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Reviews for Prize of Victory 2

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From ANON - Avi on November 13, 2013
I know one thing that I would love to see is Hana giving a hug to Stark and Lillinett I feel so bad for those two! I know Hana needs time but it would be absolutely adorable!!!! And so needed! :) I feel bad for Hana and for everyone really. I hope things work out but it sounds like things are about to get rocking if Aizen breaks their last rule. A lovely chapter as always!!! Keep up te good work. Is the Real King still going on? Just want to be sure. I love that one as well
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From ANON - Herringurl on November 08, 2013
I absolutely adore this story! I check back for updates all the time! I love the world you have created! Though I am sad to see Kyoraku dead. It would be an interested plot twist if it turns out he's actually alive and with Kurosaki and the other "rebels". Please update as often as you can! I'm so excited!! and I love the way you have portrayed Starrk and the other espada!
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From ANON - Avi on November 04, 2013
Another great chapter as always I can't wait to read the next chapter! So are there by chance pictures of the kids on here and the Real King's pack as well? They all sound so adorable I'd love to see them drawn, but you probably have something in the works or something. I hope the Real King is still being written too, I've caught up on both Prize of Victory 2 and the Real King :)
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From ANON - Avi on November 04, 2013
While I didn't like this chapter as much because poor Soi Fon and her cute little kitty mate I hated what happened to him but I love how everyone is coming together to help her and hopefully good things will happen like Barrigan's ultimate and ugly death and the same goes for Yammy! I hope your doing well I loved how Toshiro and Tia worked to help Hana and I can't wait to see her and Stark and Lillnet hopefully rekindle their relationship because I mean they just have too!!! I enjoyed this chapter and you and Black Fox always wrote great chapters!!!
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From ANON - snowfloweroftoshiro241 on October 30, 2013
that was short but dramatic.
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From Kain on October 30, 2013
lovely little father/daughter talk. Ajuga making plans to go after Yammy, although like her father said, it would have to be quick because in his released state he is beyond even Starrk in terms of reiatsu and would decimate her if she didn't get the job done quickly. It's always interesting too see Ajuga's inner struggle with her hollow half's "weak obey the strong" mentality and her human half's morality and her natural innate Kurosaki chronic hero syndrome. I mean seriously that family can't stand by when there is injustice going on, and God help anyone who stands in their way of correcting a wrong. When you first introduced her, I ain't gonna lie, I was not too fond of her for quite some time, but you have given her some really awesome character development and I view her more as a "jerk with a heart of gold". She can say some pretty demeaning and crass things, especially in regards to Shinigami, but you know she means no real insult and means well. Again, She is part hollow after all and will obviously have a different moral viewpoint than others, even if it's wrong. That and she inherited her dad's total lack of tact lol.

I also like how you shift between the different races point of view on things. The Arrancars are more instinct driven and believe "might makes right"and less prone to guilt or remorse while the human/shinigami races see how wrong the current world is and hope for a better tomorrow that might not come.

Happy the "why let the Arrancar soldiers live" thing will be brought up in future chapters. That has always been a thing on my mind since I first started reading POV, since as hard as I try I just cannot see an abundance of numeros being given the 'get out of jail free card". 'Some' of the Espada and fraccion sure, the rest? Can't see it no matter what scenario I think of.

Love the story regardless of what happens and are you gonna do another double/triple update?

-waits patiently for next chapter-

P.S

Tell Black Fox I shall return next week for the hand I lost in our battle. And she owes me a new machete, and I am pretty sure she stole 5 dollars in change from me while I was bleeding out on the ground.

edit*

Had to make a few corrections.
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From Kain on October 29, 2013
New bleach chapter out early: http://kissmanga.com/Manga/Bleach/Bleach-555--The-Hero?id=178350

Hot damn I like this composed and so sure of himself Ichigo. He is now a true Shinigami and his power fluctuations seem to have stabilized so now he can fight at his peak with no problems.

and Bambietta continues to be my favorite Stern Ritter.
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From ANON - Darkstar on October 28, 2013
@Chapter 36: Review Overtime!

While reading the other reviews, I noted that the reviewer "Kain" brings up some issues that crossed my mind a couple of times as well, namely what will happen to the Arrancar if Aizen is defeated. First off, the Shinigami are hardly in a position to launch some kind of huge purge, considering that all the ones with any real power are presently under the control of/indebted to the most powerful Arrancar- and in some cases, as with Stark and Halibell, they're under their protection as well. Szayel claiming Nemu is probably the best thing that happened to her, he sure as hell treats her way better than Mayuri ever did, the guy's let himself be brutalized rather than betray Karin and her family. Also, it's obvious that Orihime loves ulquiorra and their son, and that Tatsuki is just as devoted to Tesla- especially now that she's pregnant with his cub. And Soifon has clearly bonded with Ggio. Even Rangiku just can't cut her ties with Nnoitra- he's the father of their children.

If Aizen is overthrown, I image it will be through a concerted effort by the Shinigami, Humans, and Arrancar. Even if they put Karin (or someone else with suitable blood) on the Celestial Throne, they'll have to declare some form general amnesty for the mixed population, because I don't imagine the Arrancar surrendering what they've gained (not after experiencing this new existence). After all, reprisals from either side would make things worse- and defeat the whole point of ousting Aizen, just to plunge the Soul Realm into another conflict. As much as some of the Shinigami might not like it, it seems to me that a lot of the Arrancar are likely there to stay, especially since there could be more mixed children in the near future- born from Arrancar and Souls in the general population that we simply don't know about yet.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next update.
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From ANON - Darkstar on October 27, 2013
@Chapter 31: It was nice to finally get back to the UlquiHime family. Diaemus is such a nice, sensible young man, and resourceful too- making his own breakfast and even preparing some for his parents. Though, it's funny that he's not at the point where he starts noticing girls... Boy, things will be awkward when he starts becoming aware of them, especially with all the girls/women around him. I'm glad that Tatsuki is in agreement about combining household with Nnoitra and Ran- remember, people, safety in numbers!

