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Reviews for I Am The King

By : HollowedRose
  • From try10 on March 28, 2012
    THIS STORY IS EPIC! THE WAY YOU PORTRAY THE CHARACTERS IS AMAZING! I can't believe this is your first fanfic. You should definitely write more. XD
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  • From GudenMulle on October 27, 2011
    Oh.. So.. What now? What happens? Is Ichigo now protected since he is her playmate, or will i only make it all the harsher when Grimmjow once again comes looking? And is this an expression of Grimmjows maybe-existing feelings? What is Aareineros (can't spell his damn name) scheme in all of this? And what about the real world? And Soul Society? WHO will risk their necks to do something about this? And WTF is Aizen planning.. uuh. I will be waiting with baited breath! Love this story, I've even recommended it, though it is awful to poor Ichigo. But... I feel like a sadist, but I love it.
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  • From ANON - Yummerset on September 21, 2011
    I am so glad you found my review helpful, i try to give good feedback that is constructive whenever i can. I'm really into it, i always find myself drawn to really dark rapefics despite being a survivor myself. it sounds weird, it's not that i like them per se but i often find myself reading them and getting really into them, so when i say i'm really interested but don't specify liking it, it basically means i'm going to keep reading and you're a good writer. I really like the changes btw, i felt uncomfortable reading about everyone knowing about ichi's rape, it really bothered me (i know i would not want so many people to know that about me so soon, or to hear it through the grape vine), i'm glad you made the changes but i just want to say it's your fic, own it and write how ever you mean to write it. Yes i's important if people enjoy your writing but if your voice and meaning gets lost somewhere in trying to please then it's not worth it. Looking forward to future installments
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  • From ANON - gollumsfriend on September 18, 2011

    Thanks for the update! Still a good story of course, but there really were a large amount of typos and grammatical errors in this recent chapter.
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  • From toujourseveille on September 18, 2011
    Oh... I like this chapter.

    Poor Urahara... Poor Isshin...

    (Poor... –well... fuckin' EVERYONE.)

    Urahara and Kon have an ABSURD amount of pressure on them (Urahara can't go any faster, and Kon can't be Ichigo). And everyone else just feels helpless—and worried—and they take it out on them.

    (On a different note, I fear that my review was not sent for the last chapter, but (should that be the case) I have no idea what I'd said.)
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  • From ANON - Yummerset on September 17, 2011
    i am intrigued so far, i think the darkness is interesting and not too heavy and overly dramatic, i also like the flow of the back and forth between karakura and las noches. One thing that bothers me though is that almost everyone knows about ichi's rape. I'ts like, couldn't they have given him a little privacy? It also makes the fic seem a bit overly dramatic and doesn't really seem to fit with the rest of the fic's flow to me, also it is unrealistic. Even though uruyu said he was keeping it on a "need to know basis" it sure didn't feel like it. It feels like everyone knows and for some reason, even though i know he's a fictional character in a fan fic, i am bothered by his lack of privacy. Other than that though am interested to see how this fic continues, not sure if i'd say i like it but i can't stop reading it and i am very interested in it, also i like your writing style. Glad grimm can't abuse ichi for a while. I'm interested to see how obsessive grimm becomes over ichi and ichi's reactions.
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  • From GudenMulle on September 15, 2011
    I'm so sad I missed an update! I'm as caught up in this story as ever, though. Grimmjow seems to be having some trouble with his feelings for Ichigo. Starrk should totally be Ichigo's shining knight in armor!!
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  • From ANON - gollumsfriend on September 15, 2011


    I really loved Lilinette in this chapter. She'll be good to Ichi and he needs that right now!

    Can't wait for your next update, keep up the great work!
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  • From toujourseveille on September 14, 2011
    ...Quite a real thing that Ichigo momentarily considered Orihime switching places with him. *nods sagely*

    Well. This is good. I would say more, but I'm not excelling in the words department right now.... :D

    But do continue~
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  • From ANON - gollumsfriend on August 29, 2011
    I remember starting this fic back when you were only 5-6 chapters in....but then stopped reading it because I'm not very patient when it comes to waiting for chapter updates (usually only read completed stories).

    Just wanted to say that now that I've caught up to chapter 19, I've enjoyed reading it so far and really look forward to seeing the direction you continue to take it in. Keep up the good work!
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  • From GudenMulle on August 25, 2011
    You are very welcome :). I know what it's like to have stories drifting AFF, and not really knowing whether it's worth the trouble updating them, nomatter how much or little attention they got at first.
    Shinji is seriously growing on me, though Hiyori is as incredibly annoying as ever. But that's the way it's supposed to be, I guess. I'm REALLY curious as to what is happening in Hueco Mundo. And what about Isshin? I'm getting ahead of myself, but that's what good stories make us do, right? ;)
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  • From GudenMulle on August 17, 2011
    This is quite the awesome story! Though my heart is bleeding for poor Ichigo. I am very curious about the way you are playing with Grimmjow's character, it's interesting, and a nice touch in general about Arrancars and Espadas .. what to call it.. philosophical wonderings of their life and evolution. And the way Gin played Ichigo, oh boy, I just had a picture in my head of Rukia breaking down, and then replacing it with one of Ichigo. Evil, evil Gin!! And is Aizen's purpose really to have Ichigo under an illusion as well? Or is he already under that illusion? Hmmm?
    And about that gate to save Ichigo, really, there's no way in hell either A) Ichigo is still alive after a month, B) Aizen's scheme about Ichigo isn't finished before a month and C) how the fuck is Grimmjow going to keep his hands offa Ichigo? He's gotta snap soon or at least at some point.
    You have me obsessing about Ichigo and his Hollow too.. Overall, really, REALLY, well done, I'm hooked. I hope you continue?
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  • From Lethargy on April 27, 2011
    Thanks for updating! I'm glad that Grimmjow's homicidal impulses towards Ichigo seem to be toning down. Will he get another chance to "play" with him? Will Ishida be able to save the day? I'm excited to find out!
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  • From toujourseveille on April 27, 2011
    Ah! Welcome back. :D

    ...Did not see that coming. Wow—this is the worst possible time for thugs to come for revenge on Ichigo. Poor guy. Poor EVERYONE.

    I'm interested to see how you'll deal with the general relationship with the Vizards in comparison to canon... (And hopefully, Hachi will heal Kon and Inoue.)

    Keep a' writing, naa?
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  • From ANON - Neriel on March 18, 2011
    So glad to see you're updating again! Keep it coming!

    Up to now you've portrayed Grimmjow as a really disturbed, sick bastard, but he also seems to be realising that what he is doing is wrong? Will he try to be more gentle with Ichigo?
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