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Reviews for Driven to Distraction

By : Raymy

From SesshomaruFreak on October 24, 2017
This is a truly lovely story! I like to review each chap but this story just kept making me hungry for the next one and I couldn't wait lol The whole thing was marvelous, and as a yaoi authoress myself, I understand the craving for reviews ;)
Beautiful, and I think I saw a note saying this was your first? Bravo

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From Vyper on April 16, 2014
That was an awesome story. I wish there was more.
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From kurahieiritrJIO on May 26, 2013
Shaking my head over Renji's bad case of foot in mouth syndrome. It fits his personality quite well. I can see how he would be a player as I read the chapter and his various exploits. I even chuckled in a couple of places. Thanks for the entertaining reading.
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From kurahieiritrJIO on May 26, 2013
I have been pleased to see the intimacy angle that this story has mixed into the sex. Few writers include the emotional give and take that you have provided. Such intimacy makes the reading more enjoyable. Thanks for that addition.
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From kurahieiritrJIO on May 26, 2013
An interesting contrast of character for Captain Byakuya Kuchiki. I could see him needing a change of pace and I like the idea of his choice in dancing. I can see how it would be a forbidden pleasure to cut loose for someone like himself. I could not picture who the characters were until Byakuya told Renji to call him by name. Then everything began to click. I'll admit that I saw him in his uniform once my mind reflected back upon his dancing. Perhaps if Renji had thought about how Byakuya was dressed I would not have gotten that specific image of his Captain's uniform. Overall, I like the way Renji was reacting and thinking. Time to read the next chapter. Keep writing.
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From Sena on March 30, 2013
I had planned to write a review for each chapter� but I failed miserably. I started reading the second one, waiting for the �party� to start but you cut the chapter when they were going to the shower! I couldn�t pause and ran to the next one. And when I realized, I had read until chapter 5!!
Your descriptions of Renji and Byakuya are so cute that I think I�m going to read the next chapters right away.
I especially like the way you change between their respective POV. It�s interesting to see both sides of the story. It looks like they had found a partner for more than a random night.

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From Sena on March 29, 2013
Now the image of a damn hot Captain Kuchiki dancing in the dance floor has been permanently imprinted in my head! And Renji just drooling and thinking about joining? And the part where they were talking it�s really fun. I can perfectly imagine Renji�s face all red with embarrassment. I�m dying to know what�s going to happen in the hotel!
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From whitetiger on March 07, 2013
I ran across a review you posted in someone's story and decided to check you out. Dear lord, you can write. I'm in aw of the way you portrayed Renji and Baya. I loved the way Baya used dancing as a release from his stressful life. I also agree that Ichigo, though sensual in his own right, was not the perfect fit for this wonderful story. The hotel scene was hot, steamy and well written. I almost cried during the fight after as Renji ran away in pain and Baya stood there reaching out to him. (sniffle) I like that Jushiro was so calm and understanding in the way he helped Baya to understand his role in the fight, and Hisagi? What can I say, perversion fits him. ;)
That just leaves us with the last chapter. Hot, Hot, Hot!! I really like it when Renji is on bottom. Don't get me wrong, Baya is sexy as hell while spread out for Renji, but Renji has a sensual 'Take Me' vibe that can take over any scene. Mmmmmm..(clears throat) sorry got lost in a daydream.
I will be looking through your other writings after this, and going through your favorites list. Thank you very much for posting this story. :)
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From Benihime1231 on January 27, 2013
Not A BAD STORY... Thanks for this one :-)
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From stillkisseswithsaliva on January 14, 2013
loved this story!! my fav bleach pairing! i wouldn't have minded if it were longer but for a shorter multi chapter it went just how i like my Bya/Ren fics to go! so hot but still with a plot, switching, a little angst & a happy ending = perfect! lol you should definitely do more! (you really should try that juu, ren, bya-kun oneshot ;) maybe as a dream of renji's or something lol) & some ikkaku/yumi!
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From FicticiousDelicious on November 17, 2012
Chap 9 - You are most welcome! I am thoroughly enjoying every chapter of this story I read. I dun want it to end! D:

Don't loose hope Bya! *cheers him on* "Mouthful of canary"...*tries not to laugh obnoxiously and fails* Hee Hee! I would have bonked Shuuehi on the head so hard he'd have had trouble remembering anything just for laughing if I were Bayakuya. That must be a slow butterfly, it is time to play musical houses!

Awww, Renji knows what Bya likes. So sexy! That silly guy kinda sortta drifted off while he was waiting. It does a heart good to hear them making up. I'm glad Renji acknowledged his aggression as something he shouldn't have let get a strong hold of him before. "Moving forward" is a great concept!

Renji crying during their love making was touching but a tense moment for me to read. I was nervous hoping he wasn't breaking down (in a bad way). That was some hot love between those two! Whew! And extra points for Renji being on bottom. *wink*

That was a wonderful ending, it made me smile and gave warm fuzzies. They really do care for each other and that is a beautiful thing. I am wondering a bit about what Renji's final thoughts could lead to.

