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By : KelliDenise

From ANON - Poison.Puff on July 15, 2012
OHEMGEE!!! this story is amazing,I've literally been glued to it for the past two days,gurl I tip my hat to you.the combination of sexiness,humor and bleachy goodness is overwhelming and I can't get enough.I'm very much looking forward to the next chapters,We Can Haz Now? ^_^
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From Koyuki on July 03, 2012
Really happy for the update!
This is getting truly interesting!
Can't wait for Nanao pick! I'm actually hoping it is indeed Shinji!
It is such a strange combo that it would be really unpredictable!
And it would be actually the first Shinji x Nanao piece ever!
You're doing an amazing job! Can't wait for more!
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From JOler on May 26, 2012
Hon, I hope you are doing well. I've been worried because you've been gone so long without even a status update.

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From JOler on March 18, 2012
Actually I kinda wonder how Byakuya would react if a Nervous Neliel dropped off some paperwork to him from her captain then hesitated ... when asked if there was anything else she shifts uncomfortably and looks at almost anything but Byakuya as she says "I .. need to tell you something." He can tell she's tense about whatever it is. "Go ahead, I'm listening." Neliel glances at the door to make sure it's closed then moves closer to talk to the captain just in case someone is trying to listen through the door. "Y...You remember that night right?" she says in a quietly desperate voice, her eyes downcast and her face flushed, her anxiety about the topic written all over her. Byakuya gets the barest hint of a smile as he remembers 'that night' and how they had sated each others 'pride' several times before finally parting company. "Are you asking if I would like to partake of your companionship again Miss Odelshank(sp)?" "Wha...? N...no, that isn't it at all!" she stammered, her hand drifting up to rest lightly on her abdomen. "I ... We ... I um, just thought ... maybe you would want to know ..." Her trembling was obvious to him now as was the realization that she was fighting off tears. "Please do not say that you are upset because I did not contact you after that night, lovely as it was. Perhaps you should leave and recompose yourself before continuing on this topic." The moment her tears began to overflow her eyes he rose from his chair, "Renji, come and escort Lt. Odelshank(sp) back to her squadron." Renji entered and when he laid his hand on her shoulder to turn her toward the door Nel threw herself into his arms and began sobbing in ernst. Her words were muffled by Renji's shoulder and shirtsleeve but there was no mistaking what she said. Renji's eyes darted to the woman in his arms while Byakuya's eyes flew wide and his breath hitched upon hearing her muffled "I'm pregnant."
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Now then ... his ancestors are insisting he produce an heir ... what if it ended up being half hollow? or would he be less than honorable and deny his responsibility in this case?
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From JOler on March 18, 2012
I vaguely remember Hantaro having an apparent crush on Rukia in the first arc of the series ... let's see how he handles her returning the interest .... with interest. I'd still like to see his reaction to Unohanna calling him into her office ... locking the door ... then offering him an intimate and personal refresher course in ... anatomy ... focusing on the reproductive system ... Poor boy's brain would probably melt.
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From JOler on March 14, 2012
I know this request will take a while since it would put a scare in the SWSS members for a few ... please let a few of them learn the value of SS (no it doesn't mean Soul Society) ... since no form of protection has ever been mentioned as being used. Perhaps not the first time around but maybe on the second go round ... I'd love to see Rukia explaining her 'condition' to Byakuya ... and her last 'victim' ... or Retsu confessing that she tied Kenpachi up that night but she's facing ... unexpected consequences of her visit (could you see how his eyes might light up at the thought of her having his baby? ... and then being the type that acts like she's suddenly fine crystal that will break if a breeze brushes past her ... ). Or ... Hmmm ... Toshiro being informed of impending fatherhood (ok the girl has morning sickness in his office midway through blurting it out ... Something like ... Captain Hitsuguya I ... need to talk (morning sickness episode that just misses his paper covered desk) to you about ... something important. (choked sniffles and sobs) I ... I ... I ... WE'RE gonna have a babyyyy... (he'd be frozen solid without his Zanpakto's help ... and Hyorimaru might even find it a bit amusing if he'd warned his 'master' to cool it and use precautions.
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From bleachfan7 on February 26, 2012
not a pairing i would have thought of, but bya is so hot & beautiful he goes w/everyone! adult nel, when not in midst of fighting or in flashback of dealing with his hatefulness, was fairly silly & childlike in her personality (& reminded me much of orihime's personality, except she was willing to kill unlike ori who seemed to have trouble even hurting someone in self-defense & was obviously much more overtly sexual, like rangiku). i kinda missed that silliness here. it was funny & sexy all the same overall, like w/the clever use of her tattoo & pubes.
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From JOler on February 26, 2012
Hmm ... If Orahime is going to be an idiot in this fic ... Perhaps have her draw one of the following ... Hantaro (clueless idiot vs panicky innocent ... Who ends up on top?), Toshiro, Ikakku, or .... Kon (in Ichigo's body of course ... though Ichigo might be her real target ~ we all know Kon wouldn't pass up her offer ....). I could see her bouncing up to Toshiro in his office and cheerfully offering to teach him her current favorite class. Him looking up "I'm not interested and I AM busy" then turning back to his paperwork briefly before taking a file full of reports back to the cabinet only to drop it as she croons out "it's sex education ..." at which point his already pale complexion goes snow white and he turns horrified eyes on her ... before ordering her out (and placing a guard on his door to prevent her return). Or she might ask Ikakku to teach her hand-to-hand fighting. He agrees. When he shows up to train her She's undressed for the occasion ... her logic (he can't fault it really ... once his brain starts functioning again) is that she won't have to worry about her clothes being too tight or getting tangled in anything ... and he won't be able to catch her by her clothes. ... Of course he's just stammering out "b...b....b.... Boobs!" and she sends him into critical nosebleed status with "oh yeah, I got two of them but I always kinda wondered what I'd look like with three ... I thought maybe I might find out during our break if you don't mind either resting your head there or letting me sit in your lap ..."

