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Reviews for Salvation

By : Mirrors1984
  • From ANON - on October 04, 2016

    Good day. I was wondering if you would still continue this story. Good luck! 


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  • From ANON - Sori on April 27, 2016
    Please write more! I really enjoy this fanfic. It's been a while since I have enjoyed a fanfic
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  • From ANON - Purple on December 11, 2015
    I love this story soooo much. You have to write more!
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  • From ANON - KatzeNoel on April 18, 2013
    Is this gonna be continued?
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  • From BashToGlory on February 17, 2013
    Aaaaaahhhhh!!!!!! Theres going to be more right, right!!!!! Im goibg to go insane if theres not more!!!
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  • From BashToGlory on February 17, 2013
    Holy sht...tatskie pregnate......... Never has that crossed my mind!!!!

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  • From hornyzombee on May 14, 2012
    I want more with extra lemon or lime with tequila or ice tea even.Thank you for writing a great one.
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  • From Quietreaper on April 12, 2012
    first off id liek to say you have awesome stories. i found you fanfiction.net account and saw you had an account here. Reflection was an awesome story and this one has pretty much toped that one in my book. this story is awesome and i cant wait to se the next chapter :D
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  • From ANON - ranita4ever on March 22, 2012
    i saw this story at ff.net. but i read through this site- and i loved it. it was very emotional, i loved the way you portraied their feelings and emotions and thoughts.

    i cant wait to see how this story continues.

    i'm not very good at english so i cant say more about it. i can read it but not write it very well. so i'm sorry for the short review. but know that i really enjoy reading your story. it's awesome =)
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  • From darksamurai on February 21, 2012
    Ah, I've finally caught up with the story.

    1. Elements
    This story has all the elements it needs. It's seinen-like, so mature themes are dominant. Also, the "heavy" atmosphere. But that bit of comedy is a good thing, too. As far as genres are concerned, it's great.

    2. Plot
    Seeing as it is mostly slice-of-life, I like the fact that there's no fighting with Hollows or things like that. The conflict with the Shinigami is a necessity. It brings the story to the climax (at least I think that's what will happen). What sometimes happens is the drama/angst being too intense in that part of the story, but I believe you won't overdo it (the story up till now showed that you know the proportions). I only fear that a certain cliche might be used. The impression might change depending on the execution of it, but usually I'm against it.
    The only thing that is in my opinion unnecessary is the romance of Yuzu and Ishida. It doesn't bring much to the story. It provides a conflict that is relatively easily resolved, and that's it. Not to mention that it's kind of ooc. Ishida and Yuzu? I doubt he'd touch a sixteen years old girl. Plus, a sixteen years old girl going to school and working on a double-shift? And taking care of the house? This doesn't sound good to me.
    Oh, and another thing - this is a sequel, right. But I haven't read the previous story and I don't feel lost in this one, so I think it can function as a stand-alone.

    3. Characters
    The strongest point of this story. I haven't read many "Bleach" fanfictions, but this is the first one that has characters behaving so in-character. You've captured their personalities perfectly, really. They're acting as the manga originals. That's what makes this story so good. There's Ichigo acting like a d..., but that's explained by the story. And even in being a d..., he's so Ichigo-like. I'm especially impressed at how you're writing about Tatsuki. We have some information in manga about what kind of person she is, but you nicely expanded on her.

    4. Form
    Many changes of point of view is nice. It helps in understanding the characters, their thoughts, feelings etc. From the strictly "technical" side, it's nice. The way you write makes the reading pretty easy. That is, the style isn't heavy, and there is no confusion in who says what and such things. The only thing I can complain about are repetitions. I know that sometimes it's hard to find words to replace other words, but there are ways to avoid repeating them. But it isn't anything bad, so there's no reason to worry.

    That was me trying to be kind of objective.
    Now to the subjective part.

    *I love the pairings! At first, I didn't like Shirosaki x Inoue, but it grew on me. I said what I had to say about Yuzu x Ishida. The main pairing is lovely. I really like IchiTatsu. Imo, it's the best pairing with Ichigo (the other two don't seem that good to me).
    *I hate you for making a such a good story that now reading an average story seems almost like a crime. And that waiting for the next chapters is a pain.
    *I love the quality of this fic.

    Kudos.


    PS Lemon in two or three chapters, huh? So far, the only lemon we've got was IchiTatsu. And in the state she's in right now, I don't think she'd like to have sex. So maybe other couples? Now, we'll have the thing with Shinigami ended by then or we'll have the "last time before we/I/you probably die" (that's at least my guess). I don't relish the idea of the latter - cliche, and strongly overused to boot.
    PS 2 How many chapters more do you plan to write for this story? Or is the outcome still not planned yet and you will end it when you think it's "then"?
    PS 3 At the beginning, I wondered who the girl with Ishida was. I didn't expect Yuzu, not a bit. An unpleasant surprise. But in the end, it doesn't matter that much to me.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2011
    Love it so far. Damn Ogichi but then again Hollows can't keep secrets can they?
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  • From xBattleCryx on December 04, 2011
    Hey M, I'm really sorry I didn't review the last chapter. Been busy and I must've missed that update. On the plus side, I did get to read two great chapters back to back. Honestly, I never thought the Soul Society would come after them in full force like this, but its an excellent way to have the events that took place in "Reflection" still have meaning. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - vic on November 07, 2011
    You need to do more lemons, they are hot!
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  • From ANON - jb on October 28, 2011
    keep it up
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  • From xBattleCryx on October 26, 2011
    Another great chapter. Ichigo's really starting to see the light at the end of the tunnel now.
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