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Reviews for Prize of Victory 2

By : NovaAlexandria

From ANON - Anon on September 21, 2014
I think my favorite couple would be Tatsuki and Tesra. Something about the power imbalance is intriguing. By every objective metric, he is the more powerful... Yet she is far more powerful a presence than he is.
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From SeresNorth on September 21, 2014
Really Nova? Just because all your characters are having babies, you felt the need to jump on the bandwagon? But seriously, between the story and real life, that's a WHOLE LOT of babies! I can only apologize for not congratulating you sooner. I guess I was hesitant to speak up, given that I think I was the first person to post a response when you revealed what happened (that's as far as I care to speak on that).

But now, after reading everyone else's kind words, it's only proper that I say something. So, congratulations! Your stories have been a consistent source of entertainment, as well as thought provoking and even moving at times. In light of all you've given via your writing, I can't really think of anyone more deserving of good things than you.
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From ANON - vixenexiv on September 20, 2014
Woah!!... i'm busy for a month or so & i come back to sooooo many updates!!!
this was an awesome catch up session.
you are 11-12 weeks pregnant?! thats fantastic. *well more so by now lol.
I'm sorry to hear about you feeling sick though.
I'm actually bout a week off having my first child *me & my husband are so excited*
But ill tell you one thing, i can definitely relate to the morning sickness thing.
Around the same time as you, i started to get really sick, lasted about a month or so, but it was so bad i couldn't even stomach water.
Ended up being taken down to the hospital by my mother & they ended up putting me on medication they normally would give to cancer patience
going through chemo therapy -.-
it didn't get rid of the sickness entirely, but i was able to stomach a few small meals.
After that passed though, i was so happy i could eat again *that i probably have eaten too much lol*
but now I've started to feel a bit sick again after certain meals, which has been annoying.
I hope you don't end up going through the same thing -.-

But about the chapters. They have been excellent.
You really capture the characters true personality & make them so real in ways.
as a reader, i genuinely feel for the characters that suffer so much & sympathize with them.
& for the characters that you want to hate... you really can hate them haha.
I can follow the story really well, but just when i think i know whats going to happen, there is a twist thrown in here or there,
which makes reading it that much more enjoyable.
Cannot wait for the next few chapters....or the rest of the story either ^.^

I have only just caught up in the manga as well, so i would love to see Szayel make an appearance also, but i dont know what our chances of that
will be.
They dangled that little big of Grimmjow in front of us a while back *we all know it was his arm!! lol*
so I'm wondering when they are going to reintroduce him.
Do you think it will be during a vital part? or will they just not bother even bringing him back at all?
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From ANON - Aviary on September 20, 2014
Thank you Blackfox for the Harribel/Toshiro, Renji/Nel and Ichigo/Rukia chapters! You did amazing work as always and I'm glad you came on to join this story with Nova you two have done fantastic work! I can't wait to see what else you put up! I hope your doing well!

This chapter was awesome Nova you did well with so many moving parts but you always do! I hope your doing well and everything with your new baby on the way :)

I greatly enjoyed Grimmjow here and the others an oh man bet Karin is going to freak out I wonder what has happened to her and everything it's not been said but it wouldn't be unrealistic to say that perhaps in the time that she's been with Aizen has it been a few weeks I like at least a month maybe that she could be pregnant with his kid wouldn't that be a shocker!!!

I hope Aguja and Dimetrious will be watch if they can from the swarms base or we can figure out how they are doing!!

This chapter was awesome though I can't wait to see everyone get into position and everyone else's opinions. It's totally ok if things repeat for this, this is a major battle. We are all adults here and I'm sure everyone will understand! Thanks for the warning though i read this Wednesday but haven't been able to review till now! Just let me say again I love this story!

As for couples well all time favorite is at the moment Grimmjow and Karin and Ajuga/Dimeatrious and Nano and Stark I they are new but its something about them I just really like! Both of them are great and I can't wait to see what happens. It's hard to pick just one couple and I have to say if I had to pick it would be these three. I love them all though and I like how alive you have made them and everything you have made them all unique and important and they stand alone in some ways in this story far more then they have in the actual series.

I love all the characters here even the ones I hate because they are just so awesome!

Keep up the great work you two! Thanks again, till the next chapter!
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From ANON - anon~ on September 19, 2014
I can't wait to see what you've decided on in the future for the gang, especially how you're going to deal with Aizen =) hahaa hopefully a painful end fitting of all the "douche-y" things he did. (Poor Syzael and Gin...and all the rest) *gasp* What's going to happen to Byakuya and Senbonzakura (and *grrrrr* Yammy) though?

hehee Hana-chan, Ajuga-chan, and Diaemus...so cute~
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From ANON - Sakura on September 18, 2014
Chapter 91 : Made my scalp go numb and gave me goosebumps. Thanks for the awesome chapter! YOU.ROCK.
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From ANON - gollumsfriend on September 18, 2014

First word to come to mind: FINALLY!!!!!!

