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Reviews for Prize of Victory

By : NovaAlexandria
  • From ANON - Bright on October 24, 2012
    I've followed this gargantuan story for a couple years now. I enjoyed your "crossbreeding" series and checked back to see if you'd had anything new. I think the best work you did was the relationship between Grim and Karin. The whole story involving them from start to finish was great. Congratulations on finishing this chapter and I hope the sequel flows well.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on October 23, 2012
    Let me start with saying this is my first review ever on any site. When I first noticed this story it had mid 90 chapters. What caught my eye first though was the Grimmjow and Karin pairing. After the first chapter I could not stop. In about three nights I was caught up in the story and tired at work each day. While waiting for the next chapters I read your HMK trilogy and was engrossed with the tale. A similar reaction awaited your Byakuya and Orihime stories. Your writing style is phenomenal. I await the continuation of this story with well placed hope. To pass the time however, I think I will reread this tale two or three more times.
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  • From ANON - Leanne on October 23, 2012
    It has been truely awsome, Can't wait for part 2 :3
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 23, 2012
    Wow, I started reading this fic about a month ago, and while I'm usually not used to stories with sex in them (this is the first fic I've ever read through till the end on Adult Fanfiction), this was one of the most interesting fanfics I've read recently! Szayel is one of my favorite characters, and I enjoyed his characterization in this fic. I've never given much consideration to Karin as a deep character, so seeing her as the main character here was quite an interesting experience! The plot started getting more and more exciting towards the end, and I was eagerly awaiting the last 3 chapters after I finished reading the first hundred or so in about a week.

    Good job, congrats for finishing Part I, and I look forward to Part II as well! :D
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  • From satterb on October 23, 2012
    Nemu's babies sound gorgeous! And Renji being the doting uncle is sooo sweet. I've really loved this story and have happily read every last word. I look forward to part two even though it might be awhile. I think my favorite couple was Grimm and Karin, but I really enjoyed reading about Tatsuki and Tesla (tesra). Again, thank you for all your hard work on this mammoth piece of work! Take care.
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  • From Kalla on October 23, 2012
    This monster was truely a work of art. It made me cry, it made me yell out in joy. I hope, I can read the rest of the story. I think you should call Part 2 'Price of Victory' like they have to pay some sort of price because of their victory unsettled the Balance.
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  • From ANON - e on October 23, 2012
    I have followed this story for nearly a year, to see it come to an end¡ I really enjoyed reading, the "fluff" was there but also some very dramatic scenes.... i have read every chapter at least twice and have to give you tumbs up for making this scenario work (slavery and Stocolmo's sindrome turning into readable and beliavle fluffness.... not an easy feat¡)

    Now i am afraid i must forget about it for a good while and stop checking every day for updates, until time allows you to get around to publishing part 2..... good thing though, as i have finals to contend with. Please do continue, this ending....... is not an ending¡, it leaves way too many lose strings, too many things in motion and too many interrogants...and a maniac on the throne and the worlds just about to collapse¡
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  • From kadajclone on October 23, 2012
    Well, sad to see it end for the moment. Truly was a bittersweet ending as they have seemingly found a solution to the swarm but still have problems at home and some people are still suffering abuse at the hands of their masters and they are all under the rule of a mad pseudo god. Hopefully Soi fon and a few other characters will get a bit more spotlight in the sequel. This story had some ups and downs but overall I enjoyed it immensely although I have never been a fan of time skips. I am also surprised Ichigo with his freaking savior complex hasn't mounted any more rescue attempts for other claimed individuals that aren't treated well by their masters. I patiently await the sequel.
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  • From Scorpinac on October 23, 2012
    Well, I can say I thoroughly enjoyed this fic as I did your "Crossbreeding the Future" series (though I did skip past the rape scenes for my own sanity), and I eagerly await the coming of Part II, and January is fine by me. Untl then, Laters.
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  • From ANON - midnightwakeon you on October 22, 2012
    i have been fallowing this story for a very long time, when ever i seen a posted chapter it made my day just a bit better. congrats on a very well writen story im sad to see it final end but knowing their going to be a part to make it very much worth they wait of it all. thank you again for creating this story it was just perfect
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  • From Aviary on October 22, 2012
    Such a good chapter!!! I'm glad the Defense Net worked, and I can't wait see what else happens, and oh just one more chapter for part 1, I'm a little sad, but we can look forward to part 2!
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  • From ANON - bleachfan7 on October 20, 2012
    enjoyed this chap a lot. can't help but be extra pleased when ulquihime is featured. the kids are a cute bonus. ajuga & her line about daddy smelling funny & who's lefty-san had me smiling in real life. & absolutely agree that men showing good parenting skills are sexy/appealing. that goes for showing kindness to animals & treating the elderly in general but in particular their moms/grandma's with respect.
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  • From ANON - Kristin on October 15, 2012
    Finally Szayel gets a break, he does deserve one. I really enjoyed this domesticated chapter. It was great to see that Ajuga has gotten over that scene with Gin. I really loved that Ulquiorra was supportive of his son's losses and the way he made Diaemus feel better, his reward was pretty nice too. I can't wait for more! Your imagination, creativity, and writing are completely amazing and on behalf of all of your loyal readers I would like to thank you for taking the time to continue your wonderful stories. Prize of Victory and The Real King are two of my favorites. I also wanted to let you know that I love how you keep your characters in character, but also how you let them grow, accordingly, with their experiences. I liked that you had Toshiro grow a bit and, for me, it did not make him OOC or take anything away from that chapter. You're awesome and I hope you never stop writing, and that your muse is very good to you. Hope all is well with you and your family.
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  • From satterb on October 14, 2012
    These kinds of chapters were what hooked me to this story even though the plot can't move forward very well if this was all you wrote. LOL I look forward to seeing what happens next and I applaud your talent for writing even though you've got all kinds of real life going on. Just wanted to thank you for all your hard work on behalf of all your loyal readers.
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  • From Scorpinac on October 14, 2012
    When the Defence Net went up successfully and Szayel slumped in relief, you could practically hear the angelic choir singing, "Haaaaalllllelujah! Hallelujah, hallelujah, hallelujah!" Etc., etc. Looking forward to the final chapter, and I don't suppose we're ever going to get to find out just exactly what was wrong with Diaemus's vocal chords, are we? Ah, well. Laters.
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