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Reviews for Prize of Victory 2

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From ANON - Leanne on March 13, 2014
Yay! Ichigo's going to find out he is a uncle X3 Very good chapter but please let Aizen die soon
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From ANON - Darkstar on March 13, 2014
@Chapter 56: Holly crap! A lot happened in this one chapter... The way thing played out, this is like a REALLY good season-end cliffhanger- like when the Borg abducted Capt. Picard at the end of season 3 of TNG! I just have to hold my hands up and applaud you for this excellent installment. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next.

As for the chapter... Well, I wasn't sure what to expect, other than that the whole conspiracy was about to come crashing down the anti-Aizen faction within the Sereitei. So, it would seem that Ajuga has not just a boyfriend- but a fiance (lol). Not that I'm complaining, because I totally ship those two together. You are the only writer that has such a great story that I actually have an OTP consisting of two OCs! On a slightly more serious note, one of the reaons I like this couple is because they're such a perfect and logical fit for each other- I very much get a fire and ice vibe from those two when they're interacting with each other. And as we've all learned from Ichigo and Ulquiorra's relationships- no matter how much you might not admit to it at first, you always end up with the person who infuriates you the most (lol).

And poor poor Ichigo... He's about to meet his half-hollow niece- who's the daughter of one of his greatest enemies- and the half-hollow son of Orihime and Ulquiorra- who's been 'spirit-engaged' to his niece. This means that Ichigo will probably want to kill Grimmjow for sleeping with his sister, while Grimmjaw wants to kill Diaemus because he think's he's been fooling around with HIS daughter. AND, lest we forget that Yuroichi also said that they kept Ichigo in the dark about all these half-breed kids to keep him from doing something stupid... so he's about to meet two people who've been hidden from him for over a decade. Poor Ichi, I'm sorry that I find this so funny.

My only immediate concerns are Abisara and Vindula, but I'm sure Stark and Lilinette (plus Jushiro, and even Halibell & Toshiro) will make sure that nothing happens to them. But as for Byakuya... Oh god, I cannot say enough how sorry I feel for this guy. As a straight man myself, I tremble when I think about all that's been inflicted upon this man! Seriously, on a list of things I NEVER want to happen to me, I can say with certainty that being prison-raped is near the top of the list. And poor Ggio-kitty...

Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one!
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From Kain on March 12, 2014
Well.......ouch....I mean really OUCH.

Ajuga must feel like shit right now, it was her recklessness that caused the current situation and threw a wrench into the big plan. Will be interesting to see how Ajuga/Grimm/Diaemus/Szyel conduct themselves around people who probably think less than favorable about them. Renji knows the escapees and along with Yuro might be able to vouch for them but there I still some bad blood between the 2 sides. Ichigo is going to go fucking NUCLEAR when he finds out what Aizen intends on doing to his sister. Her being taken by Grimm was bad enough for him but now shits really hit the fan. At least he will finally be able to see his niece.........that NO ONE told him about.......I am going to love that scene. Givin his feelings in regard to Ulq and what he knows happened to Hime, you would imagine it would be hard for him to look at Diaemus without remembering his failure.

It also occurred to me that with the children in such close proximity to say, Hiyori? There is a very high chance that she will spill the beans on a lot of what the kids parents got up to and there part in the war like she did with Hana. Diaemus respects his father immensely and the truth of what happened before he changed into a better being is going to cut deep.

Given that aizen has the Hogyouku and survived getting impaled and blown up partially by Gin,It's a bit of a stretch that he would be wary of Karin placing a claim on him and forceing him to kill himself. Granted she does not know about what Gin tried and doesn't know about Aizens high speed regeneration. Or is Aizen just prolonging his little game and letting her hopes get raised before doing business as usual and crushing them? If anything, losing the thrones power has only made Aizen more dangerous. As shown in canon, when he was drunk on power he dropped his guard entirely and stopped planning ahead, now that he is back to what he once was, he will restart his engine and go back to the man that planned a 100 year coup de ta.

It certainly sucks to be Karin right now. She is gonna see how the other side lives and there is no Grimmjow to shield her from the worst of it.

This chapter was all kinds of perfect and although I would have loved to have seen how things were gong in the SS while Aizen was out and how the numeros conducted themselves and how Ukitake ran things, I am glad that you cut down the travel time for the assault force to return. Knowing that ass wipe, Aizen probably could have just teleported them to the area where the swarms base was located at any time lol.

