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From NightXIV on March 16, 2012
Awe, I hope Szayel and the baby are okay.
Ooh~ Why am I just finding out that you're with baby? Congrats >w
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From JOler on March 15, 2012
50 & 15 ... 2 blonds ... Tesra & Harribel (only two 'mature' blonds I can think of).
24 & 56 ... No real hints ... Starrk & Ulquiorra (both would be relatively non-violent and somewhat reasonable if approached properly).
If Nnoitra, Yammy, or Barragan participate they will insist on being the alpha. I suppose any of the fractiones could be there as well but Lilinette would probably be seen as too young and she is the only other blond I can think of (even Tesra might balk at mating someone who appears that young). I'm guessing Nel is with the good guys ... Possibly her fractiones as well. Can't really see risking putting two former fractiones of the same arrancar or the arrancar and his/her fractione together to breed.

hmmm ... I'm guessing Szayel survived since you are not finished torturing him but ... his cub is probably either gone or soon will be (poor Szayel). At least H'Tsu will have to admit Szayel had to choose ... protect the alpha's cub as ordered (by Ichigo AND instinct) or save himself and their cub (possibly bringing down the wrath of one or both alpha parents. Ichigo made it clear which he felt was more important to him and made the final choice if it came down to it. I'm surprised they couldn't let Orahime try to repair Szayel while they joined forces to heal the cub. While the cub was still forming riatsu, Szayel has a definite physical form. I suppose if he lost the baby, Orahime might be asked to heal some of his more serious injuries once he's stabilized. I'm guessing Ichigo will have to go back in to retrieve the packets that were left ... or they're currently stuffed in a bag somewhere and forgotten until things calm down. So glad Cachorro was well accepted, even though Chad will probably be a bit amused by the names because he does speak Spanish (the native language of the espada). If Szayel loses the baby it will be interesting to see who he might end up with (if anyone ... though given his Natural Born Beta nature to seak a strong mate I can't see him not evaluating the new possibilities in his new environment, especially with the potentially viable baby-daddies now pretty much including all interested (and not so interested) candidates. He could watch the humans, visords, shinigami, and few other hollows (Grimmjow, possibly Nel or her fractiones), he might even include the liberated zanpakto Zangetsu (guessing the zanpakto rebellion disn't happen) and start logging positive and negative qualities in order to decide who he should start subtly flirting with.

Pout ... if his riatsu is too low to register so he comes across as human ... Szayel ... would make such a pretty pink-haired classic beauty (tall, slim, graceful, elegant, intelligent, and refined) ... the perfect (apparent) female to make Byakuya's heart flutter ... he might even concider taking a non-shinigami mate (but be clueless about the true nature of his heart's desire). please try to do a Szayel turns female ficcie ... Hugs in advance.

Your energy should start improving once the baby is born and sleeping through the night. Hope you feel better.
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From ANON - Saka_Sandora on March 15, 2012
Maybe I'm just stupid, I can't figure out who they are (A X's). I really hope Szayel is going to be okay along with his baby. Darnyou for ending it there!
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From JOler on March 13, 2012
Hope you are getting more rest and feeling better.

I wonder if the lowered energy will initiate a change to a more compact and energy-efficient female form since females require less food to maintain the same body weight and energy level as a male. I'd still love to see Szayel have a bevy of male shinigami suitors / knights in shining armor trying to woo 'her' ... even if 'she' is expecting (Byakuya might even see it as proof that 'she' is healthy and fertile and could provide the requisit heir and get his elders to ease up in that regard - even if he does believe 'her' to be little more than a highly spiritually aware human). Discovery of Szayel's true gender and nature could be confessed but not believed until permanent ties are formed (after the current baby is weaned ... and another possibly on the way?) I just think it would be amusing to see some of the more reserved and aloof male captains be smitten by the 'tall, willowy, and delicate beauty that is able to see and interact with them .... and is incredibly alluring because she is so elusive and plays hard to get ...' LOL And we all know H'Tsu would be furious ... but what would Ichigo and Grimmjow think of the situation? I believe Ichigo asked about 'mixed packs' a few chapters back ... you really couldn't get much more mixed than a pack with all of Ichigo's aspects, two arrancar, a hollow cub, a hollow-human hybrid cub ... and a shinigami spouse to the pack Omega with a possible hollow-shinigami cub on the way ... (snicker). Introducing the in-laws would definitely be ... interesting.
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From ANON - KyuRyu on March 11, 2012
Cliffie! *bangs head on nearest surface* waaa!!

