February 15, 2013
I saw it on adult swim, then started watching online when the new episodes ran out. But here's my idea for something that might be a nice touch: if one of readers has some artistic skills, maybe they would be willing to get a piece of art showing the kids as they look now. (I have no art skills beyond stick figures.)
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From ANON - AryunK on February 12, 2013
My best friend tied me down (literaly) and watched it... she'd been following it since it came out in Japan (as she can read kanji), and I've been addicted ever since
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From ANON - Leanne on February 06, 2013
Yay good chapter ^w^

I first found out about bleach while watching adult swim I think I was waiting for Inuyasha and it was the new anime at the time.
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From kadajclone on February 06, 2013
I enjoy the little family moments and am steadily growing more fond of Karin as the story continues. I will admit her attitude at times put me off a bit but I will say she is more of a 'Jerk with a heart of gold"(TV tropes) and had to get a little hard to survive. Byakuya just isn't going to get a break is he lol? If he is not being beaten or raped he is being humiliated in another fashion. Also would Orihime be able to fix his throat so he could talk again? I imagine it would not be too hard to hide that from a halfwit like Yammy. And sorry for all the questions but I recall in part one you mentioned in passing that Soi Fon's muteness came from the repeated abuse from Barragan, so is their a way to fix that as well? I now I have constantly badgered you about her but she just happens to be my favorite character from the show/manga and I have been curious too see whats going on in her head since part 1 of POV and while her situation is not as bad as Byakuya's it is definitely a close second given her close proximity to Barragan all the time. Now THERE is someone with a lot of pride and knows how to hold a grudge and I am sure she would just love to give the Segunda Espada a nice dose of Nigeki Kessatsu. Also how often does Ggio have to refresh his claim on her? He is by no means a weakling I am sure, but as a captain she still greatly outclasses him in terms of ability and Reiatsu and if Yoruichi was intending to rescue anyone who would be willing to leave, especially a Captain class fighter it would make sense to wait for either Soi to break the claim herself or it wore off and nab her and run. And given their past has Yuro even appeared to her yet or is she keeping herself hidden to all but Karin? Again, sorry for all of the questions, I am a curious lad and your story has me hooked.

Now on to the question you asked. I discovered Bleach really by accident and at the time was just getting into anime. I came into it around the fight between Ichigo and Byakuya and was hooked and then decided to go back and read the manga to catch myself up and have been a fan ever since.

-waits patiently for next chapter-
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From ANON - Kendra on February 06, 2013
I want you to know I simply love your stories. But I'm having a problem finding your beta's story that ties into this one, Consolation Prize (of Victory). If there is any way you can send me a link to it, i would be very appreciative! My email is Silver-sinner@hotmail.com Thanks, and I look forward to more chapters!!
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From ANON - Kain on January 30, 2013
Or if it would be easier, perhaps you could send it to my email:

kadajclone@yahoo.com

if not, it's cool either way, I am just curious as to your response to what I wrote.
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From ANON - Kain on January 30, 2013
Ah damn I missed the response ya gave to my review lol. Loved the chapter, but it just sucks how these once proud or in Rangiku's place free spirited individuals have to prostate themselves to their so called 'masters'. Any chance you could re-post the response to my last review in your next chapt and hopefully I catch it before it has to be deleted? If not, it's cool.
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From ANON - Byunei on January 28, 2013
To pick favorite chapters is a bit hard. I enjoyed quite a bit and ended up looking forward to certain pairings after a while. Reading more about them even if they were sparse?

Tatsuki and Tesra surprised the heck outta me but I've grown to be rather fond of this pair now. I enjoyed how they developed, how they're practically the most 'normal' of the group. You made it work without forcing anything. Their chapters stood out to me.

Another set of chapters I remember reading more than once, the different PoVs of the attack on Yuzu and Karin from the later and Grimmjow's perspectives. A bit of brilliance there. It helped build the anticipation for the claim. I discovered this story around chapter 72... I read from 1-72 straight... Then waited patiently like everyone else.

But to say favorite chapters overall? It may be odd but my number 2 was the household changes for Nnoitra and Rangiku. I don't know how you've made that couple compelling but I wanted more throughout. Seeing him change even a little, subtly after time. These were characters I never thought much of in the actual series, or apart but together I just want more of, even if it doesn't end well. After looking at their personalities again I'm surprised to have not seen more of this pair. I'm looking forward to see what goes next for them.

And number one was the household changes for Toshiro and Hallibel. Having read this no less than six times I can say its well paced, the emotions realistic for characters, her ambition, plans and like all the espada, that more animalistic way of thinking were like word candy to me. You nailed Toshiro in my book, he wasn't as I've seen in some horrible instances a demure boy or an angry little man. None of the characters came out cliched, especially Hallibel which I've seen tendencies toward making her just a dominating masculine figure who just happens to be female.

Congrats on completion and your new one even if its late!

