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Reviews for The Real King

By : NovaAlexandria
  • From ANON - SummerTime on September 08, 2011
    I love bottom grimmjow. I love him so much. Cannon yet also cute. I also love the way you've done top ichigo, i like how caring he is, i also like how is hollow side will rear up and strike though i do feel like his hollow side was a little ooc, but we really only have ichigo's interpretation on his hollows actions, and maybe he's just overly optimistic in his interpretations, though i feel like that is also a little ooc. though i kind of like the ooc-ness because i don't want grimmjow getting abused, i dislike sexual violence :'( so i will take the ooc-ness. Any ways thanks for the update looking forward to the next one. Also i'm kind of hoping ichigo's family takes it well, gah i am worried for his faters reaction to the point that i almost wish ichigo can find away around it, though i doubt that will work with grimmjow living in their house. Also where has his family been? Did i just miss that detail? cause i feel like i've been wondering for a while.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 28, 2011
    Great update!
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  • From Chikagetsu on August 24, 2011
    XD Thanks for updating... I love this story, its so much fun to read..
    Can´t wait to read more:)
    Best wishes
    Chi
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on August 24, 2011
    finally Grimm was at least a bit willing. I liked that. It's discouraging when he acts like such a princess. I thought that he would be willing even as uke... just to manifest his... will to dominate... (?) I think he should instinctively want Ichigo to fuck him, to feel wanted, to assure his body that his Alfa is not going to leave or something...(?) (or just to make ichi look less selfish because he didn't seem to put up a real Ichigo-style fight with his instincts... he gave up just when he had found an excuse)
    ANYWAY... I LOVE THIS STORY! This chapter was great. Thank you for the update.
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  • From Chikagetsu on August 22, 2011
    I´ve been laughing SO hard XDDDD
    Grimmy gets a baby.. and from Ichigo- I love it XD
    Please update soon, I need more of this ^___^
    Best wishes
    Chi
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  • From Kazeshini on August 17, 2011
    Hahaha god I'm an idiot. An really tired so I'ma make this short BUT the next chapter needs to cut poor Grim a bit of slack, ne? The poor guy has been really submissive and I think he needs... ohh- I don't know... a blow job?? That would piss Shurosaki off too. Yes ** nods** I think that would work well. HAHA I think I'm losing my mind from lack of sleep. Lov ya xx
    Kazes
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  • From sainmoth14 on August 16, 2011
    ok im sorry if i have not commented on this before, this is a very interesting idea, and i like how you made ichigo top, and im thinking your doing a great job with grimmjow's personality, and the mpreg is icing on the cake well done
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on August 08, 2011
    Wow. Finally some explanations! COOL! An egg is SOOOOOOO much better than a pregnancy. That would be so .... wrong. So thank you! And I hope that the egg will come out of his stomach hole! and not the way Ichi planted it.... and i hope Grimm doesn't secretly hate Ichi for what he had ... accidentally? did... I hope you'll update soon!
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  • From ANON - Tokoloshe on August 08, 2011
    I am really enjoying this. Think the reason I like your stories so much is that you don’t forget that other characters also exist beyond your main pairings. Poor Grimmjow, due to instinct he gets into his role as submissive quite nicely. Had to laugh at curious Ishida (typical teenage boy) – very cute. Like to see Urahara reaction. Will Ichigo’s family eventually find out?
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  • From ANON - Masako on August 07, 2011
    Gimmjow...laying an egg....BWAHAHAHA！(◎_◎;). I'm sorry but that's an image I never thought I would have in my head. I really hope ichigo's inner hollow doesn't screw this up for ichi. I'm getting all nervous. Anyways, thanks for the chapter. Excited for the next.
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  • From ANON - tprophet07 on August 04, 2011
    This is a great story so far! I enjoyed reading it, and I can't wait to see the next chapter and the explanation. Hope you post it soon.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on August 03, 2011
    I like it !
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  • From GlassesandWhatnot on August 03, 2011
    finally a dom ichi in a grimmxichi or for that matter ANY slash pairing, HUZZAH! Leave it to NovaAlexandria, rare pairing extraordinaire, to tackle this one, looking forward to more ;)
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  • From ANON - ficfan3484 on August 02, 2011
    Okay, wow, this is really good. And Hot. I love that Grimm is the beta and Ichi is the alpha. I think you're doing an excellent job of keeping Grimm a beta and his usual badass self so far. Keep writing please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2011
    This is a great start to the story. I am finding myself enjoying this pairing surprisingly, and I love that Ichigo is the top.
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