As for all the angst-waves coming from the others... You're evil madam, that's the only explanation I can think of for all the suffering being inflicted on Byakuya and Gin, and now pore Ggio! Man, it's like kicking the puppy- or, kitten, in his case. But seriously, I'm really feeling the absence of Stark and Lilinette. I guess it's true, you never really appreciate someone until they're gone. Still, I'm looking forward to Hana finally getting her issues sorted out, because I hate seeing Stark and Lili being miserable. Still, it should be interesting to hear Jushiro's take on events- seriously, if this guy can forgive them, then there's no reason for Hana to stay upset. (Here's hoping!)

Oh, and I just found that the Bleach Anime was canceled last year, and that it was replaced by the Naruto comedy spin-off with Lee. At least this proves that some people are getting sick of Kubo's crap! The only reason I even looked back into the series was because I found out that Ichigo is working for this HOT single mother. The series sucks, but Ikumi is a total vixen! I have to say, the fact that Ichigo isn't attracted to her may be the conclusive proof that he's gay- man, the fangirls may be right about him!

As for your question... From my childhood, I'd have to say "The Nightmare Before Christmas". Fittingly, I'd have to say that the closest to a favorite Halloween movie I have now is "Paranorman".
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From ANON - snowfloweroftoshiro241 on October 26, 2013
oooo bastardo barragan! fave halloween movies are the halloween towns, hocus pocus, spirited away (yes i count it) cool_ash23@hotmail.com
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From ANON - snowfloweroftoshiro241 on October 26, 2013
poor hana and man toshiro you got balls for brains. karin should have another baby
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From ANON - snowfloweroftoshiro241 on October 26, 2013
poor hana.
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From ANON - karin-grimmprincess24 on October 26, 2013
i love it. my fave cross race ones are: karin-grimmjow, ggio-soi, ggio-rangiku, tats-tesra,
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From ANON - snowfloweroftoshiro241 on October 25, 2013
poor gin. i feel for him. i have had hyperthermia and pneumonia. was in hospital for 1 1/2 weeks. two the answer to the question would be in bleach: id kill cang du if he werent allready iced! and as nodt!
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From Kain on October 23, 2013
I am a little curious about something, Karin wants the escapees to succeed in bringing down Aizen right? Well does she realize that the escapees and possibly quite a few others intend on taking out the remaining numeros army as well? I adore Karin on and off and agree that Aizen is a horrendous piece of dog shit, but he is only a part of the problem. Her manner of thinking may be a little biased do to having been protected and only hearing stories and seeing only a few cases first hand for the better part of 15 years. If/when Aizen is brought down, why bother sparing his Arrancar soldiers? They are the primary reason Aizen succeeded in his goal and from what we have seen his acts of cruelty are no different from what they used to do....and what some still continue to do. And if/when Aizen goes down......it' a given that the whole "pet"/claimed system is going down with him. He is the lynchpin so to speak. Without him their as a deterrent, their is not a single Arrancar who could get away with even referring to someone a a pet let along abuse them. People have put up with it because their is literally nothing else they can do but with the near immortal pseudo-God out of commision, their is going to be a reckoning and I doubt even the Captains who have gained a somewhat "friendship" with their claim holders will allow themselves to continue to be claimed. Maybe she is just focusing on Aizen's fall but it seems to be whenever she thinks about someone bringing him down she neglects to consider the fate of his soldiers. And let me be clear I am in NO WAY defending that prick, but he does not actively go out and tell his troops to be utter cocks to their "pets", he doesn't stop them of course but you don't see him commanding them to commit any atrocities. Let the blame be placed on the person that did the deed.

Ahem, now that that's out of the way.

I don't know why I did not put 2 and 2 together in regards to Soi staying at the estate............but since yuro has been known to occasionally visit during her sneak in's......this means the chances of her coming into contact with Soi have risen!!!!!!!!!

http://media.tumblr.com/8cfc9aadfb92a8cc8e3cae07b93a8809/tumblr_inline_mv1tqxB3ta1r7or11.gif

and now last but not least.

the possibility of Harribel or her faccion........claiming Soi............................

......all.....is.....forgiven

I repeat

ALL
Is
Forgiven-finishes in a sob-

I..I mean sure... I still want to see a large part of the arrancar populace burn in fiery torment....an...and sure I am soooooo gonna machete the crap out of Black Fox when she arrives but this, THIS makes me so freaking happy. Soi is my favorite bleach(female)character and things, after 15 long years of shame and abuse are starting to look up for her.

If Soi has to deal with being forced to be a "pet" then their is no one better that Harribel to take her in. She is the opposite of Barragan in every conceivable way.

-treats those in her household with respect and care
-does not condone abuse or rape
-next to Starrk is the only REALLY decent Arrancar(I.E she avoids killing unless absolutely necessary) and does not hold her herself above others and flaunt her position.

Glad to see hana come home and can't wait for her talk with ukitake and the talk between Ajuga and Grimm. Perhaps a double/ triple update if there immediate followups to this chapter?

Question: Ah, Hocus Pocus, now that brings back some memories.

-waits patiently for the next chapter-

-then assumes the lotus position in front of the bunker, placing machete across lap.......and listens for the far off sound..........of high powered kitchen knives.......

"....its a good day to die"
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