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From Kain on October 23, 2013
knowing what today is

I await patiently outside your bunker armed with a machete.
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From ANON - gai24 on October 19, 2013
Usually I just read but I absolutely must comment on the pairing of Toshiro x Harribel....brilliant. Keep up the great work.
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From ANON - Arridu on October 16, 2013
That bunker shall offer little protection when you are besieged by rabid fans and run out of food, but personally not too surprised by this development, ehat else would a unstable maniac with a god complex who questioned the loyalty of his underling do after all? So I personally won't be outside the bunker, I'll save that for Aizen's next atrocity. That said in spite of the 50/50 chance of it being something horrific looking forward to reading more :)
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From ANON - Mofaf1 on October 16, 2013
Poor Soi Fon & Ggio; hope that rod gets buried deep inside Barragan while stuck in the on position with an everlasting power source ... Hmmm maybe motion powered so every little flicker of an eyelid or twitch of his lips gives it power and sets it off. Of course on the positive side it gets Soi Fon & the baby well cared for and safely out of Barragan's reach. Also, since Starrk has only been required to claim Jushiro and not claim Nanao, the First can claim Soi Fon if necessary to keep her & the baby safe (and ease Ggio's concerns a bit if informed of the emergency plan).

Fav chip dip: jalape�o ranch dip ... From Chuy's Mexican Restaurant. It's a creamy ranch with a mild kick from shreaded jalape�os with the juice.
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From Kain on October 16, 2013
Oh you evil women........I legit cried....fucking CRIED!!

And that god damn motherfucking Kennel.......I had almost forgotten about it. I still can't imagine 15 years of among the already many atrocities......having to live/sleep in one of those and only being called out for a battle or abuse. That does shit too your pride. One of the two Arrancar that I actually wouldn't mind seeing survive this fic and you go and thrash his soul like this. I know in quite a few previous reviews I have expressed a wish of seeing the Arrancar populace get hit with a fuck ton of painful everlasting karma............but did it have to happen to the ONE that actually turned his ways around completely and realize what life was like now for the Shinigami's they conquered and become a total sweetheart? I would count Grimm but that kitty is still a bit of an ass at times lol.

I hope that bunker of yours can withstand the rage you have invoked in your readers. And all this after having read Soi blasting the shit out of that Quincy with her Bankai in the latest bleach chapter. You killed my high damn it lol.

And very well.....I shall try to be patient.

this a solo chap or double/triple update?

-waits patiently for next chapter-
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From ANON - MilissaRukia on October 10, 2013
Wonderful update I enjoyed the little look into Hitsaguya and the thirds relationship along with his views on things. I Feel for Hanna her mom should of told her sooner but I know how hard it is to tell your children things that are not of good consequence. I have decided to try my best to review when I read a story I know how much I love reviews and mine are not written as well as yours are and not near as popular. Thank you so much for a wonderful read.
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From ANON - Mystify on October 10, 2013
Yay another triple update!! I'm so happy that Toshiro has realized his feelings for Harribel, it's about time those guys got started on a baby, they will both be wonderful parents. I feel really bad for Hana, but I think this is for the best. It will help her to grow and mature going through this kind of thing, I just hope she will forgive Stark and Lili soon. Considering what could have happened to Jushiro and Nanao if he hadn't claimed them, theyy were very lucky. And all the First ever wanted was a family, and Hana being born brought them all closer together. Throw in Grimmjow and his Mate and cub, and the family they always wanted is complete. Hana I'm sure realizes that in the world they live in now, they are going to need those family ties to continue to survive. Now, on another note, can I spend Halloween at your place, ot sounds fun!!
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From ANON - Sarah on October 09, 2013
Another amazing chapter! I love this side of Tai, it's very nice! And I read somewhere that the story of her hollow hole you mentioned is canon(ish). It was in one of those character books right? Anyway, I love seeing a grown up Shiro *shivers* seeexxxyyy. Lol. And poor Hana :( I loved the fatherly reaction from Toshiro though! Who said he couldn't be a great father?
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From Kain on October 09, 2013
To piggyback off of my previous review in regards to the femslash comment. Like perhaps one of Harribels Fraccion could nab themselves a willing shinigami female O.C. Wouldn't have to be anything big and could be just mentioned in passing but I am having femslash withdrawals and while you are a pro at yaoi I would love to see your handle on yuri.

Another thing in regards to her Fraccion since they can fuse parts of themselves to create Ayon, would it be possible for all three of them to merge their reiatsu to all claim 1 person? Or am i getting ahead of myself?
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From Kain on October 09, 2013
Well that was a new side too Harribel. Rare to see her so vulnerable and affectionate. It trips my mind that I can simultaneously agree wholeheartedly with what hyourinmaru is trying to beat into Toshiro's skull(due to my distaste for most Arrancars, sorry that may never change) while at the same time seeing the logic and Toshiro's counter argument. They are in between a rock and a hard place and no matter which option they choose they are fucked, literally in one case. He knows how fucked things are but is persevering not only for himself but his squad of survivors and if he has too make a choice he will choose the lesser of two evils. He knows even if he escaped he might not get very far and even if Aizen spares him he may very well be given to brutes like Yammy or Barragan or hell, Aizen might even keep him for a personal torture toy-shiver-.

now before I forget, ahem:

nooooooooooooooooooooooooo LISA CHAAAAAAAN-echo-echo-echo.

Will be interesting to see how the Hana/Harribel/Toshiro talk goes, I personally expect quite a few tears. It's only going to get worse when the other kids discover what been kept from them.