Thanks so much for the update. Your words and descriptions created a wonderfully tense and dramatic build-up to what promises to be an amazing battle! Great job!
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From ANON - Lilibet on September 17, 2014
My favorite is Nanao and Starrk. They were both lonely but managed to find some happiness.
Great chapter this week.

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From MaliceBlackPaw on September 17, 2014
At the end my face turned into a wicked smirk when Aizen realised he was in deep shit. Karma's a bitch indeed. Can't wait for the next chapter!! :D
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From ANON - Byunei on September 17, 2014
You had to ask favorite couples, didn't you...

Toshiro x Harribel... Everytime I see a chapter where they get featured I actually get giddy. Thank you and BlackFox for this. Can't say how many times I've re-read chapters due to them.

But then I can't decide on other pairs I love. Tatsuki x Tesra was an unexpected and wonderful surprise. Nnoitra x Rangiku (even though the last time we really visited him was when he was drunk and mopey) should be challenging my feminist notions but I'm enjoying the shrew taming >_>;

Szayel x Nemu is understated yet beautiful. I hope there's some healing, because I've always found that pairing undeniably hot. Stark x Nanao was also a more than welcome/get a room already development and I can't say I wasn't hoping for it since early PoV1.

I think those are my top choices. A weird part of me had been hoping Ajuga would get to claim Byakuya, and we'd see more of what I thought was some chemistry between Hana and Diaemus.

Thank you for the epic set up this chapter! I'm gleefully anticipating some buttkicking.
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From ANON - MudbloodMalfoy on September 17, 2014
Aaahhhh! It's finally starting!

As for your weekly question, my favorite couple (other than UlquiHime and GrimmKarin) is a tie between Soi Fon/Ggio and Toushiro/Harribel.

I jumped on the Soi Fon/Ggio bandwagon when the were fighting in fake!Karakura. Just the way they snarked back and forth, I guess.

I'm not sure how to explain why I like that one; I just do. Haha.
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From ANON - Penryck on September 17, 2014
Darkstar has such a point there regarding Ggio and Soifon. I'm just dying for a little backstory for them. But I trust in your abilities so demanding it would be rude. I love how you write Ggio and am amused that you've charmed others with it. I have it in my head now that his default personality isn't exactly what we saw in canon. That's just the "on the battlefield" mode, essentially. Fuck, I'm so sorry Nova.
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From ANON - whiteShadow on September 17, 2014
My favorite couple would be Starkk and Nanao,then,Grimmjow and Karen.
Why this two?...hmmm,I guess because I had a big crush on those two males?
LOL.
Hmmm,why indeed....I really couldn't described it even if i wanted to.
Karin and Nanao had the same personality.Which I might add I jealously admire.
Then,there's Stark and Grimmjow.Different in anyways.But in any sort complimented a woman's fantasy.heheehe ( I'm being creepy here thinking of something lewd ).
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From SeresNorth on September 17, 2014
@Chapter 91: Oh damn, this was one hell of a chapter! I loved that Grimmjow had the presence of mind to call out Aizen- to draw the bastard out of his lair for the fight. And then there's the fact that even Aizen isn't fully prepared for the scope and magnitude of the attack. Not much else to say really, other then that I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.

As for your question... I've always been a huge UlquiHime fan, and I enjoyed your darker take on how their relationship would have initially began, with Ulquiorra's inability to understand his own feelings, and leading him to initially do wrong by her. That in spite of his earlier actions, he realizes that he was wrong and works to slowly regain her trust over the ensuing years. Of course, this says even more about Orihime as a person, specifically in regard to her ability to forgive, and to eventually return Ulquiorra's feelings in earnest.

As for the less obvious pairings... Well, I've really grown to adore the relationship between Toshiro and Halibell, which is a testament to Blackfox's writing skills. The two of them have come so far in their growth as individuals- and as a couple. To the point that they're expecting (even anticipating) the birth of their upcoming child. I kind of wish we could have seen more of the beginning of Ggio and Soifon's relationship, as you written Ggio as a sweet and endearingly-clueless character, so I look forward to seeing how things work out for the two of them.

And of course, I expect that Diaemus and Ajuga are going to be a cute couple down the road. I'd love to see some of follow-up to POV2, where we get to see them as a couple, as well as getting to see the children of Renji & Nell and Toshiro & Halibell.
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From ANON - Lily'sMama on September 17, 2014
Ahhh! You need to update more often. I'm going crazy! I'm so excited to see what's going to happen! My favorite couple so far would have to be Starrk and Nanao. Starrk and Kyoraku are some of my favorite characters because of their personalities. Pairing them up with someone like Nanao is just amazing :) Please Please Please update sooner than Wednesday! I'll love you forever lol
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