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By : NovaAlexandria
  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on March 07, 2011
    fun chap. Noi got jealous at the drop of hat! absolutely the possessive abuser husband/boyfriend type. i hope as story progresses he sees proper relationships in the karin/grim & ulqui/hime (even aizen/uno since he lets her work & keep professional status) and changes his ways. i got horrid thought that maybe he rapes/kills yuzu in retaliation for his humiliation at karin's hands (seems vengeful type). that foreshadowing for yuzu is driving me nuts. she's such a good, sweet girl. just give us warning if its gruesome, 'cause i don't think i can read something really bad happening to her. if she is emotionally hurt (like they tell her that ichinii is dead or something), its more tolerable.

    i'm loving ulqui & grim more & more. szayzel/karin friendship/partnership will be interesting to see.
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  • From Mirrors1984 on March 06, 2011
    Is it bad for me to be all 'on the edge of my seat' excited to see what's going to happen after the next two chapters? I can't stop guessing what's going to happen to her! I get hyper and stuff! And I found interesting how Karin noted that a certain 'two' weren't claimed, persay (I wont say who they are since people have to read chapter! Hehehe). And Aizen came out nicely (it's rather fun writing him, since he's got that murderous/charming type of attitude that puts people on edge because you don't know what he's truly up to.) As always, can't wait to see more!
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on March 03, 2011
    the rape made me wanna cry for her. the apologizing later rang so true to battering in relationships it creeped me out. is it possible he too might slowly change his view of women & learn to let her be w/o keeping her chained & barefoot? does tesla have a thing for ran? if not, & he's just compassionate, he's my new hero (after your gin & his aid to unohana w/o her knowledge despite what horrors he's undergone). happy for next chap!
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  • From ANON - Codry on March 03, 2011
    Thank you for making Nnoitra .. err *thinking*… gentle … yeah gentle.
    Also with every update you make my dream come true :))) … I’m serious … You don’t believe me? Too bad *talk to the hand* :d

    Now … If you asked why, I might consider telling you :D

    Okay I’ll tell you: From the start I flirted with the idea of a “relationship/friendship” between Karin and Dartz …. Not romantic, just closer. I thought “What would happen if suddenly Szayel and Karin become bf” =))


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  • From Mirrors1984 on March 03, 2011
    Wow, I finally know what Karin's power is! At least if she doesn't have more, but it's still unique for her to do that. And I can't wait to see what the baby is going to look like (I like fic babies. I've got a soft-spot for them in spite of the dark theme of dead ones in my fic *wince*). As Nnoitra, a lot of people will probably be shocked by this, but I've always kinda liked him. (He's such a cruel complex character with the whole hating strong females thing and seemingly slightly perverted... I don't know. I might write something with him in the future just because of that. Heheheheh...) And Ulquiorra wanting to have babies is cute, but I wonder if he's willing just to compete with Grimmjow... So many questions, I guess I'll have to wait and see what's going to happen next! =)

    Darn it! I had to repost this review! (I luckily did the whole copy/paste thing just in case. LOL)
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  • From KiraSahari on March 01, 2011
    Love it. You know I was sad when Noitra died, I really wanted him to have a chance with Nel =( Rangiku is in heaven compared to others, she is smart, she is keeping herself alive. Noitra is not that bad, being a sexist pig is not that bad, compared to Yammy he is an angel. Looks like Karin really will be a force of change, good, the only one I really hate in bleach is Aizen, well and I didn't like Tousen too much either hehehe, Yammy to me was simply an idiot but here I am hating him with all my heart and Szayel was not one of my favorites but maybe I will change my mind but still not so sure after what he did to my beloved Renji T.T Thanks for the update, take care and hope to read you soon.
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  • From mevenia1 on March 01, 2011
    Is it terrible for me to say I really liked your characterization of Noitra in this chapter? I love that he is someone who you are never really sure how he will react whether it's lazy indifference, brutal violence or an oddly domestic contentment. Given his chauvinism and general disregard for anyone else - male or female - I thought it was great to show he's someone who can apologize with relative ease...he seemed like someone with too much pride and not enough self-awareness. I'm not trying to overlook some glaring character flaws (like chauvinism or rape) but I think in some ways this portrayal of Noitra is much more interesting than Grimmjow or Ulquiorra because most people want to like the latter two and find good things in them whereas it is easy to write off Noitra as just another bad guy. Great job!
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  • From jensofia on March 01, 2011
    Will there be another Noitra/Rangiku sex scene? From what you have hinted at in your last chapter those 2 have quite the potential to have some very hot sex if Noitra is in a good mood.

    I love your story keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Dark on March 01, 2011
    I actually liked this chapter! I'm glad he's not to abusive to Matsumoto and he got what he deserved. Great job and I can't wait to see what happens next1
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 01, 2011
    I gotta tell you, I got hooked on your story because your HMK kids first one had Unohana. Then I looked up your other stories, and this one caught my attention. Favest chappie by far was 18 (cause it centered around Unohana XP) but overall you're writing is very good, with only a few grammatical and spelling errors.

    I am getting very intrigued by where this story is going and cannot wait to read more
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  • From Janiegal on March 01, 2011
    hmm.. noitra just confuses me.. he seems kinda bipolar.. well, at least matsumoto's fate does not seem too bad.. i hope to see more grimm/karin scenes ^^ it seems like i can never get enough of them.. please keep up the good work!
    p.s.: sry im not very good at constructive reviews. i'll still show my appreciation though! :D
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  • From ANON - Song Byrde on March 01, 2011
    Okay, so I don't completely hate Nnoitra like I thought I would. Still, he's a jackass where it counts. Hoping for more of Orihime in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - juju on March 01, 2011
    I like this story and I wait impatiently for the next chapter. I have seen couples that I was not expecting what was interresting
    But may I asked: will there be chapters on Escape, to know how they survive and how you they take the news of those who are caught? if they have plans to try to get out?

    Anyway good continuation!!

    (I am a french, so sorry for mistakes/faults)
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  • From ANON - Codry on February 25, 2011
    … Ohhh … Let’s not forget about your irony.
    :) We are “clever people”

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  • From ANON - Codry on February 25, 2011
    Nice chapter :)
    At first I was afraid for Matsumoto, but since you said that it will be a light chapter, my only option is to believe you and HOPE. Can’t wait for a Rangiku Karin meeting … and I’m just as curious about The Claim Meeting: D … can you blame me?
    Also I did not forget about what you said in chapter *searching … (after 2 minutes) … found it* 16 about “Byakuya starts crossing paths with Karin”

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