-waits patiently for the next chapter-

P.S
I so fucking called it on Kenpachi showing up lol. Hopefully he just pulls a byakuya and gives yachiru a confidence boost and lets her take the stern ritter down.
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From HollowedRose on March 12, 2014
Ah, I really can't wait to see Ichigo. However, the way this chapter ended... NO! I REFUSE to believe that Aizen will do anything to Karin, I cannot accept it! * is in denial *

Ichigo will save her, he has to... now excuse me while I go curl into a ball and cry my eyes out.
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From ANON - Shatter the Sky Comes Quietly on March 12, 2014
I shudder to think why Zee wanted to be Ajuga's consort. What would that have done to him I wonder? Is Ajuga the new Queen or what? Grimmjow is going to go berserk when he wakes up. I hope Szay has VERY deep bunker to hide in.
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From ANON - vixenexiv on March 06, 2014
Ahhhh!!! Excellent!
2 chapters in 2 days. You are spoiling us miss hehe.
Although, I am not complaining in the slightest.
Very nice chapter, things are starting to really heat up!

Well I dunno about you, but us over here in australia are heading for
Winter soon, time to rug up for us hehe.
Hope you guys get a serious defrost going on though. It's sounded pretty
Harsh over there with the snow :(
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From MudbloodMalfoy on March 06, 2014
Ahhhh I loved it! Can't wait to see how Aizen reacts if/when he finds out about all the secret Royal blood. Reeeeaaally can't wait to see Ichigo's reaction to being an uncle. XD
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From ANON - gollumsfriend on March 06, 2014
Exciting escape and battle, thanks for the updates!!!!
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From ANON - Lilibet on March 05, 2014
I just want to say how much I love your story. Your storyline draws me in each time I read.I look forward to reading your new chapter every week. I feel so happy every Wednesday when I leave work and can finally have the time to read the latest development. Your creativity and dedication to your work is to be applauded.
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From ANON - Shatter the Sky Comes Quietly on March 05, 2014
Things are approaching a head, and it's looking dicey. Love the bloodline comment.
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From Kain on March 05, 2014
Favorite part was when byakuya made that awesome save. After the battle is concluded will you show what has been going on in the soul society since the forces left?

Well.....looks like I spoke too soon on Stern ritter V......unless he survived Yachiru's attack and activates his Vollstandig. Happy too see just how much Yachiru takes after kenpachi lol.

-waits patiently for next chapter-
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From Kain on February 28, 2014
Pressed for time so very very short review.

Very lovely chapter that sets up for a big fight. Nice to see that Karin i goint to try and reason with Zee but if push comes to shove, she will end him.

As for stern ritter V......well I think Kubo will FINALLY let us see what Yachiru is made of. It will be interesting to see if her and Isane will double team him or if she will face him alone. Although at the rate Kubo is having the Stern ritter get killed off and lose their hype, he may just have this one last long enough till a captain class fighter arrives,. hell he may even have this be Kenpachi's debut kill after his training.
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From ANON - Shatter the Sky Comes Quietly on February 26, 2014
Looking good. Never thought I'd see the 4th say anything like that. I like it, Orihime's been good for him. Will Zee consider their agreement broken now that the nest is under attack? Hope things settle down for you and can't wait for the next update.
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From ANON - Kia on February 26, 2014
Loved it as usual. Can't wait for every Wednesday :)
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From ANON - Shaun on February 25, 2014
Have been keeping up with this story since halfway through the first part now, and its still proving a pleasure to come back to every now and again. The plot is one of the best developed I've read, that and the worldbuilding for a Bleach fanfic is hands down my favourite. Second only really to Vathara's Embers. It devolves into just the right range of angst to real pain to small, found joys in what I imagine an occupation turning into. The version I originally read on fanfic.net just really carry the weight of the full deal, I still haven't gone back for a second warned off scene with Byakuya. :(

The characters I sometimes think go a bit out from where they would be on the human morality scale, but you structure it cleverly and the situations they are put in and the company they keep make the changes realistic, and a lot of fun. Nnoitra is my favorite in that regard. He's still mostly a dick but there is more to his character and it shows from beginning to now as he gives a little more when he takes. High definition moral greyscale. The OC's. Yes. Diminutive, ginger Ulquiorra. :3 You never really miss Ichigo through the story.

I'm kinda surprised to see Orihime hasn't just repaired Szayel. It's a deus ex machina fix, but then see: Orihime. Though there may be something waaaay back explaining that I've forgotten...

Plz continue. Much loves. :3
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