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Reviews for Prize of Victory 2

By : NovaAlexandria

From ANON - gollumsfriend on May 23, 2014
Enjoyable chapter, thank you for the update!
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From ANON - animeprincess on May 22, 2014
I wanted to let you know how much I have really enjoyed the last few chapters. In the most recent chapter when Grimmjow was recounting his pride when he looks at his daughter ... such an accurate representation of a parents love.

In the last chapter, when I media appeared, I am wondering if it's sage to assume that's it is he who is meeting and passing information to B Kuchki as referenced in earlier chapters.

Also, you have stated there are others from the Gotei 13 still in hiding that have not yet been found. I wonder who else we will see...

Thank you for continuing to share your story.
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From Kain on May 20, 2014
gahhhhhhhhhh

alright, I hate to be a liat but for the life of me I got nothing.

so this will be short and sweet.

-loved that Starrk is FINNALY after 15 god forsaken years ready to take steps to put the mad despot down.

-LOVED loved LOVED the yuro/soi reunion. It was everything I had hoped to see. And holy god Omaeda!?!?!?!? But you mean Marenoshin Omaeda right? Not Soi's former LT? But if it is the dad, I wonder why he hasn't tried in all of 15 years to get his daughter out. I mean I get the risk of trying to free the claimed captains and LT's but for a father not to try and save a civilian with next to no spiritual pressure who happens to be own his child and is owned and 'used' by a random numeros seems mighty sketchy.

-Would have loved to have seen some of the things Yuro talked about in chapter form but I understand that at times you and Black fox have to jump around a bit to progress the story. Meh, just my personal gripe with jumps of any kind. Not surprised Rukia went after Szeyal. He may have suffered quite a bit but that should mean jack diddley to the people he wronged, be it directly or indirectly. Renji seems to have made peace with him both for the children's sake and out of necessity for the upcoming battle.

-"Grimmjow and Ichigo go for a midnight stroll"

......oh god someone is going to bleed lol. who knows maybe they will come to an understanding of some sort. They are Brother-in-laws now.

Sorry, thats all I got in me right now, usually for a chapter like this I'd be pulling out my page long reviews of old but lately my head is just not in the game, sorry.

-waits patiently for the next chapter-

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From Kain on May 18, 2014
So very very VERY sorry about not posting a review like I said I would. I don't know whats wrong with me, I know what I want to type but every time I sit down to get it done I either lose track of whatever point i am trying to make or I forget key things that I want to address. There is also the issue of not wanting to fall back into old habits of wishing bloody murder on 99% of a.....ahem 'particular race'. I have complete trust in your abilities and you have already stated that much of what I usually ask about will be addressed at some point. Work has been a pain for the past while, but rest assured that I AM really trying to buckle down and get a review out for the past couple of chapters I neglected to review. Even if it is a short review I WILL have one for you before the next chapter post.

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From ANON - Gorguts5 on May 17, 2014
Despite how much I love this series I'm not sure Iv ever reviewed it. Not sure what to say really you do everything right so I have no critisism, from proper emotional development for the more unstable and emotionless espada to the introduction of the children and successfully developing their characters and making them loveable in most ways with realistic faults and powers.

What I love about this series most of all is the realism, how the characters interact in the aizen won scenario, from a hollow hierarchy that makes sense to how the other races react to having a forign system forced upon them.

