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Reviews for Salvation

By : Mirrors1984
  • From WinterWake on February 12, 2011
    Ooooo, I was wondering if Ogichi would know what was up, since they're connected and all. Well played, excellent chapter. The angst is in great supply and is just lovely. Also, you're totally spoiling me with your update schedule!
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  • From WinterWake on February 10, 2011
    I commend you and your brilliant work. First, I absolutely love Tatsuki/Ichigo stories, and there are so few of them in the world--and so many fewer that are actually well written--and so few of THOSE that are actually *unique*. This one is all three. Second, you have managed to take Ichigo (a character that is seemingly awkward or at least oblivious to all things sexual in the manga) and turn him into a sex addict--and make me *believe* it. That speaks great volumes about your command of story telling, that you can shape the plot and manipulate the character dynamics in a way that makes this form of his character a viable one. He doesn't feel like he's OOC in your story, just changed by the events you unfolded. Quite a feat, considering the distance of his transformation, and you've done an amazing job.

    As for this chapter, your author's note says it's a different style than you normally write, but I would never have thought that give how absolutely brilliant it is. The only thing I would say I would have liked to see is at least part of it from his perspective--if only because I'm so curious about what's actually going on in his head. However, since whole point is that *Tatsuki* doesn't know either, I can appreciate that the story is better told when we, too, are kept in suspense.

    Thank you for the wonderful story. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From xBattleCryx on February 08, 2011
    M, If i could I would kiss you. This chapter was masterfully done. Your lemon scenes are a tad bit more..rough..but this one was brilliant too. I have loved every chapter of this story, of course I would like this one too! Kudos!

    I am a bit curious on where the two will go from here. I think its about time they admit their feelings for each other, or else Tatsuki is just going to keep thinking she is inadequate. I hope this bout of sex will bring them closer, and not farther apart. Ichigo needs her.
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  • From ANON - vic on February 08, 2011
    wow this was really good. In the lemon you can actually feel the characters presence while they are doing the nasty. Too many stories have characters having sex but it felt clinical and anyone could be doing it. But in this lemon is so much better because you know it's tatsuki and ichigo.

    I like this story though i admit i haven't read the prequel. I am just a huge tatsuki and ichigo fan and it's nice to see more fanfiction about them.
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  • From xBattleCryx on February 06, 2011
    Ok, cool. I can wait for a bit.
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  • From xBattleCryx on February 05, 2011
    Woohoo! It's almost here!
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  • From xBattleCryx on February 03, 2011
    Another good chapter! Thanks. I have feeling some hot sex is coming soon.
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  • From xBattleCryx on January 31, 2011
    Awesome chapter. I have officially become addicted to this story. Every day I checked to see if it had been updated. Ya know, you've become my favorite author on this site. So keep up the good work and update soon please!!!
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on January 28, 2011
    I'd really like to kill Isshin now. Why did Ichigo's family show up at her house anyway? Were they just looking for Ichigo and thought this might be a good place, or did Rukia call and tell them?

    Ichigo's denial in this chapter is excellent. Every addict says that they can quit whenever they want to...but they can't.

    I'm still rather interested in knowing why Uryuu's lover is. My vote right now is for Rukia.

    Thanks for writing. I'm gonna bookmark this so I can check on updates.
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on January 28, 2011
    Things I liked about Chapter 5:
    *Ogichi hasn't turned in to a pansy - he's still a slightly deranged Hollow who just happens to be madly in love with Orihime.
    *Ogichi beating the shit out of the guy through three 'tazings' For some reason that cracked me up just a little bit.
    *Ichigo being willing to admit that he was using sex just to numb his real life and try to feel something different.
    *Tatsuki actually being mature enough to understand point 3 and not beating the hell out of Ichigo for trying to make her a numbing agent.


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  • From ANON - Caitriona on January 28, 2011
    Uryuu has a girlfriend?!? Well, wonders never cease.

    Interesting chapter. She goes from all concerned to all giddy over Ichigo. I don't know how I feel about that. Good thing I'm not the author huh? :D

    I'm looking forward to reading how Orihimi reacts to Ichigo's return....and how Ogichi reacts.
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on January 28, 2011
    You've done a good job of showing Ichigo's depression. I'm actually pretty surprised that he hasn't tried to off himself with as 'down' as you describe.

    Nicely done.
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  • From Vidori on January 28, 2011
    Yay for pervy Ichigo~

    And lawl @ Isshin. Such a dork.

    Good as always, Ms. Mirrors. Still wanting to know who Ishida's girlfriend is~
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  • From xBattleCryx on January 25, 2011
    Now that was awesome! Not only are you a great writer, but you update often too! I'm seriously digging this story. Look forward to more.
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  • From xBattleCryx on January 23, 2011
    Another good chapter. Just keep updating and I'll keep reading and reviewing. I reckon Ichigo will try to put the moves on Tatsuki again soon.
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