I too have noticed a theme in the reviews.......I am fairly certain my reviews attribute to the theme lol. I think it has too do with the fact that in part one and up too this point the tidbits we were given about the how the claimed were treated and what we saw of what a few POV's had to go through, it created a deep sense of sympathy for the conquered and an even deeper hatred for the conquerors. I like reading other peoples review to get a feel on how they view things so, while in the middle of typing this I swung by fanfiction.net and I think reviewer "mikasa" nailed quite a few points on why the theme is so reoccurring. Now while I may not be as passionate as he/she put it, in their responses, I agree with some of what they wrote, not all but some. Forgiveness is a hard thing and the past can't be rewritten. As I stated earlier it's a shitty situation for all involved and people gotta swallow their pride at times and go along with the shit storm or be swept up in it's wake.(holy shit that was deep, totes writing that down)

Fairly cute and hot chapter, I am growing a littler fonder of toshiro and Harribels relationship, mostly due to the fact that she has never really harmed him and drops all pretenses of 'ownership' when they are alone. Hopefully we get to see more relationships like theirs pop up from the less known pairings. I enjoyed their talk and correct me if I am wrong but was this line:

�Did taking his offer help with that void inside of you?�

Toshiro's way of asking her if everything she has gained from joining up with Aizen has been worth it?

Hey if the theme that some reviews, mine included start to get you down, remember this, you.are.a.BRILLIANT writer. Heads and shoulders above many and I am sure that you have noticed that even with the reoccurring theme of some reviews, every last one of them also carries praise of your work.

-prays for a possible future femlsash shini/arrancar relationship to satisfy his Yuri fix-

-prays for a double update and waits patiently for whatever comes-
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From ANON - Darkstar on October 05, 2013
@Chapter 26: Hey, guess who's a jackass? ME! (*facepalms*) Seriously, I really should have been clever enough to realize that the whole "what will their kid look like?" thing was just a speculative remark, and not a statement!

As to the content of the story, I initially found myself rolling my eyes as Hana's reaction, wondering how such a smart person could ever reach such a childishly simplistic conclusion regarding such a complex situation... THEN, I remembered that she's ONLY 15, and that I could hardly expect her to have the best perspective on the situation... Christ, I'm getting old! I just expect these kids to be all reasonable, while forgetting that they're all still only between 10-15 years old. And then, you tell us- ahead of time!- that she's going interrupt/cockblock Toshiro and Tia! Man, the last thing that poor guy needs is to have Hana burst in like a total gooseberry!

Seriously, Hiyori was such a bitch in this chapter! There's no "us" vs "them" in this situation, the truth is it's "all of us" vs "that one huge sadistic asshole who wrecked everything". BTW, I loled when Hana refers to the Aizen-centric revisionist history books!
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From ANON - Avi on October 03, 2013
Chapter: Traitor!
Well I think a lot if people thought Harribel was pregnant after the comment that I think sun sun made to Renji and Vandula about how she hoped Harribel's baby is as pretty as she is. I thought so sort of too after hearing it. But clearly she's not yet. I can't wait to see her kid when she is though.

I have to say I feel as equally sorry for both Stark, Lilennett and Hana it's so sad and I just want to hug them all and make them forgive each other!!! But it was fantastic chapter and I had to tab my eyes on that one it was awful, sweet and sad but good at the same time.

I would want to turn into a Pegasus or a Phoenix honestly I can't decide between the two both of them would be awesome to turn into. Keep up the great work I can't wait to read the next chapters I always look forward to them!!' I hope you are doing well
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From Anon on October 02, 2013
I hope I'm not giving the wrong idea. I meant that they find a hollow doing something obscenely evil to a claimed person and they find out that's how Ulquiorra used to treat Orihime and that he doesn't see anything wrong with a claimer treating a claimed or unclaimed person that way even though he'd never do it to Orihime.
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From Kain on October 02, 2013
Too piggy back off of my last review, is there any chance of another double or triple update to go with this one? I am so impatient lol.
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From Kain on October 02, 2013
No.....of course I didn't need my soul, feel free to crush it at your leisure.

Well we knew it was coming and by god did it sting, like ripping off a band aid off of a fresh wound.
I totally thought though that Lisa, given she was Shunsui's former LT would be the one to break the news to Hana, in a perhaps more gentler than Hiyori fashion. For a second I thought Harribels Fraccion were gonna spill the beans. Sucks how she had to find out though and learn that she has been lied too for all these years. It must hurt to be called a traitor and it saddens me that Hana more or less thinks of herself as a slave instead. She doesn't know the full story about anything that happened and was born after the war so this is all she knows. And of course that ass clown Aizen would make it so history looked favorably on him.

Now as you have seen in my previous reviews, I am decidedly anti-arrancar for the most part, but I will admit that Starrk is a very interesting and complex character. He doesn't care for power,prestige,politics or cruelty...........he just does not want to be alone. And it is true, in another life and under different circumstances, he and Shunsui could very well have been the best of friends.

Stoked to see what Tohiro and Harribel talk about, something from the war perhaps? And how they will take Hana finding out the secret.......although she might get pissed at them since they knew as well.

Now not to rustle anyone's jimmies but for the most part I agree with what Anon wrote above me. The only part I would disagree with with is that while yes, Ulq still keeps a claim on Orihime, he in no way treats her as he used too. It does NOT make what he did okay and NEVER will, but he does not force himself on her anymore and regrets it. This story can shift from black and grey morality, grey and grey morality to black and white morality in a heartbeat.

I would want to be a Phoenix because I would look so damn majestic.......and the rebirth deal is a massive plus.

-waits patiently for the next chapter-
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