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Reviews for Prize of Victory 2

By : NovaAlexandria

From ANON - Kain on September 08, 2014
so.........my net has been down since last Tuesday so I missed all the updates, I have not read anything yet as I am in the process of getting back all the info that was lost when my computer betrayed me so i will do a mass read at some point tonight and review.
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From MaliceBlackPaw on September 08, 2014
Lol I love that last part. "That man was capable of turning a bolt of harlmess-looking silk into a weapon" and that made me think of using a silk scarf as a whip of sorts.
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From ANON - Penryck on September 08, 2014
Damn now you have me wondering about how things would have been if Nirgge didn't die. And how it was decided that Ggio would be the one to put the Claim on Soifon. One new element being introduced throws my mind totally off kilter. But thanks for the new food for thought. Ruminating on this hours after reading has made me wish I thought of this when I reviewed on FF. You never fail to capture every ounce of my attentions.
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From ANON - Aviary on September 08, 2014
Awe poor Orihime in curious to know if the reason she can't walk Soifon is that one order he had done with Syzel in part 1 believe about not healing those who had been injured by Kami, maybe it has something do with that or until Barrgan is dead? But I'm curious to know the reason. Silly Uluqurria not realizing that honesty is truly to best way to please Orhime. :) a lovely chapter as always it was good thanks for all your hard work.

To those reviewing I highly recommend Blackfox's side story for Prize of Victory 2 called the Kitsune Wedding!!' It was great!

A Kitsune Wedding:

http://bleach.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600012987
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From SeresNorth on September 08, 2014
@Chapter 85: No... Fucking... Way... Oh my god, Kukaku! I should known the vixen was alive! And she's taking part in the revolt! OMG, I love her character sooo fucking much, thank you sooo much for including her in this story!!!
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From SeresNorth on September 07, 2014
@Chapter 83-84: I'm really enjoying this "Night before Tomorrow" arc. First off, I have to say that under normal circumstances, I might question Nanao's reasoning, but this is do or die for everyone, so I can somewhat understand her heightened emotional state. She's only just recently opened herself up to another man after almost sixteen years, and she's terrified at the prospect of loosing him. I also liked the fact that Lilinette is just as excited at the prospect of a new "cub", given that she's an extension of Stark.

As for the second interlude... I'm glad you addressed the matter of Orihime's exclusion from the coup. It was important that she at least know about it. Though, given Ulquiorra's reasoning, I can certainly understand his desire to keep her out of harm's way, especially when considering the depravity and evil of the man they're about to go up against. I've been a huge UlquiHime fan for years now, and I've been engrossed in the ups and downs of your more edgier take on their relationship. It was also rather moving when Ulqui realized that beyond just his wife and son, that he's unknowingly wound up caring about Ajuga and her family- even Grimmjow (in a bro kinda way). Though, we saw hints of this friendship emerging back when they attacked the hive...

Can't wait to read tomorrow's chapter. I'll try and have another review up by Tuesday, that is unless something happens tomorrow to warrant me giving my two cents on the matter. Anyway, great job, looking forward to more!

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From ANON - Penryck on September 07, 2014
Dammit, I told myself I'd relax this time, but every time there is a thing that gives me great emotional pain. I'm still so pissed at Ulquiorra for what he said in 81. Why did they have to discuss such a painful subject NOW. I don't blame you, Nova, more I blame my own fixation and unwillingness to face facts. What happened to Soifon was too terrible for words. And being reminded of sets me back to square one every time. But...it will be all over soon...one can only hope.

I'm sorry to focus on just her. Again.
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From ANON - whiteShadow on September 07, 2014
I couldn't' relate in what Nanao's feeling since I've never been in that position before, but if ever it happen to me I would probably not survived losing someone you love.In worst case scenario, living but dying inside is also a hell in itself.
This chapter is Awesome!Sweet Jushiro is a worrywart good thing Lilinitte is there to kick his sorry ass.LOL
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From ANON - Aviary on September 07, 2014
That's a really good idea I like that your doing that and everything! Another great chapter I loved to musing between Jushiro and Lillette I'm glad we got to see inside her head for a change and everything and really see what she is thinking! Loved the scene with Nano and Stark their relationship is really sweet I like it! Keep up the great work!
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From MaliceBlackPaw on September 06, 2014
REVENGE is a dish best served with an angry Ajuga shredding his skin like wet newspaper.
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From ANON - Aviary on September 06, 2014
Aww your welcome sorry that was my phone likes to make up stuff for my name with the I at the end. Glad to give you the Congratz though you do a great job and everything so I hope everything is good with your pregnancy and everything else that it goes smoothly!

