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Reviews for Destructions Malice: Lost Tales

By : Jessykins
  • From ANON - Leah on June 22, 2012
    I enjoyed reading both chapters. I especially enjoyed reading the first chapter and seeing what Rukia's training consisted of. It was very erotic, and I enjoyed Grimmjow's very dominant nature. You write him really well, and I'm happy to how treats Rukia as his toy, especially the part where he tells her it's time for her breakfast and how he has her pleaure him. I also enjoyed reading how he makes sure she is trained quite well in fellatio, and how he keeps training her for more than two hours to make sure her mouth and throat can take it.

    I also like how Rukia "breaks" from her training. She knows better than to go against her master, and how she becomes trained to give her master pleasure with her mouth, and how she too begins to get pleasure from the humiliation as well as what he does to her body. She has become his perfect slave/toy. I really hope to see more Rukia/Grimmjow chapters, I especially enjoy reading about when Grimmjow is in his dominant master role, and rukia is submissive to him.

    The second chapter I enjoyed reading because it sheds light on Grimmjow's background. I never really liked Nel in the manga, But I do like her in this chapter since she comes to Grimmjow's aid. You did an amazing job on Grimmjow's character as always, and I liked how you explained how it was Nel's disappearance that helped shaped Grimmjow's personality, it gives him a sort of human trait.




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  • From ANON - Anon on June 09, 2012
    Thank you so much for doing my request. This was a really, really hot chapter. It was also very well written, and I'm glad that we got to see more of Grimmjow's and Rukia's time together in Hueco Mundo.

    Another thing I liked about this chapter is how you captured both Grimmjow's and Rukia's characters really well. Grimmjow is still the strong, dominant confident character he is in the manga, and Rukia is someone who follows orders without fail, though not without fighting first. She is someone who will fight against something she feels is wrong, but once she realizes she is going against someone a lot stronger than she is, she knows when she has to fold. Rukia is in no ways a weak character, she will fight when she has to but she also is quite intelligent as well and knows better than to fight against her master or someone stronger than her. For example when Inoue is kidnapped in the manga, she backs Ichigo up and tells the Commander General that she will go with Ichigo and help bring back her friend, but when Byakuya comes into the scene, she knows better than to fight with her brother and goes with him back to Soul Society. She wasn't scared to shout at the Commander General, but did not want to risk disappointing and disobeying her brother. She knows when to pick her battles and knows when she has to submit.

    I really love how dominant Grimmjow is towards Rukia in this chapter, and how well he has trained Rukia. I also love how when she wakes up in the morning, the first thing she has to do is address Grimmjow as her master as well as ask how she is to serve him for the day. The line Grimmjow tells Rukia: “Just makes sure you stay on your knees…” he leaned forward and clasped two fingers around the girls chin and lifted her gaze to his, “Where you belong.” is a line I can see him making in the manga. He enjoys being dominant, as well as enjoys when others know that there place is on their knees before him, kneeling in submission.

    I also love the line “Okay little Dorei…time for breakfast.” Almost caused me a nosebleed. Love Grimmjow's lines in this fic. “Just use your mouth…you will become skilled with those lips of yours.” Another nosebleed. I think by the end of your chapters and fics, I'm going to be suffering from massive blood loss from all the nosebleeds.

    Really quite hot the way he makes Rukia free him from his uniform with her mouth, and I love how he pats her head and calls her a good girl, when she free his manhood. I love how she is his pet. Rukia is my favorite female character and I love seeing her in scenes where she is forced to be submissive to someone strong and powerful and dominant like Grimmjow.

    I absolutely love the way he conducts his training and tells Rukia: "Listen Shinigami…” started the Arrancar, pulling her hair so that her gaze met his, “We are going to continue this, until you can do it on your own…I wont have a fuck toy that ain’t good at her job.” He sneered down at her, “Again…” he pushed her head back in place, “open!” he commanded tugging the fistful of hair briskly.". He is a very good dom, master and teacher all rolled into one.

    I also love the position he put her in later on, which was the same position he put her in the first time he had taken her. He rewards her for being such a good Dorei,with the skill of his fingers of mouth on and in her, and brings her to multiple orgasms. Rukia is quite a lucky pet.

    Very awesome chapter!!! I hope you get more reviews, because in my opinion, this was an awesome chapter.










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