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Reviews for Prize of Victory

By : NovaAlexandria
  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on January 14, 2011
    explanations are necessary, and this was done well. we get a sense of karin's emotional confusion & longing for support/friendship. I wondered if now that ulqui is relaxing somewhat, if the twins and tats/hime would be permitted to interact more. the could help each other out so much and that female bond can be so important when dealing w/stressful life issues (as they are in this au).

    also wondered if hime would be trying to get ulqui to make love face to face. if she's trying to love him (again) then i'd think facing each other would be an important show of greater intimacy & partnership, as opposed to just him 'claiming' her. sure would be funny if he paralleled grimmy's obsession w/trying every position he can think of upon discovery of joys of changing routine. would do a happy dance if both the ulquihime & grimmkarin couplings moved to full mating claim as described so they could really be able to protect themselves when guys aren't around (and shows the guy's trust in them).
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  • From ANON - Onba on January 13, 2011
    Cat in heat, lol! I wonder if bats go into heat, though? I'll have to check.
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  • From Mirrors1984 on January 12, 2011
    I actually loved this chapter. (especially how Tatsuki teased Orihime afterwards and said that she ought to get herself an Arrancar. LOL). And Ulquiorra's somewhat shyness in thanking Orihime for helping him with his little dilemma added a cuteness and I still felt as if it was something that he would do in that situation and that's very rare to find in fics. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From KiraSahari on January 12, 2011
    I love youuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!! hahahaha One of my fav pairings is Ulquiorra and Orihime!!! (I was devastated when he died T.T) Last chapter was so adorable, poor Ulquiorra hope Orihime really teach him how to properly show his love, he already loves her and if one day she is able to return that love, he is going to love her even more
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on January 11, 2011
    omg, one of my fav chaps! ulqui was just adorable. tats response at end made me lol. i thought furry ulqui was 2nd release? or do both have fur but 2nd also has wings? hard to remember. look forward to next chap.
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  • From rosuki on January 11, 2011
    """“Have a good day.” He said rather awkwardly before closing it behind him and leaving.

    She stared at the door in shock for a moment before she started to chuckle.""""

    CUTEST FLIPPING PART EVER! I was like awww I so see it! Its so cute! Great Chapter. I hate how people don't review. It only takes a few seconds -shrugs-. Great job at your story! I cannot wait to read more!
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  • From HollowedRose on January 11, 2011
    Ulquiorra was just too cute! xD

    Seriously, I loved your description, I could almost seem him there in the room, all cat-like, lol.

    This claim you speak of sounds familiar, I probably read it in another story of yours, I remember it was StarkxGrimmjow, now that was hot. I could be wrong though. >.>
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  • From HollowedRose on January 10, 2011
    Ah you got me there, I was almost sure she'd get a Zanpakuto. ( I thought the name was Zanpakutou, but you certainly know better so now I have to go back and fix all the typos xD )

    I didn't really think about it before but heh, Hitsugaya is with Halibel, now that's interesting. I hope you'll write a bit about that sometime in the future, even if it's not much. I can't wait for the next chapter. xD


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  • From ANON - Onba on January 09, 2011
    OMG I love this story! Its creep, exiting, and heart breaking! I'm so glad your continuing it!
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  • From Mirrors1984 on January 09, 2011
    I liked this chapter because Grimm seems to be taking things seriously with Karin now (I suppose the Claiming is like a next step). Hope to see more and to also see how everyone else is doing as well. =)
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  • From rosuki on January 08, 2011
    This is actually a really really good story!I really enjoy it and hope to read more. I sincerely cannot wait to read the next chapter.Great job!
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on January 08, 2011
    very happy karin is preggers esp if grimm is already feeling compelled to breed... baby will be beautiful (or plural if get twins). hope he claims her right away. the other grimkarin fic got abandoned so this is my only fix for this unusual pairing. can't wait to read about her powers strengthening (& its so nice to read happier juu & nanao too. a bit surprised they haven't sought comfort/love in one another after all that time).

    read you aren't as enthused for ulquihime writing, but you do it well. its one of my favorite pairings (2nd to ichihime) & i esp like how you are having ulqui woo hime & make up for past. really want them to have a happy ending (how is she not w/child after 5 yrs though? do we imagine she is using her powers unconsciously as morning after pill substitute?) wouldn't mind seeing that pairing procreate either.
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  • From Bleachwhore on January 08, 2011
    I am very mich looking foward to seeing my love Gin, and will wait patiently. Im sorry i had to skip chapter 8, couldnt take seeing someone i admire as much as byakuya being manhandled.
    But chapter 9 was great, i love seeing those two together. Looking foward to chapter 10
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  • From ANON - ShadowStalker on January 06, 2011
    Very good story so far, though I do have to say that Yammy/Byakuya was completely unexpected. This might just be the first fanfic I've ever read where Yammy... "got any action", to put it crudely. I honestly have a hard time imagining him with anyone, let alone Byakuya. It does make for an interesting twist though. Right now I'm most curious to find out what happens to Gin and Matsumoto. I haven't read too many fanfics that deal with Aizen/Gin after the manga revealed that Gin was NOT actually loyal to Aizen, so I'm really interested in how different writers will handle their relationships now.
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  • From Mirrors1984 on January 06, 2011
    I felt really bad for Byakuya, but instead of being pissed at Yammy I was curiously pissed at Byakuya's family for supporting and letting something like that happen to him out of noble pride. What a bunch of uppity bastards, but it indeed was dark. I've just seen a side of Yammy I thought I would never see. *wide eyes* And like always I liked the chapter (I'm really twisted, ain't I?) and I can't wait to see what Karin's powers are. =)
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