Another great chapter as always aww yeah I'd be nervous too with Unahona giving that death glare of sorts at me if I was Lemura :) and oh I loved how you have Syzel such a devoted division it's awesome and how much better he is the. Kruostchi!!! That's awesome! I can't wait to see what happens and oh a daily update for a whole week I'm so excited for that I can't wait!!!

And totally going to be looking for the Wedding on Blackfox's thing she does a great job with Renji! I can't wait to read the Wedding it's going to be awesome

and I'm always excited to see the cubs that will be born!!! Can't wait!

I am curious to what Vandilla is doing with her hands I was thinking if maybe she's so happy and everything to try and give the others so positivity and perhaps it's hinting at the fact that she knows what is going on or knows more then everyone thinks that she does? I'm curious to see it all I can't wait for the chapters
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From ANON - whiteShadow on September 04, 2014
Hi,NovaAlexandria...my name is glenn and I' m you're newest fan!!hehe
Can't wait for the next chap.Oh!and by the way I think Rin is cute.Diffinitly the right way to end a chapter. It's fun.
And I love Starkk and Nana.Just so you know.
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From SeresNorth on September 04, 2014
@Chapter 82: Aww... I always read your author notes (*sad face*).

It was interesting to get some insight into Iermura's situation. I liked the fact that it kind of validated my own view of the Arrancar and how they interact with/are perceived by the Shinigami: that to some extent, they've coexisted side-by-side for so long that they're no longer uniformly viewed as this faceless mob of boogiemen. Given that they no longer have to fight just to survive, it seems like a decent amount of them have relaxed and become more empathetic, with the benefit of time and living in a verdant, fertile world.

I enjoyed the Iemura's musings on his relationship with Sungsun- it turns out she's quite demure and patient, not to mention the fact that she can also be quite charming and even seductive when she wants to. And I give props to to the guy for sticking to his guns when it came to voicing his feelings in front of Unohana, so major props to him. I also enjoyed the bits with Rin and Saeki and the others from the Twelfth, and the fact that Yuroichi was even a little jealous over their devotion to Szayel and his pack.

See, just goes to show you, that you shouldn't underestimate the capabilities of techies and the science dorks, because they can turn into a force to be reckoned with if you cross them!

As for you author's notes: I'll keep an eye out for when Blackfox posts "Kitsune's Wedding". And I'll definitely be looking forward to the first of the updates this Saturday. I'll try and keep up with them, so expect a few reviews from me in the near future.
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From ANON - Penryck on September 03, 2014
I would like to formally apologize first. I read the author's notes weekly and saw what you had announced. I was at work when I read part of 81 and it had hurt so bad. Reading the rest when I got home didn't help. I was hurting all week and still am. But that's no excuse, I was selfish. Congrats on the new development and I hope it pans out well for you. The issue is hard for me cuz I'm squeamish about reproductive stuff, especially all of it that has been featured in this fic.

Now about 82. It put so much hope in my heart. I've always adored Rin and Iemura in canon, so seeing them shine here made my night. Looking forward to Saturday, to watch everything slowly begin to get really real. I trust that both of them, when the fighting gets heated, will do their best in their tasks. I'm also relieved that Tatsuki will be safe, as well as Rangiku. Both of them are so important. As painful as it was to recall that what Soifon has been doing has been physically risky, I'm still so proud of her. Working through the emotional pain alone must be hell. But because of her, so much is perfectly in place. Now we can leave it up to the others.
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From ANON - Mofaf1 on September 03, 2014
Congrats Nova, missed reading last week and just saw the news. Take things easy and follow the docs orders to the letter.

Can't wait to read about the wedding and the follow-on reveling/rescue mission. Hopefully nobody loyal to Aizen learns of upcoming events. At least Yoruichi can pass along how Karin & the twins are doing since I'm sure she would have mentioned all of her 'guests' being housed in the palace with her.
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