The feeling is mutual; repeating words when I write, and I can tell when I do it, drives me bonkers. I love that poem! Tee Hee *giggles* I hope I get to read more of your writing! It brightens my day to read excellent stories with interesting themes, and your writing is MOST EXCELLENT!
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From botticelliangel on November 16, 2012
Oh wow... you can write some hot lovin! I really enjoyed the first five chapters a lot. And then I started to get a little lost in Chapter 6 because I actually don't know anything about Bleach. However, your writing style is solid, and entertaining. I especially loved the little scene of teaching Byakuya to talk dirty. Very good. The only suggestion I would make is for Chapter 5. I liked the way you switched pov between chapters, but it seemed a little startling to do it in the middle of the chapter, especially because you announced it. Even though they were parts of the same scene I almost feel like it should have been split into two mini chapters to keep with the previous trend in the story.

Anyways, wonderful job!
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From FicticiousDelicious on November 02, 2012
Chap 8 - It seems Renji's run from the room to clear his head so he wouldn't be fooled by some act, if any was present. A wise move but so very saddening. Sharing a lover is no fun at all; I can definitely empathize with Renji's frustrations, and the way he's handling his feels makes sense. Renji appears clever or at least suspicious about breaking down that note. Suspicion can lead to false assumptions though, and we only know some truths about the note from Bya and Juu's conversation but Renji has a plethora of ideas stemming from that note. Hopefully when Byakuya and him talk about it again he doesn't blurt out some theory he'd regret later.

Awww man...missin' the hair-tie...that is one of the most pesky things to be without if you need one. x3 That beside frustration just makes the frustration even worse.
Hana and that tattoo...*dies of laughter* oh that poor guy... Oddly enough I can picture Shuuhei as a tattoo artist. I appreciate Shuu's noted of habit of gathering facts before crafting an opinion; that is an important skill. He seems like the perfect person for Renji to confide in. But wait...oh f*ck...SHUUHEI!!!!!! *rages and clears her desk of papers in one fell swoop* After finishing the chapter... *restacks papers on her desk* that unexpected HORNY Shuuhei has definitely proven himself to make use of interesting tactics to pull Renji from his gloom. I can't say I nod my head and cheer at the use of flirting but it's a little adorable I won't lie. :3 Poor Renji standing awkwardly there with people watching and in complete bewilderment for those moments. I sense a turn of events 'round the bend.

Prequel?! That I will nod to!
I can't wait to read how Renji and Byakuya make up after this severe blow. *cheers* Keep a' typin'! Me wanna read moar!
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From FicticiousDelicious on October 25, 2012
Chap 7 - :3 I'm glad my reviews could bring you such a grin! :D

Awwww! It was the worst thing imaginable! *smacks forehead and falls backward off her perch on the couch* I kept reading this whole turn around and cold splash of reality on Renji from Bya had me in knots. Suspenseful! Wonderful! Yet so painful! Renji snarled at Byakuya...that is NOT a good sign. He's very hurt by this, I can feel his pain by how he's acting, and from the after effects Byakuya is hurting nearly just as badly. Ukitake is so kind to comfort Bya in his despairing time.

I love how hard times can really bring out just how much a person cares for another (Renji cares for Byakuya). Ukitake is very respectful about Byakuya needing a little breathing space at the end of the chapter, that made me very happy, Juu is very accepting and takes the turning of events well. :3

Make-up smex?! Yum yum! Still stayin' tuned! Keep it up!
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From FicticiousDelicious on October 23, 2012
Chap 6 - I have caught up! Yus! *pelvic thrust then steadies game face*

After reading more chapter I see what you mean, I hope Byakuya can help Renji with that self-conscious feeling. Renji is turning out to be a very cute character. *swoons at the happy thought of bare chested men with long, flowing hair*
Why can I see Byakuya's "gimmie space face" ending in him [unintentionally] slamming the door in Renji's face? Pah! Apparently though Renji isn't one to camp outside the door until Bya comes back out. I was about to say that's not a good or bad thing but considering the way Renji comes back to Bya once making contact is again ok seems to mean he isn't disheartened from "gimmie space", that's actually a really good thing so long as Byakuya doesn't get irritated. "...less fire in my loins, more snuggle in my heart." excellent qualification for Renji's affectionate attitude.
Lies?! I think Renji's being a bit too forthcoming but the sooner the better I suppose. Withholding truths can make a mess of a relationship.

At least Renji was willing to confess, Byakuya you have some mystery about you! *crosses arms* Bya you better be there when Renji gets back... *grumbles* Even toward Renji Bya closes off, it makes me think the worst. Maybe something embarrassing or horrific happened...I am staying tuned for next chapter! :3
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