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From ANON - Rachael on April 10, 2013
I would think...that people don't have much to say have the darker chapters. They are emotional to read. It's hard sometimes to even scroll down the page. I get so stuck on one part and have to double or triple check a paragraph to make sure that my feelings are appropriately matched to the scene. When I read, it's more vivid in my mind then a movie, so I am deeply affected. Rest assured though, the reason you don't have many reviews after such darkness, is because you have left many people 'wordless.' Or speechless. If you got a review it would probably be like..' Holy shit...' or 'Omg...' Most people just stay silent. Your stories, all of them, are profound. I shall review every chapter for you to ease your worry! Remember, I am the one who read 'Midsummers Eve' all those years ago. So, I have been following your writing and it seems almost like an honor to see it evolve and become so affecting. I am happy to see Unohana break a little, she needs to cry I think...Being used...being a voyeur to such cruelty...Yeah. So I was oddly relieved to see her let go. Yammy, I hope gets a raping of his own, a million lashings, hearing and sight taken away, a few fingers removed, castrated and cut...Any of those will do. All of them preferred. That bastard is out of control. I think, in this story, I dislike him over Aizen. By far. I love the relationship between Gin and Ajuga. :) Could you please show me how to pronounce Orihime and Ulquiorras sons name? Thank you and I hope you feel better soon! :)

-Rachael
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From ANON - Arridu on April 10, 2013
Good grief, PLEASE tell me Aizens going to kill the braindead brute and be done with it! Tolerating him nearly killing Byakuya would be one thing, but all but defying his authority by pciking a fight with Unohana? Thats a bit much. As for your question, assuming that is indeed what it was I'll take Ichigo's absurdly oped ressurecion, if that doesn't count Barragons probably, it may not be pretty, it may not be as flashy as most of the other high ranking espada's, but it certainly is effective and the fact that pretty much the only thing that can do more then annoy him is his own power seals the deal.
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From ANON - Harlequin on March 31, 2013
:O Byakuya...oh, poor Byakuya...poor Soi-Fon, poor Ggio...You are doing an excellent job of drawing sympathy for them and making me hate Yammy and Baraggan. Will they die soon? I really hope they die soon, and very very VERY painfully at that.
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From ANON - Hi on March 29, 2013
You say a long time, 15 years but they are all hundreds of years old. They are centuries old! 15 years is nothing to them. I can't believe that less than one quarter of a century would finally change their souls. Normal people, hell yes, but not them. No to say they don't get emotionally scarred, mentally damaged and tainted in personality, but 15 years seem so little to them. Not that torture goes by fast, but I disagree with your justification for the changes your story makes.

Still, nasty mutilation, tragic futures and all, it's a great story, keep it up.
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From ANON - kokoro621 on March 28, 2013
haha If I could smack you, I would =) WHEN are you going to stop torturing Byakuya?!!!! I hope Yammy gets a good kick in the balls and then dropped into an active volcano somewhere...
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From Nakkinomiko on March 28, 2013
Oh, if I didn't hate Yammy in this story before, I certainly do now! I can only hope that you have a truly painful demise in store for him later! Poor Byakuya!!
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From Raymy on March 27, 2013
Your comment after the chapter was "*Runs and rides in my anti rabid fan girl bunker. The start of Byakuya�s breaking." Kinda confusing because I don't get how you could say "the start" of his breaking. Maybe the start of his demise? Anyway, I'm not a rabid fan girl, but I am a feeling human being, and the non-stop torture of Byakuya has finally broken me. Get someone to perform a mercy killing, please. Ajuga could chomp into his throat and end it quickly. While she's at it, put Gin and Soifon on the list. Hell, might as well add Yumichika and Ggio. Make it a real gore-fest.

Ah, this is perfect! The reCaptcha saying is "Psyche Mrfeem". I'll take that as an omen, although, I don't know who Mr. Feem is.
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From Anon on March 27, 2013
Well Aizen said that Orihimes power was tied to her will but other than that it didn't have any limits, if she really wanted something to not happen she could MAKE it not happen.

She had the power to reject the hougyoku if she actually wanted to, if she was serious she could've wiped ulqui out of existence.

I don't know whether or not you've seen gatekeepers but I picture a truly broken Orihime like a powered up Rurikos Gate of Life changing into The Gate of Genocide with the power to wipe out existence is she was serious enough...