There isn't much to say really unless direct questions are asked other than thank you for one of the best stories fanfic or published works I have ever read and I eagerly look forward to each new update.
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From ANON - Serious on May 17, 2014
I read your story religiously, I don't review but I guess I do now. -and I apologize for that haha. Your story is amazing and frustrating, its truely something that could almost stand on its own.
I really, really want to see the scene when Ulqurria learns of his son and Ajuga, I think it would be a stress reliever of some sort; but thats just me.
Anyways I'm sorry for your hard times and your willingness to share proves you are quite a strong individual. Your co-author is amazing as well. I can't wait for the next chapter, was last weeks chapter late, or was I early! haha
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From ANON - vixenexiv on May 16, 2014
Yes! Starrk is gonna kick some Aizen butt!
I really love how you have portrayed all the characters & their personality. If I read any other ff these days & They don't have the same personalities, I'm already thinking in my mind....This is wrong lol.
All thanks to your story hehe.
Your updates are what I look forward to each week. Almost more than the new episode of game of thrones!! *probably cause I've been reading this for over 2 years haha*
Can't wait to see how next week's chapter goes.
Grimmjow & the strawberry taking a stroll.
Excited hehe.
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From ANON - Avi on May 16, 2014
Another great chapter as always!!! I'm excited to see what Stark and the gang is going to do and I do hope we get to see Ulqueirria's reaction to finding out Aguja claimed Diemeatrios!!!! Also never would have thought of Omeda but that was great!!! I can't wait to see what the children will look like!!!!
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From ANON - No dying without permission! on May 15, 2014
Tis finals week so for those of us who are college-d...we're dying too. All nighters ftw?

Chapters all are amazing, I don't have a trigger finger refresh button...nope! Except I do.
So please keep them awesome!
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From ANON - Rawth on May 15, 2014
Wow that was a lot of info for one chapter....My mind is reeling about as much as Stark's. Poor guy. Looking forward to the coup, and seeing how poor Grimm is handling this all. Also waiting for a scene from Ajuga....she must be fixing for some unusual talks with her consort soon. I know I would!
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From ANON - Sarada on May 15, 2014
Can't wait till next chapter!! I took a very long break from reading PoV 2 (busy with life, stuff XD), but I finally cought up again, and I've developped a soft spot for Diaemus, so I'm loving the interactions with him and Ajuga. That and I always enjoy the action parts of your stories, very captivating. I know it must be frustrating not to get many reviews, but remember people are kinda lazy with those things (myself included :P).

What I'm wondering is how Diaemus copes with his wings and tail in day to day life, they must get in the way. I was also looking for an up to date description of Ajuga and Diaemus, but I can't find it ...

Anyway, keep the good stuff coming!
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From ANON - Sarah on May 15, 2014
Hey! Just wanting to let you know that you still have attentive readers out there. I'm just really bad at making reviews :P. I do look forward to and read your story every week. It's been that way for over a year for me and I can't believe it's getting close to the end. You are an amazing and gifted writer. Thank you for keeping up with your updates even though we're all sure life happens :)
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From ANON - Lilibet on May 14, 2014
I love your plot twists and your characterizations.
Each character is so vivid. Can't wait till next week

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From SeresNorth on May 08, 2014
@Chapter 64: Nice to get back to see how the others are doing in the living realm. Great chapter, kudos to Blackfox for all the RenjiNell content.

On another note: Now that the escapees are all together in one place, and they're all going to be working together for the foreseeable future... It's only logical that they get Hacchi to fix the damage to Szayel's mask. They need everyone at peek efficiency, and that way they won't have to worry about him reverting when Karin's claim finally wares off- especially at some critical moment.

I can't wait to see how Ichigo's dealing with the revelation that he's an uncle- and that both his mouthy niece and her "fiance" were sired by Arrancar who tried to kill him the last time they crossed paths!
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From Kain on May 07, 2014
In before new chapter update.

So very sorry that I haven't been leaving reviews in god knows how long. My review muse left me high and dry but I plan to do a mass review of some of the chapters I have read but neglected to leave reviews for and too politely respond to what reviewer 'DarkStar84' wrote.

I know I am a bit late, but I am deeply sorry for your loss.

Hmm, just read newest manga chapter..........so does this confirm that Yachiru was in fact the spirit of kenpachi's sword? I mean just before he used shikai she was looking up at him and their was a flashback to the time when they met and were discussing names and now after he has used shikai only her clothes remain.
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