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Reviews for You Bent My Triangle

By : AmberDDawn
  • From KLunaHisagi on May 19, 2018

    I'm sure this story is dead now, and I'm sad about that. I was very intrigued reading it. I do hope you'll come and finish this story.


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  • From ANON - brittany on February 06, 2012
    More more more!!! Must have more! Please update soon!
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  • From NikkiNikki on November 16, 2010
    chapter 14: Yaaaay :] New chapter! Thank you! Wow Yuzu being pregnant doesn't make things go easier and I'm so excited what's going to happen to Ulquiorra next! Good chapter, building up lots of Tension...
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on November 12, 2010
    ch13. that last line about urahara looking was too funny. ulqui's reaction was too--poor boy had his toy taken away. and he was trying to be gentle. if karen loves both, might we be heading for a yummy 3some? if so, lucky lucky girl! it would get the other arrancars off her & give her lots of protection & it seems like a power boost too! update soon!
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  • From ANON - nikki on November 11, 2010
    Are you still working on this one? I'm so in love with the Karin x Grimm pairing its an amazing idea!
    Can't wait to read more, good job!
    Nikki
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on November 04, 2010
    its getting soooo good! by the way, its 'sonido' as noun or 'sonidoed' when saying the character has just engaged in activity. all hell is about to break loose. i hope poor yuzu isn't knocked up by that creep... or has an std... & will she develop the same thing as karin?
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  • From ANON - burntroses on November 03, 2010
    NOOOOOOOOO!!! NOT GRIMMY!!!! please oh please more asap I am so addicted to this story now. :)
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on November 03, 2010
    ch11. grimm better not die, unless he immediately goes to SS and can come back to karin. heck they never even got to 2nd base--he can't die. neither can she, though doesn't look like she will.
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on November 02, 2010
    holy cow! hope toshiro gets their in time to rescue karin & grimm or grimm manages to get recovered enough to save them... interesting plot twist on karen being narcotic for hollows--certainly fun to see ulqui's response to her & his loss of control! will he eventually figure he doesn't just want to lick her blood like a vampire and his 'need' is a bit more carnal? she seems to be a magnet for shinigami too, though w/both toshiro & renji sniffing around her, so will this be part of the same plot thread? hope you can update soon.
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  • From ANON - makochan on October 30, 2010
    I'm loving this story more and more. The triangle is all sorts of fun!
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  • From DaughterofAzrael on October 28, 2010
    Chech the summary. It's Hueco Mundo instead of Heuco.
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on October 28, 2010
    huh, so she's a vizored to be too? looks like renji isn't a real love interest, but grimm & shiro are; how about a 3some? it was a bit sad to read they influence each other, since she calms him & brings good out of him, but in turn, it sounds like he's bringing out more bad from her, or has a stronger influence on the dark side w/in her (though he's waking up her power which isn't bad). Its interesting so far (typo's a little distracting since it interferes w/the flow at times). Look forward to next chap.
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  • From JOler on October 27, 2010
    honestly, that Moi guy seems like the type that wouldn't take no for an answer under normal circumstances, Karin's ability to KO him being not so normal. Yuzu doesn't have that luck. Wonder what would happen if Karin begged her undead entourage to sort of be there watching over her sister when she goes out with the guy (Gigui's hidden but close by of course). Karin just needs some space to relax and do her homework. Moi takes Yuzu to the local make out spot and Yuzu says no which Moi refuses to accept. In step the entourage to the rescue once they put on their gigui's. Grimmjow rushes an injured and devistated Yuzu back to her sister only to be interupted part way there by Ulquiora. Yuzu had been very dazed or had fainted but comes around in mid-air being carried by a supposed human who is persuing her sister. Her frightened cry draws Ulquiora's attention, him thinking this is the human Grimmjow is there to be with. He looks at her and is stunned, the shimmering gossamer-like sakura colored spirit ribbons are entrancing, almost hypnotic to him. Grimmjow, realizing that Yuzu is in imminant danger from Ulquiora makes haste in getting her to a safe place. Once and Ulquiora confront each other he's caught off guard by Ulquiora telling him that she's too good for him and that if anyone is to be with her it is to be him .... lol ... of course Yuzu can't see Ulquiora only Grimmjow. Now Szayel gets to begin to wonder ... when Ulquiora demands a Gigui similar to Grimmjow's ... and Ichigo is soooo happy he only has TWO sisters.

    That would be sooo hillarious ... oh well ... lol ... can let that happen in my imagination until I see what you really DO have planned for the assembly of players. (Sorry I enjoy twisting bunnies into macabre monsters when a fic is left unfinished).

    This is one of those fics I check for everyday so I don't miss a moment of it ... great work.
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  • From JOler on October 26, 2010
    hmmm ... somehow I see lots of jealousy sitting around Karin. Probably a visit by Ulquiora in the not too distant future. At least one boy figuring out that Grimmjow isn't a bad guy around Karin even though they really want him to be. And I still think it would be great if Karin settled for the fact that she has a male harem of dead guys at her beck and call ... hmmm and maybe she'll let several of them have a serious go at that ex of Yuzu's ... lol ... let them all be there when he breaks Yuzu's heart and they can beat the crap outta him ... and drop his half dead body in front of Karin with an explaination of why it happened and to let her have a few 'words' with him about hurting her sister. (would kind of be nice for one more boy to show up and fall for Yuzu ... an nice boy ... very nice ~ at least to Yuzu or when around her ~hmmmm ... has Ulquiora ever seen Yuzu? ... now that might be an interesting little twist ... Ulquiora going to confront Grimmjow about being smitten by a lowly human only to be smitten himself by her sister ... ha ha ha. Ichigo and his dad (also an ex-captain soul reaper I believe) would have a fit.)

    Great Chapter ... love this fic so far.
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on October 26, 2010
    so happy focus is back on main characters. if I'd wanted to read about ichiruki & their individual lives, I'd go to that genre. So, teen Karen is as powerful as Ichi or moreso, and her ice queen persona seems to make her attractive to males. Love that she is still as kickass post puberty as she was as tomboy. Liking that bit of rivalry and jealousy ice king shiro is showing towards renji's ease w/Karin, and of course loving the attraction btwn main pairing. She should be more scared of Grimm but she isn't and he feels whole w/her. Is this something like soul mates concept, I wonder? Are the 3 males the metaphorical triangle? hope 2nd date goes a lot better (no bruising or broken bones) and of course hope she is able to help Yuzu get over creep ex-boyfriend. excited to read more.
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