Holy crap that actually gave me a fic idea :P
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From kadajclone on March 27, 2013
oh god....my feels for this chapter, especially the Byakuya part. That man needs the hug to end all hugs. I was most overjoyed to see my precious soi fon lol, thank you thank you thank you for that. Smart thinking to get Ggio a break from his master and i loved the part where Soi thought given the chance if things REALLY go south that she would hightail it to the world of the living, join the rebels and give em a talking too for not saving them yet. Loved this chapter although the
Byakuya part killed me.
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From ANON - Kristin on March 14, 2013
Wow, I finally got to read part 2 of POV. I'm so happy that you already have eight chapters and i got to read them all at once. As always nothing but the absolute best from you. I don't even know where to begin. Poor Gin, he can never catch a break. It seems the Swarm has taken this break to gain knowledge, evolve, and breed to prepare for their invasion and most everyone in the Soul Society has become a bit comfortable because they beleived the Defence Net to be impenetrable. I am so glad that the general Ajuga found was dead, I'm dreading the day that Aizen finds out about any one or all of the ladies' royal blood. Loved Gimmjow sucking up his pride for his daughter, you wrote it perfect. And I really liked Harribel giving the Talk to Ajuga and offering the young ladies the option of becoming her fraccion. I laughed my ass off when Hana misunderstood and thought Harribel was offering to Claim her, that was great.
I know you asked these questions a while ago, but I saw comercials for it on Adult Swim and wanted to check it out to see if it was any good and I have beee hopelessly hooked ever since. I have gone back and read the whole manga too and am now watching the new episodes on Adult Swim. My favorite characters in your story are Grimmjow and Ajuga and Karin a little less than them. If I could go anywhere I would want to go to Japan, Europe I know a little vague but there are many places in Europe I would love to go. If I could I would be an astronomer, I absolutely love space.
I have to tell you how much I enjoy your story, even through the dark parts because they are necessary and everything is so well written. I love your ideas and writing style, never stop, I bet you will become a best selling author. I can't wait to go read The Real King now. I love your stories and am patiently awaiting another amazingly written chapter.
Hope all is well with the little one and family.
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From ANON - x on March 14, 2013
But she fixed Grimmjow's arm, and arrancar's are 'just souls' too - so even with the length of time, she'd probably be able to fix them. Besides Ukitake's has his affliction for year's and she was able to aid him. If not, couldn't the pink haired scientist just reverse the surgery?
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From ANON - Saka_Sandora on March 14, 2013
Mine is to become a Medical Lab Tech, I am almost there. I am finishing my first two years and just have two more. I knew a girl whose dream was also to be a marine biologist. She was never able to finish due to medical reasons.
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From kadajclone on March 13, 2013
Once again thank you for answering my questions. I lol'd at Hana misinterpreting the point of the meeting and freaking out at the prospect of being claimed by Harribel. Well I suppose this answers my question from Part 1 of POV as to whether or not female arrancar can claim other females. With your unique writing style and take on Arrancar relationships I would love to read a bleach femslash written by you.

Now as for my reaction to the fact that there will be Soi in the next chapter:
http://i.imgur.com/YjKk9.gif
and
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mczls3J7dM1riusceo1_500.gif

-waits patiently for next chapt-
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From kadajclone on March 09, 2013
Ok once again, sorry in advance if these are bothering you, but I just have some more questions if you would not mind answering that is.

1. You mentioned in passing that their were those who did not like Hana's position in her squad, but beyond that how do people feel about her closeness with a few of the Arrancar and the kids? Would some of those still holding on to the old way's see her as a traitor? or would they try to turn her opinion of the Arrancar she is friends by telling her the circumstance of the war and what came after.

2. How do the more "humane" Arrancar, like Starrk and Harribel feel about the current regime? Neither are fans of rape and have no interest in unnecessary cruelty. Harribel,much like her predecessor defies many of the basic hollow characteristics. You may have answered this already in part 1 and I may have missed it. And when the day comes that the rebels finally make there move, what side will these to fall too? I highly doubt the captains they have claimed want to stay in there current situations forever despite how gently they are treated in comparison to other claimed individuals and they most definitely would not want to fight there old comrades. And while neither Starrk or Harribel have harmed anyone one needlessly, they still helped usher in Aizen's rule and put the Shinigami population into current lot in life. It would be a bit of a double standard to hate Aizen and not feel any ill feelings towards his Arrancar soldiers. And I don't mean to sound presumptius but outside of Starrk,Harribel, Grimm and grudgingly Ulqy(ince he owned up to what he did and changed) I have a hard time seeing the majority of the Arrancar population surviving this story after all that has happened.

I understand that the answers may come as the story progresses and I should be patient, but I am a big fan of your Stories and am very very curious lol. And sorry if I have asked these questions before.

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From ANON - Hi on March 09, 2013
Just a question but it has a long set up. Orihime's powers can't heal what has been surgically sealed together and already allowed to heal right? As with the case of Byakuya's throat. But in the manga she did heal Grimmjow's arm and that had to have been a healed stump and Aizen said it was a time reversal. Time reversal, her "I reject" powers should have healed Byakuya's throat so I assume that's a plot twist for the story. You said she couldn't heal the live infection in Jushiro but could heal the damaged tissue. So my question is what would happen to Jushiro of he had open surgery with Orihime in the room? Like the surgens are there to remove the nodes of tuberculosis and physically have the disease taken from him and Orihime is there to close and heal him up? It would be removing parts of his lungs with no chance yet to heal and seal. So would they come back like normal like Grimmjow's arm did or would you stick with your idea that surgical cuts would just eliminate that part of Jushiro's lungs if Orihime fixed them? I have to think they would heal perfectly fine because a gouge made by a sword is healed by Orihime and little difference to the body between sword and scalpel. Yet I don't know with your story. I know it's kind of a mute point because you haven't mentioned the Shinigami's doing more than Kido and repairing what is already exposed is wound, but if the surgen was Szayel hypothetically what would happen?
Sorry if that was long and a bother but I was just wondering.
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