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By : NovaAlexandria
  • From ANON - Totty on October 03, 2012
    First off, beautiful chapter! The relationship there is perfect! I also agree that there should be more Karin/Grimmjow stories. And blackstorm has an art that illustrates the annoyance of calling Grimmjow's hair teal.

    http://blackstorm.deviantart.com/#/d4rt2jq


    Can't wait til next time.
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  • From ANON - Tokoloshe on October 03, 2012
    Again a lovely chapter. Have to say Toshiro is not one of my favourite characters but I loved him in this chapter. Harrible is also being slowly swayed and shown here not to be just a mindless follower but someone that observes her surroundings and like the tide change and adjust accordingly. The last chapter has left me at a dark place with Gin in his cubby and this chapter gave me some hope that things will change now for the better. My favourite paragraph in this chapter: Privacy… who knew it would be such a turn-on for the little dragon? Then again, she told herself, every iceberg, no matter how large, melted in time. All the ocean had to do was surround it for long enough.
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  • From ANON - WhiteOut on October 03, 2012
    i really liked this chapter, i guess i like toshiro's character. I also like that you have been getting him more involved in the story as of late, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on October 03, 2012
    I just love your story! I finally catch up to the end of this story and I know it is a little late, but congratulations on the baby! I hope you update soon! This story is a good healthy addiction for me and would love to read the second part, when you find time!
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  • From Raymy on October 01, 2012
    In order for Hallibel to fully abandon her loyalty to Aizen, he would need to cross (or attempt to) that last line of hollow law that she suspects he might. I expect, given that she seems to be reasonable, she would align herself with the growing opposition if that happened. That implies more horror in store and the probability that Szayel's family would be the target is high. I can't stand it anymore. I'm coming to expect the torture as a normal part of the story's progression. I hope that the transition to part 2 will show the growing strength of the rebels and give us hope for an overthrow and especially vengeance. Toshiro's expanding power is a portent of the developing force that will rise up and take back the Seireitei. It's heartening to see Toshiro's situation improve, at the very least, and perhaps he will feel more for Hallibel than he thought possible, if she gains his respect.
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  • From kadajclone on October 01, 2012
    chapter 105

    Well good to see a development in Toshiro and Harribel's relationship/pet-master thing, and it sucks that Rangiku is STILL getting chained up by that dick Noitora. It's a pity so few Arrancar have gotten their shit together and are still running on instinct and less ......pleasant emotions.
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  • From shadoesong on October 01, 2012
    I just read your chapter involving Toshiro. I'm surprised you went with "aging' him. Especially when Kubo-sensei, himself, stated that Toshiro was full grown. I find myself somewhat disappointed. You've stated how much you dislike OCs because it screws around with the canon characters too much, but then ignore it. Plus, Halibel's hollow hole in located in her womb, ie, she doesn't have one. It'll be interesting to see how you're going to work around that. I love your creativity when it came to Szayel's children. The chapter was well written, but it is apparent that you have had trouble with this pairing. It feels like you are scrambling to establish their relationship too quickly rather than seeing it develop over several chapters like the other pairings.
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  • From ANON - Aviary on October 01, 2012
    Aww poor Gin!!! and Unohana, I like how we see more of Aizen slowly losing his control and how the state of his Arrancars is affecting him. I just can't say that enough, to be honest I was worried for a minute you were going to off Gin! I've come to love him, he's awesome, and I really do enjoy how you get into everyone's point of view. Ajuga oh dear, she'll need to be careful now Aizen is going to be watching her. I love how you had Ajuga tell Hana it was so cute and Hana has matured and I look forward to seeing more of her as well.

    I have to say I adore Karin and Grimmjow!!! They are my favorite! It's the best crack pairing!
    Then I have to say it's Tesra and Tatsuki it's refreshing to see them together, they are so adorable together. It's a lovely change from the darkness that happens.
    Third is Rangiku and Nnoitra they are great, I like their interatctions and how their relationship is getting better.

    I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! Keep up the great work! You and Black Fox are doing so well!

    I was surprised by Nel and Renji's pairing but I was happy with it, and I want to see if when the claims are all said and done what will happen, who will stay in their 'relationships' or if things will change. (At least I'm assuming it will get there at some point)

    I can't wait to see what happens with Ggio and Soi Fon, that is relationship I can't wait to see develop!

    I hope you and your son are doing well!

    Keep up the great work!

    -Aviary

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  • From ANON - B on September 29, 2012
    I cant believe you are ending this I love this story!
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  • From ANON - Leanne on September 28, 2012
    So glad you decided to continue it :3 It is truely awsome and I do love Karin and
    grimjoww and Tatsuki and Tesla
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  • From ANON - KLunaHisagi on September 27, 2012
    Hi there. I've been reading this story for a long time and I have read a few other stories by you as well. I think it would be wonderful if you'd continue this story in part 2. I know, I don't review much. I believe I've only done it once or twice, but most times I don't know what to say.

    I really hope you continue this story.
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  • From ANON - frozenflower95 on September 27, 2012
    I really do hope you continue this story! I may not review every chapter, but i do read every single one. I'm glad you and your son is as healthy as ever, so please please PLEASE when you get some, if any, free time, continue writing this story. I would really appreciate seeing a closure to such a long story that I've been following for... a long while now. :D
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  • From ANON - rose on September 24, 2012
    please dont stop writing this story is is my favorite one and i always look foreword to when the next chapter is up and i would hate to not know how it ends.
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  • From ANON - RadiantSky on September 24, 2012
    I love tesra/tatsuki because he makes such a great submissive and she was destined to be a dominant ;) they just work so well together
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  • From ANON - Animeprincess on September 24, 2012
    Hi!
    First let me apologize for not commenting sooner on your writing ... I absolutely love this story and every week I check to see if there is a new chapter.
    I think your ideas are new and innovative I the Bleach fanfic world ( at least as far as I have read).

    I certainly understand what it is like have a munchkin (wait till your munchkin becomes a rugrat and then a teenager...) but I totally agree with you in regard to the endless possibilities to a Part 2. So, on behalf of all of your fans who read your story but just don't take the time to review (how selfish of us lol) please write a part 2. Hey, at least I hit the count button if that helps at all?..?

    On a serious note, I didn't think I would enjoy reading Karin/Grim, but much to my suprise. I do as well as all of your pairings (oh except poor Bya-San) ..

    Thank you so much for sharing this with the public.
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