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Reviews for Prize of Victory

By : NovaAlexandria
  • From Raymy on October 13, 2012
    So glad Szayel got through another chapter unharmed, even though, we still got to find out what Aizen would have done to him and Karin if he had failed. As for the kidlets, Diaemus is so cute, tormented by a loving, overprotective mother. He's tolerant of her attentions, but thinks he doesn't need them. He'd wise up if he was denied. Ajuga seems to be coping with her recent trauma with Gin. She's behaving as if she hadn't witnessed anything which is very mature of her, as far as staying safe goes. I'm sure she's counting up the grievances against Aizen, biding her time.
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  • From ANON - Harlequin on October 13, 2012
    I am soso glad things worked out for Szayel; no matter how bad he can be, he's gone through enough. And you have made the most horrifying, monstrous Aizen I've ever seen. That's been shown before multiple times, but this latest threat is just...you really have a talent for coming up with cruel punishments.

    The little slices of life we got from GrimmKarin and Ulquihime were wonderful. Hooray, Diaemus's speech problem has been fixed! Also, I don't know why, but it was really heartwarming to see Ulquiorra on the list of males Grimmjow trusts with his daughter.

    Can't wait for the next (and final) chapter!
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  • From Kalla on October 13, 2012
    I want to see a Ajuga/Diaemus pairing where Ajuga partially claims Diaemus. Only if you want, it's only a suggestion
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  • From ANON - Kendra on October 11, 2012
    I wanted to drop by and say your story is AMAZING. I am hooked, constantly checking back to see when its updated. xD Although I admit, the MoP has also grabed me by the ankles, dragging me away to pandaland. Keep up the amazing work!
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  • From Aviary on October 10, 2012
    Review for Household Changes: Toshiro.

    I love how you've developed Toshiro and have had him getting older and stronger and I love the way you've portrayed Toshiro and Halibel, it's a great change and I like how they've gotten closer and been able to better understand each other. It's fantastic. I'm hoping to see more of Soi Fon she's always been one of my favorites. Thank you two so much for the hard work!!!
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  • From ANON - moodymel on October 09, 2012
    Great chapter. I loved the thought of Harribel punishing her fraccion with chores.
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  • From ANON - Aryun on October 08, 2012
    Oh, I correct them gently... at first. Just like Senbonzakura has a lavender hilt wrap with a WHITE sheath. It's not black or blue or any other color of the rainbow. and for the last time, Senbonzakura is a MAN and Zabimaru is a Nue *grumbles* On several occasions... in particular, when they make either Rukia, Byakuya, Hisana or Renji raging assholes in an effort to pair them with someone else I get really irate! That absolutely infuriates the hell out of me! You supposedly love a character so very much, but don't understand the basic inner workings of your supposed favorite character! Byakuya being a raging ass to Rukia because she looks like Hisana. Uhm, not quite. He couldn't look at her because it HURT she looked like the love of his life. And she WAS the love of his life. He won't forget her easily if someone kisses him and then rage how much of a bitch Hisana was. It's going to be something long and traumatic for him. Oh they make me so angry! I'm like really? REALLY?! I read an Uryu and Orihime where Ichigo beat her. oh for god’s sake! I don't think that boy could hurt anyone like that except for those that hurt those he loves first. and Orihime isn't the type to do that, either. They drive me absolutely insane! It's like they don't care except for their own little twilight-ish storyline. It's quite disappointing. (And thanks to you I LOVE Grim/Karen!) And don't ever get into the Fushgi Yugi fandom :( It makes me cry with the butchering...
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  • From kadajclone on October 08, 2012
    hmm didn't even realize that this story got Tv troped

    http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanficRecs/Bleach

    scroll down to and click "For Want Of A Nail" then scroll down towards the bottom to find fic.
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  • From satterb on October 06, 2012
    Thank you for updating!!! I always get excited when I see a new chapter. I wasn't sure what to think about Hallibel and Toshiro, and I certainly can't stand her Fracciones.(sp?) But I was glad to see that Hallibel can appreciate what she has. I think Toshiro is the cutest ever! I look forward to more. Thanks for all your hard work.
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  • From ANON - William on October 06, 2012
    Another great chapter. I am glad to see the more "humane" side of our favorite espada's finally. I hope you do continue this story with part 2 because it would be a shame for this to end now. I realize real life keeps good authors from posting continuous updates that are so demanded of them but I do truly hope you keep this one going. I have enjoyed your bleach stories after only finding them this past week and I have read everyone one of them. I really loved the the trilogy of the HMK kids and this one is on par with them as well. Keep up the really great story and hopefully you will find time to keep us entertained as always.
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  • From Roronoa_93 on October 06, 2012
    Absolutely love this - The characters are dipicted perfectly and their personalities spot on!!! I have found myself almost addicted to reading your work and find myself waiting impatiently for the next chapter! I have found no other fanfiction which entraps me within the story as you do!!
    My favourite pairing would either be Karin/Grimmjow or Toshiro/Haribel! Not 100% decided yet :P

    Has Ichigo been told that he's an uncle yet? or does yoruichi plan to keep it secret for fear of him causing havoc, mainly inflicting horrible damage to Grimmjow?

    Also, I hope that Yammy and Aizen get whats coming to them! Here's hoping it hurts!!
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  • From ANON - Kristin on October 05, 2012
    I really like how you have moved Halibel and Toshiro's realationship on. I had no idea that she had plans like that for him, but I love where it is going, plus poor Toshiro deserves to get out of the clutches of Halibel's Fracciones. I never realized or thought about the fact that all, or just about all, of Aizen's warriors and enemies are mated/claimed with children, or claimed/mated, to eachother. He has to be getting paranoid, what with that fact, the Swarm constantly attacking, and the fact that he still doesn't have an heir.
    On to your question, yes, it bugs me too when people put Grimmjow's hair down as teal, when it is light blue. I've also seen it written as powder blue, what do you think about that as a description for his hair?
    I'm really glad that you have already started Part 2, I'm really excited for it! Don't worry about getting caught up in WOW, as long as you plan to continue writing this story, and The Real King, I'm happy, whenever you can update, just never stop writing, you're an amazing writer:)
    I still haven't seen or heard of anyone else doing the Karin/Grimmjow pairing and I absolutely love it! Keep up your great work!
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  • From ANON - e on October 04, 2012
    Chapter 105. Loved it, this new turn of events... so Harribel was waiting for Toshiro to grow up to be "mates", that sums up to 8 arrancar-shinigamy (or human) relationships¡ wonder if Aizen at one point is gonna flip realizing almost all his best warriors are "mated" to his old enemies.
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  • From fountainofink on October 04, 2012
    Yes I am reading this!!!! Pleeeeasee don't stop writing; this fic is my only source of KarinGrimm action and I absolutely love the dark quality to the whole story.

    If you stop, I might just cry...
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  • From ANON - Leanne on October 03, 2012
    I'm impressed and happy with what you did with Toshiro and Harrible, It's great that they are gonna turn on Aizen :3
    Please tell are they going to join with Karin's group to fight him?
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