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Reviews for House on Fire

By : Anithene
  • From severuslover on July 21, 2011
    I'm so glad i decided to read this as i usually skip het in all forms and fashions. But I'm glad i tried this. I probably wouldn't have if it was a Byakuya/ Hisana. Not that i don't like that pairing but I cant cant read it for some reason ...o_O Anywhoo I enjoyed every bit of this, it was poetically beautiful. Emotions raw and believable. True to the characters. Present tense worked well for this. God I love present tense. I like how that even though its about sex they still get soft sometimes, because who can share that level of intimacy just for the sake of it? Sooner or later, feelings WILL develop at some point. If even not strong ones. I like how he reacted whenever shed looked or acted too soft. That moment when she helped him dress and touched him was heartfelt though. Great job! I enjoyed reading this!

    Kay~
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  • From JamieGib on July 18, 2011
    Very nice story. It's nice to see a story on this site that's about Byakuya and not about the 50 million some odd men everybody thinks he should be screwing. I'm always on a see saw about Yoruichi...Kisuke? Byakuya? Both of them deserve her, need her, but who should she be with? Also, there's SoiFon...but I think that's really one-sided on her part...Yoruichi just likes her 'undivided attention'. Thanks for a great read. I think if Yoruichi and Byakuya did ever get together they certainly would burn down the house...at least the one the Kuchiki elders are staying in because she wouldn't put up with their moronic ways and would probably kick a few asses. Now that would be a story that would be fun to read!
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