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By : NovaAlexandria

From KiraSahari on January 28, 2011
Ouch! Poor Gin but anyway I thought it was going to be worst for him, in some way I am relieve Byakuya got the worse deal of them all, seems like Gin is still betraying Aizen, good for him, just hope it doesn't bring worst things for them, hate Aizen, he is such a bastard and the way you have portrayed him is perfect, I think I know what is going to happen to Yuzu, Aizen probably will think that just because she is Karin's sister she is as fertile as her but if Karin is the first to conceive the reason is clear, they must be willing or no baby! Want to know more about Hime and Ulqui =) hahahaha how is the wooing going??? and can't wait to read about Karin and Grimmy's wedding night!!! Ichigo is going to have a heart attack!!!
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From ANON - Silva on January 28, 2011
GREAT MOTHER OF ALL THINGS HOLY I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING. Scare the livin' shit outta Grimmjow and have his instinct go haywire why dontcha? Shhiiiiiit.....terrify him into nearly Claiming her against her will, and be a master-servant Claim rather than a mutual Mate Claim- and here I was hoping Grimmjow was attached enough to let her bond back. I mean, you fuck for three months solid and you're probably willing to keep 'em around the rest of your life if you're a Hollow, right? Antichrist incarnate.....surprised the hell outta me, you did. I can't wait to see what you'll throw at us readers in the next chapter!
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From ANON - bleachfan7 on January 27, 2011
hope aizen isn't a total dick. can grimmy just say he had to help karin out? w/o mention of pregnancy... am hopeful grim can claim her that same night (which i guess is at least 2 chaps away if next one is about aizen, unohana, & gin). if aizen claims her, it will suck big time.

ulqui being nice w/o realizing it is still so sweet to me. love ulquihime.
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From ANON - Onba on January 27, 2011
Oh, dear. I have a bad feeling about next chapter. What will Aizen do about this. If Szayel finds out too he'll no doute what to 'examin' Karin! *shiver*

And Gin, poor Gin! I have a feelling Ran is dead . . .
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From KiraSahari on January 27, 2011
Looooooooove it!!! Grimmy is so sweet hahahahaha he is in love with Karin xP and he is going to be a good dad! =) poor Yuzu =( I don't care how much the characters suffer if they have a happy ending!! Aizen is hot and sexy but I hate him with all my heart!! Poor Gin, sounds like he is having a miserable life =( hahahahaha and I love the fact that Grimmy is thinking that Hime is Ulqui's weakness when he is having the same problem with Karin xD!!! Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa yeah, kittens!! Karin is a twin so... any chance that instead of baby they are going to have babies???
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From ANON - Erosu on January 27, 2011
I've been following this story every update and although I do not review up until now I must say that your idea is great and refreshing. I like how the tension now arises with Karin's obvious condition. My heart tugs at what you have in store for Yuzu for she is one of my favorite characters, hopefully not the path of Byakuya bit whatever you already have planned I will respect.

About Gin...Im not going to lie and say he isn't the one I have been the most anxious to see but yes after bits and clues you have given I have a really bad feeling about his fate. Given that captains and lieutenants must be Claimed the lack of mention of Rangiku tells me something went wrong in this note. Perhaps Gin tried protecting her from that fate and Aizen wasn't none too happy about it. Just speculating but all in all I would like to say great job for making my toes stand on end waiting for an update and I am sure to whatever you have in store will be marvelous
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From ANON - bleachfan7 on January 26, 2011
was checking for update all the time so thx for posting!

hurray for baby grimm confirmation! the lines where karin was 'stroking' grm w/her reiatsu were so sweet & tender i was squealing in my head. very exciting chap. highlights fact that it really is imperative she get claimed asap or else they will keep on getting attacked since grim can't be there 24/7. was wondering if yuzu/ukitake was a viable pairing--can't see any mentioned arrancar being nice enough apart from stark, which i mentioned before i think. still, she probably needs to be protected since she's got no power to protect herself. never would have guessed at aizen/unohana pairing. pleasant little side surprise. update soon!
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From ANON - Onba on January 26, 2011
So Karin is the first uh? I bet the claiming somehow prevents pregnancy in all non-arrancar, but its just a guess.

Great chapter!
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From ANON - Kazes on January 26, 2011
SQUEAL! I love this chappy :D AND guess what? I didn't see ONE error in it! :D Well done my friend! Well, considering it's 1am I think I awt to go to bed- just had to read this when I saw you posted it. Man, so much has happened since this, it's weird going back to here :) Niiiiiiight! ~ J
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From ANON - Jack on January 26, 2011
I may skip the next chapter because I'm not that interested in Bakuya (don't like him much anyway), but I really do enjoy the fact that there IS A STORYLINE, so far the best one is Karin's and Yuzu's. I look forward to reading more of that. Keep up the writing.
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From KiraSahari on January 25, 2011
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww love it hahahahaha mmmmmmm Ukitake and Yuzu!! interesting......... nice to know that Starrk and Lilinette love their family, Shunsui was very wise on leaving his best friend and his beloved in good hands =) hope to read more soon, really want to know about Gin too, you know, I hate Aizen and Tousen but in some way I always like Gin xP take care, tons of love, XoXo
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From ANON - Silva on January 24, 2011
Since I first saw it, I've been watching this thing like a hawk does a mouse (and though I feel miserably sorry for both Toshiro and Byakuya, especially Byakuya, I have to confess I do enjoy seeing what you've done with them) and am oh-so-eagerly awaiting to see exactly WHY Grimmjow wanted Karin to learn all about Claiming. I have my suspicions, but I've been proven wrong before, so I want to know SO bad it hurts! And I have a little voice in the back of my head screaming 'C'mon Grimmy, jus' fuckin' give it up an' Mate 'er al-goddamn-ready!' which is starting to get really, REALLY hard to ignore.
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From jensofia on January 23, 2011
I love your story and I love your 2 main pairings but please for the love of God no more Byakuya/Yammy rape scenes! (Unless it ends with Yammy getting castrated then it would be worth the reed.) To me it's one of those things that a so horrifying that I can't look away and I am compelled to read more.

And about the no little bats (for now at least) thing. I can see the reason why you are going with it is because Orihime was too upset to be able to conceive. From what I hear pregnancies from rape are far less likely to occur than from consensual sex because the whole thing with progesterone and esterone levels needing to be right. Since she was basically raped for 5 years it might take awhile for her to relax enough to be able to have a baby again if she wasn't all that fertile to begin with.
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From ANON - bleachfan7 on January 22, 2011
this was soooo sweet & cute. the idea of the little family formed in starkk/uki household is like a little slice of happy amidst hell. hope we find a pairing for yuzu so she's not 'fifth wheel' & she doesn't need to leave since karin will definitely need her for super pregnancy. wonder if baby is increasing or will increase her powers in some way. given a.n. about upcoming 2 chaps, presume at least pregnancy will be discovered. hope double-wedding/mating is in works for 2 main couples (hearts in eyes).

hope to see ulquihime relationship progress soon. sad there won't be a little bat-baby, but a kitty-baby is nice consolation. guess tatsuki can still be auntie to kitty baby.
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From Mirrors1984 on January 22, 2011
Guess what happened to me now...? *pouts* I reviewed and the page froze up! AHHHHHHH!!!! Anyways, I can't stand Yammy (probably since Bya can't stand him). I'm not the kind of person to skip chapters since I'm not squeamish so I read all of them in spite of warnings. Hehehehe... About your A/N! Karin is WHAT??? YAY! I can't wait to see how you'll make the baby look! I'm all hyper now!
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