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From ANON - Onba on January 20, 2011
�unnecessary anatomy�- *far too horrified by this to speak*
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From Qiedia on January 20, 2011
I am usually too lazy to review but what the heck, this story is really good so I am gonna stop being so darn sluggish and write something to you. :P

This story is really interesting and exciting to read and I am looking forward to the next chapter. :) Saw that you are the author to the story "Crossbreeding the Future" and I just wanted to say that that story is also really good. I am not done reading that one yet but I a getting there. :P Anyway, what I wanted to say was that this is an awesome story and I am really anxious to see what will happen next.
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From KiraSahari on January 20, 2011
hahahaha again couldn't read so much of this chapter =S, hate Yammy! ewwww! I admire Byakuya even more, he is so strong =( Karin and Grimmy kittens are going to be beautiful =) and I don't care if Ulqui and Hime are having little bats, just please, please, please, don't kill him T.T is nice to know that Byakuya at least had knews about his sister, reading some reviews I found very interesting that someone suggested Stark and Yuzu =) thanks so much for the update, you are a great writter, hope to read some more soon, take care, XoXo.
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From ANON - Onba on January 19, 2011
Karin is definatly preggers. I wonder what the kid will look like? Also I am eagerly awaiting the day Ichigo finds out about them! That will be a load of fun (and possibly carnage)!

Gin lives! I'm over joyed, but wait about Ran? I'm a super Gin/Ran fan, so I hope they get together . . . ssuming she's alive too.
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From Mirrors1984 on January 18, 2011
So sorry I haven't reviewed! (I hate myself for having crappy internet!) But writing F/F scenes is hard (unless you have experience yourself. I won't say anymore! *blushes*) and I really liked the last chapter and the Yuzu and Karin dialoge. I thought that it was about time for Karin to know and be shown some gratitude and even a bit of approval because even though Grimmjow kinda blackmailed her into it, he is showing at least some desire to make things formal and even affection? Anyways... I'll stop now before I write the longest review in AFF history... =)

PS: Can't wait to see Byakuya again.
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From ANON - bleachfan7 on January 17, 2011
grimmy is being just adorable. this is only the 2nd time i've seen grimmkarin (1st fic seems abandoned) but its totally believable. i want to see them officially mated & prepping for baby (babies)--yuzu in auntie mode is probably all sorts of overprotective funny too.

still vote for both hime & karin to be preggers 2gether. i love ulqui & grimm interactions (so funny & antagonistic & sibling-ish) and i also love the women's interaction & bonding & supportiveness. if nanao is allowed to visit on a regular, she could be the resource for what to expect during pregnancy as well as provide that elder sister/mentor role to all 4 of the women.

good luck with writing (know you are many chaps in already but luck anyway).
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From KiraSahari on January 17, 2011
hahahaha sorry for not reviewing the other xP thanks for giving me this chapter so soon, I read the other but I really didn't know what to say to be honest, just poor Toushiro, maybe some guys would love to be a "fuck toy" but he is not like that, it was well written, that must have been hard but it is not my cup of tea, how can I said this, is not like I hate it but I don't like it. Now I am sure Karin is pregnant mmmmmmmmmm that would be great for Grimmy, looks like he is falling for the girl without knowing it, he want her and not because she is Ichigo's sister, yeah, keep telling you that Kitten! So next chapter is going to be hard, don't know if I am going to be able to read it =/ and one question, what happen to Momo? Is she alive? Is she Aizen's pet? never like Momo to be honest, I just remember her after reading Toushiro's fate. Can't wait to read some more, thank you so much for sharing, love this chapter, Grimmy was sexy and adorable hehehe Karin didn't have a chance, how can you resist that sexy cat begging for attention? She is already falling for him, that is going to be very hard for Ichigo mmmmmmmmmmmm or maybe not, once he realize Grimmy have been good with his sisters, because with the hatred that exist between them, he could have been awful to them and he didn't do it, that is going to be interesting =) Take care, tons of love, XoXo.
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From rosuki on January 17, 2011
BAW!! Grimmjow is soooo sooo soooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute! I seriously just yelled out loud "He is so CUTE!" I think I actually really like them....great job keep it coming!
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From ANON - Kazes on January 17, 2011
Eeewie yuri :p I'm back hun. Sorry for the big gaps in love from me. Nawh, I looove reading your Grimmy and Karin action. Smokin! Teeny tiny errors in places I can't remember now. ACTUALLY one of them was when Uki was talking to Karin about zanpakutou's and he said something like "That aren't giving to you..." when I think you meant "given" to you. Or maybe it's just that I'm so tired my vision is getting blurry and I'm just seeing things... HAHA Oh, I'm losing my mind. LOVE YOUR WORK BABE! and CURSE YOU for putting new plots in my head **shakes fist**.
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From ANON - bleachfan7 on January 17, 2011
poor shiro. at least his claiming is the least painful compared to everyone else.

