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Reviews for Hybrid Theory

By : elrazhnia
  • From JulCan1987 on December 20, 2013
    This was an interesting story you wrote here, but I would like to have had some more sex in it, but still, it was nice. Hanataro knocked up Apacci, that was cool.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2013
    I really hope you update this story soon I'm excited to see what's going to happen as the children get older.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2013
    Yay this story is good! Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - sabaku_lotus on February 28, 2013
    Whoa what the hell am I reading? This is awesome! A bunch of kids, tons of random rare pairings, the whole bang!

    Keep on doing this; outside of typos this is sweet~ Since I'm lazy to sign in I'm bookmarking this.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 17, 2013
    Please don't take this the wrong way or as a criticism of yaoi pairings in general, but I don't like it when Ichigo is written as a gay character just to make other pairings work.

    I mean a lot of fics make Ichigo gay so Orihime falling in love with her rapist is more plausible. Even if Orihime is being forced to have sex with Ulquiorra I think it's kind of messed up to have her fall in love with him. Accept him? Sure. Commiserate with him? Definitely. Become friends with him? Sure. But having her fall for her just because they're stuck together seems kinda messed up.

    I just think having the characters fall for the person they were given to directly is really messed up. It's less love and more like accepting stockholm syndrome.

    I think characters (((Ichihime plz!!!! but if someone else it's still cool....just less cool :P))) that had feelings for each other but were separated get back together after Aizens offed because they still love each other at least in a few cases would be better than everyone (well everyone you have as official pairing not resenting their pairing) accepting the stockholm syndrome.

    A lot of the fics like this have Orihime falling for Ulquiorra, but maybe her just beings friends, confessing to Ichigo, Ichigo confessing back and Orihime trying to bring Ichigo and Ulquiorra together as friends might be better than Orihime just giving up. That scenario could work for other pairings so plz don't think I brought it up just because I'm an IchiHime shipper.

    Like I said, I feel like a jerk for making this criticism of your fic, but with all of the other fics like it pairing the characters with their owners, something like I described above might be a nice change of pace.



    Ps there were a couple errors where Momo was spelled "mom"
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  • From ANON - Brian Dooley on December 06, 2012
    I like this story. I happen to be a big fan of Prize of Victory and other stories the author wrote. That is why I am hoping that you update this story soon.
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  • From ANON - Brian D. on September 09, 2012
    Love this story. Hope you update soon.
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  • From Kalla on August 25, 2012
    Your welcome, and I was hoping for the Lilinette/Hitsugaya pairing since it's a extremely rare one. But no worries about that. I would suggest Hitsugaya be completely brainwashed by Aizen's Zanpakutou and forced to capture Shinigami in the World of the Living, in order to have new pets for Aizen's army, so they stay loyal to him.
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  • From ANON - DTE on August 20, 2012
    I really like this idea and find it interesting. The idea of the villain winning is more exciting than the usual stuff. I hope you update soon. I'll be looking forward for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Ryan on August 17, 2012
    I hope the second chapter comes out soon, I'm interested in seeing what pairing you have chosen.

    I know that this will contain both yaoi and heterosexual pairings. I have nothing against yaoi, i actually enjoy reading it when it has a good plot, i just prefer reading hetero fics. So I hope you even out the parings to also contain a the same amount of both yaoi and heterosexual pairings, otherwise this plot will seem a bit unrealistic since there are quite a few number of Shinigami women who have been captured such as Rukia, Matsumoto, Nemu, Unohana, Soi Fon, and Momo. The men shinigami who have been captured seem to be Renji, Byakuya, Toshiro, Ukitake and Hanatoro. Ishida, Inoue and Chad are the only humans.

    I understand that you might only want for each Espada to have one partner, and give the other partner they might be paired with to their fraccion, but since the fraccion are significantly less stronger than the Espada, wouldn't that defeat Aizen's purpose of breeding powerful/strong Shinigami/Arrancar hybrids. It might be better to have each Espada have two partners, that way there would be a better chance of reproducing a stronger hybrid. For example (just an example, you dont have to do this pairings if you don't want) if you paired Renji and Grimmjow together, Aizen might give Rukia to Grimmjow as well to not only make Renji submit to Grimmjow, but also increase the chances of getting Rukia pregnant as well.

    Other heterosexual possible pairings
    Nnoitra/Soi Fon
    Szayel/Unohona
    Stark/Matsumoto
    Rukia/ Ninth Espada
    Byakuya/Tia
    Ukitake/Tia
    Toshiro/Tia
    Rukia/Gin
    Nemu/Tosen
    Unohona/Stark
    Nnoitra/Nemu
    Matsumoto/Grimmjow
    Soi Fon/Yammy
    Rukia/Grimmjow

    I didn't put Orihime or Ulquiorra in any of the pairings, since I believe you have already decided to pair the two.

    As for yaoi pairings, as I stated before, I usually don't read yaoi unless it has a good story, so I'll leave those possible pairing ideas up to other reviewers.

    Since Aizen wants a heir, I assume he wants it to be full Shinigami. He can practically has his choice of who he wants, it just depends on his sexuality. If you are making him heterosexual in this fic, he could have Unohona or Soi Fon be the mother since the two have quite a good amount of Reiatsu since they are captains, but I think Soi Fon would fight Aizen to much, that Aizen would have to break her in order to get her to comply, which would defeat his purpose since the mother must be healthy in order to carry the baby to term. He could even have Rukia, since she is pretty strong, especially since now in the manga she is a Vice-Captain. It has already been stated in the manga that she should have be a seated officer, but wasn't do to Byakuya's over protectiveness. Also if Aizen does decide on Rukia, he has way of forcing Byakuya, Renji and Ukitake to go along with his plans, since there is the possible threat of Rukia being harmed by him. Also Rukia is of a noble clan, so if Aizen was the type to care about that sort of thing, if he were ever to take over soul society, his child would be recognized as a noble as well.

    If Aizen prefers the male gender, he also has his fair amount of who he chooses, but he would have to be more careful of who he chooses, because if he chooses someone strong like Ukitake, Toshiro or Byakuya, Ukitake/Toshiro//Byakuya would not be able to be paired with an Arrancar and therefore if one strong captain is taken out of the breeding pool, there is one less hybrid.

    Rukia and Orihime are my two favorite characters in Bleach, I hope you stay true to both their characters. You seem to be an Orihime fan, since this fic seems to be show a little of what she thinks and feels as Aizen explains things. I just hope you like Rukia, and please don't bash her, or make her suffer to much.

    That is another reason I usually don't read yaoi fics, many of the yaoi fics I come across always makes Rukia and Orihime out to be a bitches, especially Rukia, always making her seem excessively violent when the in the manga she isn't like that, or making her out to be ugly/tomboy/manly when she isn't. Just because she is petite, and have short hair does not mean she looks like a boy. I like how strong you have Orihime in this chapter, other fics usually portray her as a weakling, who is to scared to speak out. So I hope you continue to portray Orihime in a good light, as well as Rukia.

    I do look forward to reading this fic. Please update soon.



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  • From Kalla on August 16, 2012
    STARRK/UNOHANA!!! BARRAGAN/BYAKUYA!!!! LILINETTE/HITSUGAYA!!!!!
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