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Reviews for Prize of Victory

By : NovaAlexandria

From ANON - bleachfan7 on February 23, 2011
this chap rocked. love that karen is no push over, regardless of how much stronger the opponent was & that she is able to do so much just by instinct--so cool. the scene where they cuddled in 4th & when he inspected her, claiming the bruises would be revisited on noi was the sweetest thing from grim yet. if he cares this much w/o a heart, his human self would be the perfect hubby (so sweet in his own gruff way). & can't forget szayzel's moment of weakness & his own realization he's becoming a softie.
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From ANON - Onba on February 22, 2011
Szayel getting soft? Intresting.

Hope Nniotora suffered! The sexist pig. I'm worrying about what he'll do to Ran, though.

Awesome chapter!!!
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From KiraSahari on February 22, 2011
OMG!! You made me cry!!! I was not so sure if Karin was able to return the claim! I am so happy that they are mates. Szayel reaction was unexpected, would be nice if this relationship will bring a change of heart in other Arrancars, at least it is changing Ulquiorra. Poor Noitra hahahaha he is a bastard but I never really hate him, if Matsumoto is smart enough she can keep him happy and avoid problems, I always thought that Noitra was in love with Nel, maybe Matsumoto reminds him of Nel. Knowing that Karin and Grimmy are mates is going to bring more problems to Ulquiorra, I have the impression that he sees Orihime as his mate but no so sure how that though is related to the claiming, does that mean he doesn't care she can't return the claim? mmmmmmmm Hoping that someday Orihime would be able to claim him with her powers *sigh* he did a lot of stupidities because he is only acting by instinct, he can't handle or understand feelings, he doesn't know how but I have faith he is learning little by little.
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From ANON - Kazes on February 22, 2011
Hehe I love this chappy. I had to laugh at one of the errors in there babe, you have "Comma Toast" instead of comatose hahaha. Umm there is also a spot were you've missed taking out the /b/ bold italics, accept now I can't freakin find it- curses. Stupid AFF changing the system mid-story. Loved seeing ma boy again this chapter- even if he was a naughty boy- I love you Nnoi, I wanna have your babies! Haha sorry I'ma shut up riiiight, now.
xx
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From ANON - murci on February 21, 2011
very good story. I like the karin/grim pairing and of course hime/ulqui is my favorite. Though hime is a bit off here. Yeah she got older but still no stammering, no blushing. She's strong which is okay buy just not her. Karin is okay though.
The only thing that I find disturbing is the male/male rape relationships. Yeah I'm not a fan of yaoi :P
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From ANON - Silva on February 21, 2011
*blink* Bad Szayel! Bad bad!*throws scalpels at him like darts* He's such a naughty little bitch. Anyway, Ooooohhhh, secrets coming! Can't wait. And Szayel, not alone.....hmmm, I see a panicking Karin unconsciously and accidentally drawing on Grimmjow's reiatsu to deciamate the man after he scares her, and Grimmjow showing up to tear apart the remains. Oh well, that's just what I'M envisioning, you always like to surprise me and good. Anyway, back to college, and now to get some lunch.
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From ANON - Akasha on February 19, 2011
Sorry I haven't reviewed each chapter. I came across this fic & devoured it in a sitting or two. Very dark, but compelling nonetheless. I love Ulqihime fics. I look forward to the coming chapters. Very good work :)
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From ANON - Codry on February 19, 2011
I still have some questions � please bear with me a minute
1. I cannot wait to see what advice has Grimmjow about �making someone love you�
2. I think that the scene from the end of the 23-ed chapter was cute and fluffy :)
Okay � these are not questions � hmmm

3. Are you going to make a reunion � okay � conference � I don�t know how to call it � that thing with Aizen, the espada and their pets? (because you said that the last one was about the new division)
4. � again not a question � a human, begging you to be gentle with Yuzu