I love this story, you are an amazing author and I will buy any book you publish. I am officially a completly dedicated fan XD
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From ANON - Mary Lou on March 10, 2012
I am so sorry that I have not commented before this time. I want to say that I absolutely love this story! When I first spotted this story, I was afraid that it was going to be another excuse for sex between Grimmjow and Ichigo. I am so happy that this is not the case. You write really well, helping your readers to visualize each setting so nicely. I am anxious to see how things are going to fare for our little pack. There is only one other thing that would make this story perfect for me, and that is to include Uryuu in it. I can just see him taking care of Szayel. Uryuu is small, but mighty strong where it counts. He is also smart, which would be pleasing to Szayel. I realize that Szayel will still have to account to Hitsu, but I believe that you could work that all out just fine. Just a thought. Not begging, oh no. Well, maybe just a little. Keep up the good work!
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From JOler on March 10, 2012
Whine ... don't wanna see Szayel go bye bye ... and don't want the baby lost either. Glad Szayel was able to protect the baby and hope he can be saved. It's nice to see Grimmjow and Ichigo both caring for him so much (though I think it is because he's the baby's food source as far as Grimmjow will be willing to admit for now). Too bad Ichigo didn't knock out everyone after his speach to Kurosutchi ... and then make sure Kurosutchi was left alive in the same shape as Szayel ... with a few 'insignificant' body parts destroyed but left attached between his legs. Now I really want to see Szayel turn female and enchant Byakuya by "playing hard to get" and being incredibly shy and mysterious. A multiple way battle for Szayel's affections in the living realm ... Between H'Tsu, Isshen, Kisuke, and Byakuya ... possibly others of your choice... and interrupted by a kidnapping attempt by Kurosutchi would be epic (even though Kurosutchi would find the outcome less than desirable). Either way I don't want to see any pack members lost. I wonder if Orahime can heal Szayel and help him keep the cub. I can see Isshen twittering around as a happy grandpa while Kisuke takes a shine to his new adult charge (Szayel).

Hope you feel better soon and the baby lets you sleep. Hmmmm ... If you have two bathrooms you might get your significant other to push your desk, computer, and a pile of pillows and blankets to the room so you can just stay there to sleep in a semi-upright position (less pressure on the back that way) and make mad dashes for the potty less likely. It would also allow you to type when awake and not be doing sprints back and forth. Hmmm and can take impromptu naps when the need hits ... and be in the perfect position for lower back rubs when offered ... And he can have the other bathroom.
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From ANON - Saka_Sandora on March 09, 2012
You are so mean, but I did honestly expect Kurosuchi to do something like this. I hope Szayel doesn't lose his child, you've already put him through so much shit he should at least get something from all this, although I also know that things like this would happen. So i'm on the fence, but am hopeing for a happier ending.
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From Quetzalcotal on March 09, 2012
Time to head back to the living world i guess! i somehow doubt sticking around would be in any way sane now that the psyco nutcase knows where they are! Can't wait for the next chapter! update soon!!!!!!
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From ANON - Kristin on March 07, 2012
Wow, what a really cute chapter. I can't wait to see everyone's reacton to Cachorro and if he will change his form once he gets a little older. I love how Grimmjow is changing little by little from being around Ichigo. Hey don't worry about taking some extra time to update. I love your story, it is the best IchixGrim Fic there is, I can't wait to read more, keep up your amazing work!
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From JOler on March 02, 2012
Hope all goes well with you and the baby.

Actually, since Szayel's riatsu is so low, would a shinigami be able to tell he was a hollow of any level at the moment? If the answer is that Szayel's riatsu is low enough to be mistaken for a high riatsu possessing human ... and if he managed to switch to female during the last half of his pregnancy, it would be great for an active and most sought after shinigami captain (eh speaking of Byakuya here) to draw the short straw and be sent to investigate and ask questions about Ichigo's recent unexplained disappearance. Ichigo and pack camp out in Kisuke's 'basement'. Byakuya arrives to do the questioning and catches sight of Ichigo and his new, and obviously very intelligent, tutor. He sees the tutor as not only intelligent but well mannered, polite, and incredibly attractive. She is tall, willowy, pearl-like skin, eyes like the sun, and hair of such a delicate shade of pink ... she makes him think of a fragile, Sakura-kissed butterfly ... HIS Sakura-kissed butterfly. totally smitten. ... Poor Szayel being wooed by Byakuya (it would be hilarious when 'she' kept being coy and evasive ... and he persued more and more intently ... only to finally have one (or more) of the males who are in the know explain just who and what Szayel is).
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From sesshyfreak on March 02, 2012
Fantastic~ Part of me is concerned because Cachorro doesn't express wanting to play with the lizard, leading me to believe that he possibly takes after Ichigo in that he doesn't want to 'fight', but I'm probably just reading too much into things xD After all, babies always get too rough with things when they hit that age. I can't believe how cute the little one is, and I'm glad that Grimmjow is slowly changing, because it's believable that way. It's very in-character for him to react to Ichigo's presence slowly, but even more so now that some of the Beta hormones are gone. :3
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From blueflame125 on March 02, 2012
I giggled while I was reading this chapter. The cub is so adorable. And Grimmjow acted like the madam of the house. LOL
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From ANON - Crecre on March 01, 2012
I totally love your fic! It's the best IchixGrimm fic I've ever read, and I've tried a lot, but they just didn't do it for me. Also, I don't want to seem rude or weird or anything, but I think it's totally sweet that you're expecting given the story with Cacharro (hope I spelled that right) finally hatching, and Sayzel expecting. It's great! I can't wait to see what happens when they return to the human world. Also, I was wondering if Cacharro would ever take a human form before he's fully grown like maybe as a toddler or an maybe even an infant still, just curious. :D
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From JOler on March 01, 2012
Huggles, still hoping Szayel will slowly shift to female during the last half of his pregnancy (hormonal changes might take that long to show outwardly).

Still adore the baby. Glad Grimmjow has accepted Szayel.

It will be interesting to see everyone's reactions on both sides when the pack returns to the land of the living.
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