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Reviews for Broken Wing

By : Felineheart
  • From lara5170 on September 21, 2011
    This was really intense. I just read this for the 1st time & I feel like I'll scream if I don't find out what happens .
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2011
    Upon review of your story, it was noticed that you cite/quote from another source, but that it is not properly cited.

    Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097

    Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.

    Thank you for your cooperation.

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  • From ANON - A.J. on April 03, 2011
    I love your story line. And as the previous review states there are some grammatical errors. It took going back and rereading to even notice the errors. Your errors are not a big problem and I would love it if you could continue writing this story cause I cannot wait to read what happens next.
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  • From gollumsfriend on April 02, 2011

    I do appreciate the attempt you're making here. Your story line is promising.

    BUT....there is such a high number of grammatical errors and typos that it's a bit of a disappointment. I really think you should consider finding a beta/proofreader or something to help you out a bit.
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