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Reviews for Prize of Victory 2

By : NovaAlexandria

From ANON - Mystify on July 20, 2013
Oh and to your weekly question, I hate the Quincy storyline crap in the manga right now it sucks they suck and Uryu is going to turn against all his friends due to his "Quincy pride" bull. Although out was intriguing finding out Isshin's back story.
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From ANON - Mystify on July 20, 2013
Yay! I've been dying for this chapter thank you for the update! Do have a question though when will Tatski get pregnant and what will Nnoitra think about them having a child? I have a feeling he'd become attached really quickly :-) will Ajuga and Dieamus ever start to like each other like Karin hinted to Grimmjow? Sorry about all the questions I'm just really excited.
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From ANON - Sarah on July 12, 2013
Another amazing chapter :).
And to answer your question; I think that Kubo did a good job with most of the espada. We have to remember he introduced 10 new characters to an already huge cast. The fights and such were already super long (I think the noi/kenpachi fight lasted like 3 episodes). There were some espada (Grimmjow and Halibel) that I thought were killed off a little too easily or early, but luckily we see that most of the espada that seemed to meet a premature end aren't dead. I'm just glad that he wasn't entirely done with them once Aizen was defeated. There were too many amazing characters to just leave them out for the rest of the series.
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From ANON - Arridu on July 04, 2013
Well hopefully you posted this chapter from your bunker as I imagine a few people are still up in arms about the last chapter *hiding pitchfork*, as for your question of this week,that varied. Starrk I liked, got a fairly good fight. Barragon I felt got a suitable final battle, only being defeated due to his arrogant insistence on toying with his foes rather then, as you said, nuking the field, and surviving everything thrown at him with minimal harm save for his own power. Halibel...not too impressed by given that her battle was a one on one followed by Aizen being a complete SOB and trying to kill her for no reason. Ulquiorra definitely had exactly how strong he was shown but personally I thought Ichigo's new hollow form was pretty much an asspull by Kubo. Nnoitora I would say went down rather easily had it not been for the fact that his opponent was Zaraki Kenpachi, Grimmjow, eh it was a pretty epic battle. Szayel...no real comment, he was established as a credible threat if mostly due to his scientific skills, but the finale left much to be desired. Zommari, well his power was interesting but he rather disappointed, still at least he was better then the 9th who died against RUkia, at the time not even a fuktaicho. Yammy...well show me one person who doesn't consider the offscreening to be crap and I'll dispatch them even more eagerly then I would the brute himself!
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From ANON - Kain on July 03, 2013
Lovely and sweet chapter. Definitely went a long way to healing the many wounds the last chapter left. There needs to be more happy sex lol. Any chance we can have a Ggio/soi scene? We know that those two have grown close in there shared misery but we don't get many scenes with just those two being together.

Now I will definitely agree with you that the Espada fights did not live up to the hype they were given. Here we are told that these Arrancar are the baddest of the bad....only for them to get what amounts to curb stomped and then for Aizen to try and finish off the ONE Espada that was able to keep going all because he felt she was no longer useful. If Starrk had a true desire to fight from the get go he may have actually won but he simply did not have the will and after Lillinet died he simply rolled over. Barragan survived Soi fons bankai twice and only died do to his own power. Now in regards to Nnoitora, while he gave an impressive showing, ya must remember that Ichigo had literally only a minute prior gone to war against Grimmjow and was nowhere near at his best, Nel reverted back to her child state before she could cause any real damage, and Kenpachi has that horrible habit of dragging shit out and once he got serious and noticed that he might actually freaking die he bested Nnoitora in a single move......although the whole 2 hands thing I felt was bull and it would have been an awesome time for Kubo to reveal his true Shikai at least. And in regards to Yammi he was also fighting people who were in less than stellar condition.

Also on a side note and does not have much to do with the above, can I just say that possibly my favorite fight during the whole arc was the Ichigo vs Grimmjow fight. Here you had two opponents, who at the time were very close to being equal in power going all out against each other. There was no sudden plot twist or super transformation, just two very similar in some ways, warriors tearing each other apart and both refusing to stay down. I think one of the things that endeared grimmjow to me so much was that he was almost a villainous dark reflection of Ichigo:

-mouths off to people much stronger than him and does not give a fuck what their rank is.

-Sheer determination against impossible odds( I mean seriously, could be at the point of death and still be able to throw down.

-Repays a debt and wont go after opponents that arent worth fighting anymore.......except for Ichigo who he will go to town with regardless of his condition lol.

That and he is the only person in 'canon' to defeat Ichigo TWICE( Ichigo would have been killed if Rukia and Shinji had not shown up during round 2, so yes I count that. Now don't get me wrong, I adore Ichigo but once his mask failed him he was getting his ass stomped and when he tried to reform his maks Grimm actually stopped to LET him and only continued the assualt when he noticed that Ichigo could not bring it back. and if this is wrong please correct me)

I also happened to notice that you put brackets around 'good guys', does that hold some relevance?

loved the Inuyasha reference by the way, and I agree, ya gotta make sure the guys head doesn't get to big.

-waits patiently for next chapter-

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From ANON - Anon on July 03, 2013
Barrangans battle fit his personality.

He was an arrogant D-Bag with a sense of superiority bordering on the delusional.

It's only natural that he'd try to mind F his enemies and overlook his crippling weakness.