karin/grimm & ulqui/hime my favorites in this fic. keep thinking uki & nanao can find love under stark's rule (don't think he'd oppose it). tats needs to find herself an arrancar of her own, but w/o knowing which ones are still around, can't imagine who would fit w/her fighter personality (besides grimm who is taken). as gentle & motherly as yuzu is, i can see her getting along w/starkk, actually, while acting as a sister/mother to lilynette.

hope at some point we read ulquihime sexcapades paralleling grimkarin's which somehow gets back to grimm so he can then gloat & lord it over ulqui that he's better/knows more about something (since ulqui deems him so often as trash b/c he's weaker & uncouth). would be funny. w/play dates of respective progeny providing more comic relief among future angst.

hinted in this chap that gin is being tortured, so in this 'verse did he try to kill aizen unsuccessfully? is rangiku alive? does she get to be w/gin despite his being someone's torture toy?
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From rosuki on January 16, 2011
BAW! So sad but so cute! Great job!
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From ANON - star on January 14, 2011
Still enjoying the story. Since you've mention that soi fong's still alive, I hope you'll do a chapter or part of a chapter on her, just for fun.
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From KiraSahari on January 14, 2011
You know I was reading some reviews and all I could think was mmmmmmmmm if the last time Orihime and Ulquiorra had sex was great because she was willing, what will happen when they finally make love and face to face?? O.O Holy Cow!!! *�* nosebleed, nosebleed!!! hahahaha people call him a cold hearted bastard but he is not cold at all, nope, He is hot, smart, strong, passionate, a great lover and he is in the road to learn some manners mmmmmmmmm Orihime is a very lucky girl =) ok, now I will stop thinking about that or I will die from blood loss!!! hahahaha Read you soon, =) XoXo.
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From KiraSahari on January 14, 2011
I love your story, is very interesting, not so sure but is Karin pregnant xP? she is taming Grimmjow, well hahaha they are taming each other, they will be a strong and great couple as it will be Orihime and Ulquiorra. Can't wait to see Ulquiorra and Orihime as mates, she was the only one able to break the iron grip he had over his emotions, is not really his fault he is an ass hahahaha, he simply didn't know how to deal with emotions, it was just like he had forgotten everything about feelings, that is why for me they were perfect for each other because Orihime is all heart and he didn't know where his heart was, an angel saving a fallen angel =). One question, not so sure but did he always take her in his first or his second release? I love the way you write your characters, their actions and their reactions, how can I said this? you keep them real, any fan story will always have a bit of OC because is not written by the original author and that person is the only one that know the characters inside and out, but you story is very close to that =) Reading about Byakuya was hard, I couldn't read all the chapter, it was too much painful, is Renji alive? Hope he is, Byakuya and Renji is my second fav couple in bleach. And Ukitake and Starrk, mmmmmmmm, I don't know why but sounds like a very interesting couple, Uki doesn't seem attracted to Nanao and I feel like she will never forget Shunsui, mmmmmmmm but you are the writer not me hehehehe. Thank you so much for sharing, love the fact that your boyfriend supports you =) take care ok and hope to read you soon, XoXo.
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From rosuki on January 14, 2011
OHHHHHH Shunsui and Nanao!!!
I know I am such a sap. It was one of those chapters that needed to be done to explain everything, nonetheless it was good. Great job! T-toshiro...I love him and Rangiku...treat them o-ok?I hope? Can't wait!
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