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From ANON - Codry on February 18, 2011
Sooo � tell me if I got it right (I�m �creating� a summary here)
Stark has Ukitake and Nanao; Barragan has Soi Fon and Yumi (and here I have a question: Since Soi Fon is a captain, that means she�s claimed by Barragan �. But there was no �sex� between them, so no �refreshing� of the claim � I guess what I really wanna ask you: Is she claimed by Barragan?)
Hallibel has Toshiro; Ulquiorra has Orihime
Grimmjow has Karin and Yuzu; Aporro (pink haired freak) has Renji and Nemu; Yammy has � poor Byakuya;
My other question: Matsumoto was claimed by Noitora?(it�s deduced from my .. screwed up logic)

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From ANON - Codry on February 17, 2011
WOW � I was under the impression that Ukitake and Nanao were in a relationship.
Anyway I�m happy that I found your story on adultfiction :) I lost all hope with a KarinxGrimm fanfic, but now � I cannot wait for your next update.
I must confess that the first time I read the story I skipped the chapters with Byakuya&Yammy, the one with Yuri and .... ohhh, I totally forgot about the one with Soi Fon(with all due respect � I think it was beyond gross)

I�m still thinking that everything that happens between Grimmjow and Karin is sooo cute. Yeah, I know it�s strange to say that a sex scene is cute, but I just can�t help it. Let�s not forget that half of the time Grimmjow-�san� acts like a cat =))

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From FatalMars on February 16, 2011
So it took me forever to start and finish to the present point, but I did. I will say I love Korin and Grim. That is an unusual pairing, but it works. As for the M/M action I will be honest and say I barely skim it. I believe I am apart of the %1 pf females on here that does not enjoy yaoi. I tried to convince my two friends to give it a shot since once you get past that the story is impressive even if I hate Ulq and Ori immensly. What I am trying to say is you are managing to hold my attention when I would usually have quit reading and complained about the lack of hetro pairings on this site. Although I know there is stockholm syndrom I was kinda sad at how easy Korin was. Even Ori held up a better fight with here lame ass. Even though I am a but disturbed about the damage being done I am enjoying this.
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From ANON - bleachfan7 on February 16, 2011
the chats btwn grim & ulqui are always entertaining so i hope we see that next chap too. sounds like you are planning something nasty for sweet loving yuzu--noooooo!!!!

does szayzel know that karin & grim are so intuned to each others' reiatsu? if he tries something again, i hope she is able to spike quickly enough or draw on his energy since its a mating claim to kiss his/lackey's butt (& aizen has to punish him for disobeying his observation only orders).

no explanation given for lack of fertility in hime--thought it would be explained away by her rikka undoing any fertilization, or maybe stressful situation of captivity/rape impeding fertility; couples trying so hard for pregnancy can get so stressed about it that fertility is hampered for instance. i really want them to find happiness together--the idea of a happy ulqui tickles my insides--maybe he'll crack something close to a smile if he becomes a dad & hubby--will grim get ulqui thinking about changing to mating claim? that alone might win points w/hime as she's written.

look forward to next update.
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From Janiegal on February 16, 2011
omg.. so much more goodness to come from u.. joy~~ erm.. uqui's thought processes are so.. animal like.. lol.. kinda reminds me of how ichigo's dad keep calling puberty "mating season". :D poor yuzu.. i hope u don't make her suffer too much.. :X i really wanna noe wad happened to renji.. poor thing.. *kills szayel with a blunt scapel* thank you for updating so regularly as usual.. please continue to do ur best! ^^
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From ANON - xorchidx on February 16, 2011
Hi, just found your story and am really enjoying it! Is it bad that I'm skipping all the non-Grim/karin, non-Starrk stuff? I'd really want a Ukitake/Nanao/Starrk thresome, I find him so cute with Hana, there definitely has to be a little snippet with the two cuties :D. Anyways, continue with the amazing story. Good Luck!
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From ANON - beliefinkakashi on February 16, 2011
My word! With the News of Karin's pregnancy, i'm not surprised if ppl will try to clam the other two 'unclaimed' females and get them pregnant. Too bad Yuzu is not going to be together with # 1, and you said something sad is going to happen to her... >.< I hope she does not get raped. I do hope she gets a good and happy ending...
Great chapter!
Good luck!
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