Ichigo only lost to Nnoitra because he was tired, if he was at full strength it would've been one sided in Ichigo's favor.
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From ANON - anon on July 01, 2013
hmmm you have a point there, so that I guess that rules out me wanting to punch you but a girl can still fantasize o(^_^)o BUT from what you said, does that mean Byakuya will get his revenge (((o(*＾＿＾*)o))) if true, then I will definitely look forward to that ($.$) but if not, I will throw imaginary pies at you

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From ANON - Caitriona on June 30, 2013
As I've been reading and reading and reading (I decided to re-read the whole first piece before starting this one) I started wondering if Grimm's blood was now considered "royal" since he sired a child by someone of the royal lineage. If it was, would the Swarm start going after him, too? Also, the Swarm is an EXCELLENT antagonist. Love them.

My thoughts on this story are far to many to post. I hate Aizen and Yammy with a passion that borders on insanity. Even if Yammy is tortured for 15 years I don't think I would forgive him for what he's done to Byakuya. I have totally forgiven Gin and wish that he could get out from under Aizen's thumbs. I'm actually happy for Toshiro. The whole relationship with Nano, Hana, Jushiro, Starrk, Grimm, Karen, Ajuga, etc is a wonderful one. The only positive thing that Aizen has done.

I'm terribly eager to find out what is going on with the exiles.

Thanks so much for writing this for us!
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From ANON - Sarah on June 30, 2013
Oh god I think I heard my heart break with this one. My hate for Yammy grows.
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From ANON - Anon on June 28, 2013
:'( I'm sorry, I hate to say this because I love your stories but this chapter made me sick! If there's anymore torture of the Zanpakto I'm going to have to stop reading this.......
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From kadajclone on June 27, 2013
Holy

Everlasting

Shit

wh...what....how could you.....WHY would you........ow.....oooowwwww........you just drop kicked my feels and then pissed on the crumpled remains. Oh Jesus if it gets out to the more abusive Arrancar that they can literally rape their pets souls, it is going to be hell. Byakuya has lost the last remnants of Hisana as well as his hope of being saved and has had to witness the desecration of his last sanctuary. It says a lot when I am preferring freaking Aizen to someone, any chance he will find out that Yammi worked a fucking loophole around his orders. I have a question about Senbonzakura though, I try to forget that go awful Zanpaktou spirit filler arc but when he is able to physically interact with the material word wouldn't Senbonzakura be able to use Bankai? It might just be because Byakuya was in such bad condition but I figured Senbonzakura would be a little quicker on his feet especially against a slow brute like Yammi. another thing that has been on my mind since I first started reading POV, but are the Arrancar in your story much stronger than their anime/manga counterparts? In the anime/manga the fights, while hard were consecutively in the captains favor and they had bested the Espada(except for Harribel who like a bad ass fought off 2 LT level vaizards and a captain) before Ichigo could even arrive, I mean hell Byakuya and Zaraki curb stomped a fully released and pissed off Yammi and here it just seems like they steamrolled over the captains during the battle in the fake Karakura town and the fights in Hueco Mundo and are much stronger. Even Ggio managed to survive here when he was wasted by Soi when she decided to get serious in the manga. This fic fits the "For want of a nail" trope to the max lol.

And for as dark as this story gets at times....and despite me wanting many MANY characters dead.......you have the guts to tackle very uncomfortable things(read your reply to koh on fanfiction.net)in a very intelligent manner,give very respectful replies to your curious readers and treat characters crimes and peoples reactions to them in a very believable manner. I mean I HATED Ulquiorra in the beginning and still have not forgiven him entirely for the whole 5 year daily rape of Orihime but you have given him some nice character development and have had him show genuine remorse for giving into his instincts and I adore how sweet Ggio is on Soi and Tatsuki and Tesra are the most stable couple in this hell hole. Although Ichigo might take offense to finding out his childhood friend is with the Fraccion that tortured him a little after his fight with grimmjow, unless that didn't happen here and I might need to go back and re-read a few of Nnoitora's chapters to see if their was even any mention of him battle Zaraki. It says a lot that I started out this story despising the Arrancar for their treatment but over time grew to like a few of them.

Bunker question: Hmm when can ya leave huh?

-sets up lawn chair right outside bunker.....and waits-

anytime.......any.time.at.all

although all will be forgiven if there is a quick update ;D

-waits patiently in lawn chair for the next chater-
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From ANON - Mystify on June 25, 2013
First of all, I want to say I'm super addicted to your stories Nova! The POV series has had me on the edge of my seat since chapter 1, and I die waiting for updates! I was upset in POV2 when Szayel got targeted again, I think that was the only thing I didn't like about the series was Aizen's reasons for torture and how he did it, made me cringe...but it made me hate him more than I thought he could so that's a perk! XD Anywho, I hope you continue with your stories and updates, loved the HMKs and the side stories you've written based off of their story too. Oh, and I have a theory about Diaemus since the topic of mates was brought up, I hope I'm right, but won't say here in case it spoils something.
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From ANON - anon on June 25, 2013
If I could punch you, I would so do it. I mean WHY do you keep picking on Byakuya? T.T you make me cry...please make him happier m(_ _)m
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From ANON - Sarah on June 17, 2013
So I'm pretty sure I real POV in like a week and now I'm finally cought up! I've read a few of your older stories and I have to say that your writting is amazing; and it's gotten better over the years! I'm kind of terrible at writing reviews but I just thought I'd let you know that you recently gained a new reader who is in love with your work! I feel like you have the best out come to what would've happened if the Winter War was lost.
And oh my goodness I really don't think I can take much more of Byakuya being tortured, it's killing me :( I hope Yammy gets eaten by the swarm >:)
I keep up with the Manga as well and I just have to say that I can't wait for Grimmjow to make a real debut!
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From ANON - MudbloodMalfoy on June 17, 2013
I've loved this so far! True it's dark, but I like how you aren't afraid to go there, to push the characters to the absolute limit, then just a little farther. You're an amazing author.

On a different note, are you going to kill Byakuya? :/
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