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Reviews for The Real King

By : NovaAlexandria
  • From Kazeshini on September 28, 2011
    hehe I love this story- but then I love all your stories... Still, I love your Grimmjow. I can't wait for him to take Ichigo... that's gunna happen, right?!! lol. HEY! I noticed you're doing that thing with mixing up the "Then" and "Than" again. It bugs me- stop that!
    Looking forward to more of this hon, but don't stress if you're busy we apprieciate that this is extracurricular stuff :D
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  • From Kazeshini on September 23, 2011
    I love this story :) Full of HOT boy love with just the character i love **fangirl sigh** lol an dyou write it SO well my friend xoxo
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  • From Adela on September 21, 2011

    love it! I specially love your Karin.
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  • From ANON - gollumsfriend on September 21, 2011


    I absolutely agree 100% that there's no point in "rehashing" his explanations with a bunch of details the readers already (or SHOULD, at least) know. I think the chapter is well written and I especially loved all of Karin's comments. XD The only thing it may have lacked was something on the serious side between Isshin and Grimm.....but there's no reason why all of it had to be put in the same chapter. Maybe you will include something along those lines later. :)

    I'll repeat what I said in an earlier review...I'm still thrilled that this story features seme Ichi and uke Grimm (though Grimm hardly qualifies as the usual uke, and thank goodness you've kept him in character!!!) If you'd written this in their "usual" sexual roles, it wouldn't be half as interesting and entertaining as it is. Keep up the GREAT work!!
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  • From ANON - bcjink on September 16, 2011
    Very excited to see the update, can't wait for more :)
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  • From ANON - rgusty on September 16, 2011
    Good grief, I tried to review like four times and if this doesn't work I will email you! The captcha HATES me!!!
    I really like where this story is heading. As a rule, I do not like mpreg fics. But I think you are handling it very well. My only "complaint" if you could call if that, would be that I think Ichigo would be more.. emotional isn't the right word. Verbal about how he feels about his responsibility. The food thing I know is an problem, but it seems to me, that between instinct and his need to protect and secure his friends and family, it wouldn't really be an issue. but its whatever you think, and I am really enjoying what you are doing. Please keep it up!
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  • From Ficfan3484 on September 15, 2011
    I like Grimmjow in this chapter. He's actually kind of excited about finally having offspring.
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  • From ANON - gollumsfriend on September 15, 2011


    Aww, it's a terrific and entertaining story and I really hope you don't decide to drop it due to review numbers. That would be a shame. :(

    Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read about 'meeting the family'!
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  • From NightPredator on September 15, 2011
    I freaking love the depiction of power you have going on here. And feral Ichigo is HOT.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 14, 2011
    Dum dum dum! Interested in seeing how the Dad reacts to Grimmjow! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Severaltimes on September 14, 2011
    Great chapter, Ichi/grimm is SUCH a cute pairing. I wish there were more ichi/grimm stories. He makes such a sweet seme and grimm is such a cute and pouty uke. I'm surprised you don't get more reviews when your story is so good, i think some people just love grimm/ichi too much to think of it the other way around /shrugs/. I'm excited for ichi to see his family, i always think Karins reactions to things are so interesting because she is just so chill. I have no idea how Yuzu is going to understand when she doesn't even know ghosts and whatnot exist (at least i'm pretty sure she doesn't, i kind of missed some of the arc before the full-bring arc). I'm pumped for the next installment, keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 14, 2011
    I can't wait to see how Isshin reacts. great update!
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  • From ANON - chikagetsu on September 14, 2011

    Ilove this story, so please keep updating:-)
    This chappy I actually like the most, Ichi becoming more feral, dominating... maybe he finally accepts his inhuman side. I like that.
    And such ending, grimmy finally realizing he's getting what he desires most...its such a sweet feeling , I felt myself smiling.
    Its a sweet, sexy and beautiful story you're writing, please let me read more of this:)
    best wishes
    chikage




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  • From Ficfan3484 on September 10, 2011
    Ohohoho, I love how Grimmjow is planning what he's going to do Ichigo. I hope he actually goes through with his intentions. This story is wonderful.
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  • From Shirochan on September 08, 2011
    Thanks for another wonderful update! :-)
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