Click Here!

Reviews for The Real King

By : NovaAlexandria
  • From ANON - Kristin on October 02, 2012
    That was soooo hot, pant, pant. I'm still laughing, thinking, about how Ichigo looked to the two drunks :D! I don't care that it take,s or will take, a little while for you to update, you have a little one, it is totally understandable. I really loved how you explained the pack dynamics. I like how Yuzu and Karin are part of the pack, and their places make sense too. I haven't had time to read at all lately and I hope I have time to read Prize of Victory too. I just want you to know how much I appreciate you continuing both stories. I absolutely love your writing style, and who cares about a couple of spelling errors, they aren't enough to distract you from the story, at all. Thank you and keep up your wonderful writing! :)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - gollumsfriend on October 01, 2012
    Thanks for the update!

    I think a 5 year time skip will be interesting and look forward to it!
    Report Review

  • From Raymy on September 29, 2012
    Oh! I laughed so hard my head was flung back. Just picturing what Ichigo looked like to the drunks. Still snickering. That was a good scene. Sigh.

    I never considered that Karin and Yuzu would be part of the pack. Even though they're Ichigo's sisters, I guess I thought it would be only hollows because that's their culture, not human's. Make's me wonder about how else they would fit in, especially if you're going to skip 5 years. However, if Ichigo and Grimm are just about finished their mating cycle, then I'm confused about jumping 5 years. I'd hope you'd explain how they dealt with it through flashback or something cause I can't imagine them being in a holding pattern for 5 years. I almost wondered, given how Ichigo is stretched so thin, and Grimm was concerned about keeping Szayel in the pack, whether Grimm would mate Szayel and Ichigo would get time off, so to speak. That kinda seems wrong, though, and I don't know how that could be managed successfully. At least, H'stu couldn't complain about Ichigo being a Beta. He'd just be an unmated Alpha, maybe even still the pack Alpha.

    So glad you updated again so soon. This chapter gave me a lot to think about and satisfied my craving for more from it. If you do jump 5 years, will you start another plot line? It doesn't feel like a wrap up.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - mysticweiss on September 16, 2012
    I like the story and it is an interesting twist.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - gollumsfriend on September 13, 2012


    Thanks so much for the chapter update!

    I just wanted to mention I'm still faithfully reading this story as well, and I appreciate your hard work!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Gwen on September 13, 2012
    I'm sorry i thought you were mentioning one of the guardians and had misspelled their names. >.< i tend to read fics late at night, probably eyestrain. Either that or I got my minor characters twisted again. *offers her own crafted items, not as good as Uryu's as an apology.* they're rougher, but Uryu never wove strips of leather into a bag XD.
    Report Review

  • From Raymy on September 13, 2012
    It's okay that there wasn't much plot development in this chapter. I'm just glad to get to revisit my favourite couple in one of my favourite stories. I keep wondering what will happen with the next mating and will Szayel find a new Alpha. Love it! Keep writing.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Chrissy on September 13, 2012
    I thought this was a wonderful chapter. Nothing heavy, fun filled and lighthearted and it made for a very enjoyable read. The cubs are even more adorable now that they are getting bigger and developing personalities.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Gwen on August 31, 2012
    you made a slight error. Jidanbo is the gate guardian. Jirobo I believe was his brother. But I may be remembering his name wrong.
    Report Review

  • From tonyamarie on August 30, 2012
    This story is so good I ust coud not stop reading. I love the way that they take care of their pack
    Report Review

  • From ANON - MilissaRukia on August 28, 2012
    I haave read all that you have of Prize of victory for now and am waiting paticenly for the next part. I will pass my time reading this interesting story. I do like it alot. Your writing is always so indepth and well stated it is easy to read. I will proably not review again till the end so forgive me for not making lots of reviews.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lyathali on August 15, 2012
    Really hoping this goes through *crosses fingers* Honestly, I tripped over this story and am absolutely loving what I've read so far! I really, really hope this thing keeps going ^_^

    I'm always a little hesitant to ask, but can't help wondering if you throw things at the computer when people point out typos? So far, nearly every time 'writhing' comes up, I see -withering- instead. Folk don't wither in passion, tend to writhe though.

    In any case, sorry to say it, but here's to hoping the writing bug doesn't stop biting you any time soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kyuryu on August 10, 2012
    It's ok that I took longer, we all have real lives to deal with. The important thing here is that you haven't given up on it. I give you major props for trying to stick with it till the end!
    Report Review

  • From Nakkinomiko on August 09, 2012
    I've been reading this story since you started it, and I absolutely LOVE it. :) I love the relationship you've established between Ichigo and Grimmjow, and you've managed to make my sympathetic to Szayel, which is no small feat! I can't wait for more!
    Report Review

  • From despairs on August 09, 2012
    Yesss! Updates on this story always make me crazy happy. Thank you! I was REALLY hoping the new cub would turn out to be a boy and i'm not disappointed, yay! Ternero sounds super cute too. And also what a pleasant surprise at the end of the chapter, we get to read some more of your special brand of IchiGrim lovin. Mmm!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!