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Reviews for A Beneficial Arrangement

By : vbruce
  • From ANON - Angel on May 10, 2013
    I absolutly love this story ! I can't wait till the next chapter and your oc is so awesome and kickass!! :D
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  • From Raymy on April 01, 2013
    It's good to see Byakuya's head is clear and he's aware of his feelings. He's cute when he jokes about the family not being a problem if they were all gone. I like the story but I find the chapters, at least lately, quite short; not much happening to comment on.
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  • From ANON - Kcm on April 01, 2013
    I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From Raymy on March 10, 2013
    Chap 20: *grins gleefully* It's too cute! Ginrei and Maki. It appears that there's nothing Bya doesn't like about Inari, which may be a reflection of his feelings for her, or just that she's just too different and interesting to him.
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  • From Raymy on March 07, 2013
    Chap 19: Hello again. I am proud to be one of the two or three that read your story! Just kidding. Of course there are more who read it, they just don't review. But I want you to keep writing so I'm gonna make sure you know that I like what I read.

    I'm glad the two of them are going to thwart the Kuchiki Clan's plans to intercede in their marriage contract. They like each other! What better way to start off a lifelong romance.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2012
    love the story I had to read all the chapters I just want to say keep going with this story and please update.
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  • From Raymy on September 23, 2012
    The couple seems to have taken to each other effortlessly and the verbal interactions of all the characters are witty and engaging. If only I could read for a bit longer. . Fast & good update. Thanks.
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  • From Raymy on September 05, 2012
    Yay! I got an update AND a mention. Thanks.
    So, this chapter made me smile and giggle. I've read too many fics that portray Byakuya as being somewhat mean as well as cold. I'm glad yours shows so much more to him and it makes me genuinely like him. Thanks again for the update.
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  • From ANON - Tazzy on September 04, 2012
    *laughs* The title so fits. And it's nice to see that Bya can unwind and have fun.
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  • From Raymy on September 02, 2012
    I thought I'd give this a try as I was perusing through all the Bleach stories looking for something with more than 1-3 chapters. Although, I wasn't sure whether I wanted to read it by the description, I'm willing to give anything a try a first. I had some reservations during the first couple of chapters as I tried to piece together the backstory that appears to be expected knowledge. I supposed having everything spelled out for you takes away from the challenge of self-discovery so I've moved passed that trepidation. Now, I've finished the chapters that were available and am hinged on a playful scene involving food. Hmph! I have been enjoying the story and realized that I've accepted the scenario, so I want more. Then I checked to see when it was last updated and my heart sank. If its been that long since an update, I fear that it has been shelved.
    I wrote my review in hopes you would read it and get new energy to carry on. While I am not a writer, I feel that if I were to do it, I would finish my story regardless of how many wanted to read it (or review it). Its a matter of personal integrity. I am actually speaking from a position of reading 80% of fics with no foreseeable ending. I find it frustrating to get into a good read and have to wait months for the plot to move forward. I don't want to lose interest but also don't want to read right from the beginning every time just to refresh my memory. I'm not criticizing just you only, my frustration has reach this point finally after so many disappointments. So, unless I have misspoke and there are legitimate reasons for 10 months of neglect, please finish your story and update. Thank you.
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  • From psyca on October 28, 2011
    Okay, so now the impending food fight has me thinking of fun between the two of them :). Excellent as always!
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  • From blackfox1 on October 18, 2011
    I've been giving this story a quick read, and it's enjoyable, but I have to point out something that's been bothering me about it. The title is misspelled. It should read 'A Beneficial Arrangement', rather than 'Benficial'. I could see it spelled that way if the story contained a character named 'Ben' and you meant the title to be a play on words, but as it is, I think it's just an ommission of the second, necessary 'e' in the word 'Beneficial'. You might want to correct this, thanks :-)
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  • From psyca on October 14, 2011
    Lovely, lovely. I can't wait for more! Bya is so adorable in love :).
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  • From Tazzy on October 09, 2011
    oh wow... talk about tear jerker but in a beautiful way.....
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  • From psyca on October 07, 2011
    Lovely. I particularly like the last bit with the two of them in her room. Very poignant.
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