Your lazy reviewer, and in it to the end!
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From ANON - Yuritzy on January 28, 2013
*SQUEAL*I was actually going back to re-read Prize of Victory and was pleasantly surprised to see the sequel up! I'm so giddy now I doubt I'll be able to go to sleep! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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From ANON - zazarola on January 27, 2013
I really like your story. I have been following since the beginning, but just recently hve had time to myself to write a review. To the question of pedophilia, I think it is not pedophilia. It is very true that teenagers have sex before 18 and I think reflecting that in a fanfic or fanart is not horrible. I mean seriously we have rap songs that the main focus is on sex and things like 16 and pregnant. You can't be 16 and pregnant without having sex at 15 or 16 years of age.
I do see the worry behind it, but I think it is more of a case by case type of thing. Are they both young? Are they consenting? Is the time period or cannon universe seem hypothetically supportive of it? I know that Ichigo is underage as most of the humans, but they are fighting arrancar and killer forces. I think in real-life they would be more adult-like than most 18yos with that kind of responsibility.
On the second part the story is definitely fine and should not be removed if they are aged to be older. That's ridiculous. It's like, "oh you can marry your husband because when you were 15 he was 19 eventhough you are now 24 years old. If they are aged as adults then the author usually adds some description that signifies aging. Like some Matsu/Toshiro stories has Toshiro as taller and more muscular. But that's just my opinion.
Story Question: Will there be a story on the Living World's side of things? Is the Living World still going as if nothing happened? I was wondering because with the unbalance and all wouldn't there be more hollow attacks and therefore more unexplained building explosions than ever before in Japan? Wouldn't non-sensitive people be getting unnerved about the situation over the years?

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From ANON - Ahika on January 26, 2013
Hi, so I`ve been reading POV since it started, and, loving the new one already by the way. I was wondering, seeing as Karin can see the flow of reiatsu and copy it, shouldn't she also be able to copy Sonido and Cero`s aswell as the Shinigami stuff?
I like how Ajuga is turning out to be very similar to grimmjow, he`s still my second favourite character. And favourite in here. Still not sure about turning Szayel around, he was really creepy in the anime,and it`s a little odd seeing him act normal.
And one more thing, I know you said you deviated from Ichigo and Ulquiorra fought on the dome, isn`t that after Szayel, Nnoitira and Tesra die? Oh, and I`m steadily working my way through the characters from Bleach if you`d like to see. I`m called Miraby on there, haven`t done very many yet but I`m getting there. Thanks for writing the second part to POV, have been looking forward to it. Look forward to the next chapter.
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From ANON - Orsin on January 25, 2013
It took me a little while to read through the first 107 chapters of Prize of Victory, and when I saw there was a '2' on it now, I had to jump in. This is very well done for a split from the canon, although I want to see Yammy and Aizen on platters cause of how they are. In response to your question from 'General', I sort of view the old ways as what some of the world needs to remember. Marriages and the like were plausible from 13 and onward. I have a hard time viewing 16 as minor or pedophilia. I do have to ask if at all possible to answer, does Yammy and/or Aizen get what they deserve at all?
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From ANON - leanne on January 25, 2013
Yay ^w^ welcome back can't wait for more updates :3
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From ANON - Kain on January 23, 2013
Another brilliant chapter and thank you for answering my questions, not a whole lot of authors do that. Honestly after I wrote my previous review the thought of "well, what CAN they do?" crossed my mind and I realized that they are simply so outclassed that any attempts to help those being harmed would serve nothing but increasing the suffering for everyone. I mean we have seen how some of the captains suffer under the less humane Espada, my heart just goes out to the regular seated and non seated Shinigami. The captains can somewhat contend with what is being done to them and are necessary to a degree to Aizen's rule so them keeping their lives is more assured, but the much weaker and in some cases shikai-less Shinigami can easily be replaced,(I mean hell some of the children are above them in power). The best they can do is keep there heads low and pray that if they run afoul of a Numeros that they make it out alive.

I'm kind of a bleeding heart if ya hadn't noticed lol. What makes it all the more worse is that ya just know that someone with a hero complex as big as Ichigo's is probably just tearing his hair out trying to get strong enough to help. I am very interested in seeing the Hana /Starrk moment, that won't be easy for anyone, but hey if worse comes to worse he could always tell her that he offered to fake fight Shunsui until shit calmed down. Ajuga is a very nice blend of Karin and Grimmjow and I am sorry if in my last review I sounded like she irked me. I have actually grown very fond of her and would love to see her interact with Ichigo or Yuzu. It would be funny to see Ichigo tell her how he actually beat her dad when they fought in Hueco Mundo lol. And thank you for reminding me about Aizen's law forbidding interference. But hey....your only breaking the law if ya get caught-wink wink-. Ajuga with her ability to hide her presence completely sneaks up on a particularly abusive Numeros, ya know someone who wont be missed, goes to town on him, gets rid of the body, goes home feeling like a bad ass >D.

-waits patiently for next chapter-
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