Lol ... He'd be hauled off to the fourth before the fight even started ... and would there be any observers at the practice grounds?
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From JOler on February 25, 2012
Glad you liked all the pairing suggestions.

Pout ... Am not a sick puppy ... Just like to see everyone mix it up a bit and am tired of certain over done pairings. (I'm firmly convinced Rangeku got her reputation from all the time she spent with Gin ... and that Gin is/was gay ... so they actually never did anything and she is just a virgin that is really good at projecting the appearance of one with experience).

It was so nice to see Nel have the stamina to help fulfill the demands made by Byakuya's ... pride (gotta wonder how magestic his 'pride' is ...)
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From JOler on January 30, 2012
Hmm ... Can we see in some random order ... Shuhei, Ukitake, Byakuya, and Shunsui drawn

Each by a female from this list ... Nelliel, Orahime, Rangeku, and Youroichi please?
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From mizperceived on January 21, 2012
I freaking love you and this story! I love when the girls all team up and get all empowered about their sexuality. Even when it's crackish smut!

More please!!
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From bleachfan7 on January 19, 2012
its funny to have mayuri be a hottie beneath the paint/costume. my only problem w/this chap was that orihime's portrayed as somewhat of an idiot. canon ori is 3rd in her class, so she's booksmart despite having no adult in her life to help her since her brother passed (at 12?). She's naive & has a crazy imagination, but she's not dumb. she basically tries to see good in everyone rather than the bad, so she seems to not notice the less 'good' intentions of those she comes across (ex: so chizuru is being overly friendly rather than molesting her) & is compassionate/kind-hearted to a fault, as we saw when she rejects death of menoly & heals loly even though they'd just brutally attacked her & would have killed her. i get trying to make chap funny, but it kinda crossed into purposely making her butt of joke at times, rather than just comedic.
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From JOler on January 18, 2012
I thoroughly enjoy rereading chapters 1, 2, and 3 ... can't wait for more. Please post again soon.
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From JOler on January 08, 2012
It would be great to see Rangeku blow Szayel's mind while assisting him with some very private experamints inside and outside of the ... uh ... lab? Not that he requested or even expected any assistance. (say maybe she just unexpectedly shows up to ... lend a hand ~ or maybe more). Or would she suggest the experamints and would he blow her mind?
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From JOler on December 28, 2011
Not very fond of the Ichigo Rukia pairing but after remembering how Ichigo freaked out about Rukia camping out in his closet and then totally losing it when Youroichi transformed in front of him the first time .... and assuming this is a few years later so the human boys are no longer questionably aged ... how about tossing in some random incidents of Ichigo walking into his room after a long day in class (probably college by now ... Or could be after work) ... only to discover he has a visitor in very seductive or suggestive attire. Maybe giving him a chance to nervously laugh it off and relax enough to be caught off guard by the next random visitor....

Of course if Ichigo is in college he might live in the dorm with a roommate or two ... say Chad and/or Uryu? Kinda wonder how Chad or Uryu would react to that situation too ... they have different personalities but still seem to be a bit innocent and naive in some ways. Could you see the boys walking in together after classes and a study session at the library ... only to find one of the females waiting for them wearing little more than a smirk and a hungry preditory look? Hmmmm ... to be honest Youroichi did seem to find Ichigo's reaction amusing so she'd probably get a serious kick out of making all three whimper or hyperventilate with nosebleeds.
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